#3# Ariya Ff: Agni sa pavitra- final part page 28 - Page 15

I never thought it that way . I can’t mix serials well . Good idea for future writings

I will try for next time .

Part 18

Commissioner : Riya please come .

Riya keeps the basket and comes there.

Riya : sorry sir I just thought to get food for my husband and etf family .

Warna mein yahan nahi ati .

Commissioner : Riya you don’t have to be sorry . Your husband works here so you can come here . But Riya Abhi Jo bhi tumne suna wooh sach hai . I will be very proud to have you as an etf officer . And I m sure etf chief and team will be too.

Riya : if I earned this position with my due merit I will be very happy to join. But if there is any kind of sympathy or softness because of people I am attached to I won’t go ahead .

Arjun knew Riya and he was proud of her. Sanya and team was equally looking her with admiration .

Commissioner : you have earned the position with all your merits and performance. Your joining letter will reach you soon .

Rathod you handle the rest formalities . Sanya so tomorrow stands to be your last day in etf . You may go back to your original office .

Sanya : sir .

All officers saluted him and commissioner sir left .

Riya : Sanya ma’an thank you so much . If not given that opportunity I am not sure I would be this Riya which I m today .

Sanya : Riya honestly I believed in your potential and nothing mark my words nothing can diminish your strengths . No wounds , no scars or no fire can burn your spirit .

Aur phir you have acp Arjun rawte as a life partner and a mentor like acp Sameer Rathod . What more do you need to be trained well .

Mahol Thoda normal hua .

Sanya: Riya you got food ?

Riya : yes .

Sanya : can we eat something before v continue?

Knowing that she is a special officer no body is behaving normal with her .

Sanya : team please kal Tak behave as if I work here as an operations and paper work support , pl rathod sir.

Sameer : let’s go the canteen then v can continue .

Everyone enjoyed the food . Arjun was still not calm .

Riya : arjun are you done for your work today ??

Arjun : ha mostly . Kyun ?

Riya : bas ese hi let’s go home together if you are done .

Arjun : ha Sam I m going home . Baki ka ghar se kar lunga.

Sameer nodded .

Ayesha: thanks Riya . Bohot achcha khana hai ,

Sanya: Riya I might have to come back .

Everyone got silent and stared at her .

Sanya : for eating such good food. Guys relax . Meine kisika encounter nahi karungi .

Ariya left and everyone got back to finishing their left over work .

Riya ; Arjun are you ok ?? Aap gusse mein lag rahe hai .

Arjun : I didn’t like the way sanya came to etf , her intentions.

Riya : arjun It did only good to me . I got trained strong . She didn’t harm me . Wooh baat alag hai that she came in a fake identity . But she never did anything wrong .

Arjun : what if wooh tumhe special officer bana leti .

Riya: arjun joh ko hua nahi uska kyun sochna. Did you talk to Rathod sir for vacation?

Arjun: time hi nahi mila. Kal karta hu .

Loved the updt.. but it was small

Glad Riya got her confidence back

Tbh i didnt liked Sanya too😆

Cont soon

Why did Sanya want to make her special officer ? Any reasons

I have developed a mixed kind of feelings here at this point. Although I don't want Riya to be completely out of ETF & join any other police sector or secret services even after accomplishing advanced level trainings successfully, I think I even wanted to see Riya volunteers for herself to be a special agent type of officer too. But, I couldn’t understand why Sanya as well as the commissioner wanted her to become a special officer. Did their motive just limit within Riya's well-being & bright career or, did they have any other specific reason for this? Although the ETF members didn’t like Sanya after the revelation of her real identity, I loved the way in which you created a suspense & mystery around her throughout the story from her entry to her actions till her getting exposed before everyone.

And honestly speaking, this chapter seemed a little bit small too. I would love to read a little longer chapter next time. Tnx for the tag. Continue soon.

Loved it dear Pinku 🤗

Awesome update 😀 just loved it

Well I loved how Riya responded to Sanya seems she too is trying to gell well with the team mates but Arjun is still not in peace

Riya is really getting bit restless but she really deserves to be in ETF after coming out strong & nothing can diminish her spirits

Waiting for the Ariya vacation now

Thanks for the Tag 🏷️

Continue soon 🤗

Sanya saw strong abilities and thought she could be one of them . Just for making a stronger team

I will try to write bigger one I promise. Sanya aur commissioner sir dono ko laga Riya had strong abilities to be a officer so ek chance liya. But Riya etf se dur hogi toh mujhe Ariya story mein mushkil hogi