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Posted: 7 years ago
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Welcome back
Superb
Can't for new place and new beginning
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Transfer?? All of them???
Awesome update
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Case solved all thinking about their partners Arjun like Riya and virat help him fab update dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Amazing updated..
But what twits.. transfer??
Like to read more ..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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i to live in benaras...will i get to meet them
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mind blowing chapter
Finally ETF slove the case
Awe chotu & rukshar both r so cute chotu was blushing
Loll now manvir fight like tom & jerry instead of shriza
Oops chotu & rukshar got scared of that cute kitten
Really I love the cute kitten so adorable
Poor riya & Aisha is totally confused by samjun behaviors
Arjun suddenly start soften & even tease riya on the other hand Sameer turn into angry young men
Oops now how sakshi will solve this?
So manvir had past which nobody knew abt it
Now virat going to help Arjun to win riya interesting
Continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow...
That was awesome
Love the update
Just hope Sam realise his feel soon...
Pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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CHAPTER 50a

Com: yes, transfer, here (he gave Sameer a white envelope) in this are tickets and place you are going to stay

Sa: but sir, sudden transfer?

Com: I will tell you later when you get there, but you will be undercover for 3 months

A: undercover? For three months? Why so long?

Com: I will tell you when I get there

Ay: sir, you are coming too?

Com: for a while only, my wife wanted to go on a vacation so half work half vacation

R: but still sir, where will we stay?

Com: my childhood friend's house, he is willing to help with your mission

S: but sir, what is the mission?

Com: I will tell you that in benaras but don't worry your houses here will stay the same after you come back

A: but the cases here?

Com: the police will solve them, what do you think; only you can solve a case, others can not do it?

Rathor smirked and Choree looked away holding their smile, Ayiza, Sid and Virman almost burst out laughing while Sakshi wasn't really paying attention at their conversation, but Riya laughed at that comment but stopped when she saw Arjun was glaring at her

Com: stop glaring at her, that's why you don't have a girl friend

A: sir, we can talk later about my private life later but why do we need to go there?

Com: top secret, so stop asking and get packing, you guys need to board the plane day after tomorrow, I am giving you guys off today and tomorrow so you all get ready

Man: but sir, our passport, visa?

Com sir: who doesn't have a passport? Show hands

No one showed their hands

Com sir: good, come at the airport with your passport, you will get the visa there at 8 am and anymore questions?

S: but sir, why is the mission top secret?

Com sir: you will get all the answer in Benares, see you all there, I am going home now, see you in a few days and someone is going to pick you up, you will find out who

The commissioner left from there leaving the team in questions and confusion, but before he went outside he nodded to Sid who nodded back so the only person who knew about this was Sid

Sh: sir, what now?

S: do I have to say everything? Go home and start packing, and be early at the airport, and there before 8, damn it (irritated)

A: Rathor, I really think you got some influence of me in you, this line was suppose to be mine and this line should be yours, Rawte stop yelling at your team mates and go get ready yourself first before taunting

Sameer grimaced at Arjun's choice of words knowing he is right while the rest of the team minus Virat and Sakshi were standing with their mouth open at Arjun's comment

Arjun just smirked at the faces of the team and put his sunglasses on (Arjun's style) and said: Siddarth, I am leaving in 5 minutes so if you want to go with me, be in the parking place otherwise I will go alone

Sameer went to his cabin in a fuming state while Arjun went to his cabin but not before looking at Riya who was still shocked from the sudden change in Arjun's comment

He left from there

Sid: why does he always blackmail me with going alone? (He noticed Sakshi looking pale and not paying attention so he went towards and shook her little and said: Sakshi are you ok?

Sa: huh... (She came out of her shocked state and looked at Sid intently)


Riya and the others noticed her state and went to her

R: kya hua Sakshi? Are you ok?

Sa: woh... Did commissioner sir say we are going to benaras or was I hearing things?

L: he said benaras all right and that too day after tomorrow, we need to the packing and we just took a cat in. Omg, I am having a break down

Sh (suddenly a light bulb in his brain lit up): hey but Sakshi, you are from banares right? You must be so happy to go back home, you should be our guide there and let us meet your family

Sa(absently): hmm (in her mind how can I say that I don't know anything about benares and my family is Di only and M and I don't even know where he lives)

Riya noticed her situation and decided to change the topic: what are we going to do with our Cutie Pie? We just got her

Ay: it won't be good for her to move away just now, she might hate us

Vir: why don't you ask someone to baby sit her for a while?

Ch: who?

Vir: your girlfriend dr Ruksar

Man: she is not yet his girlfriend, stop making stuff up like you always do. She didn't say anything about liking him

Vir: I am not making stuff up and I never do, I am stating a fact, he likes her and she likes him back

Man: you wouldn't even know a fact even if it hit you on your face Mr Chep (angry)

Vir: dekho Miss Bandariya do you have a better plan or like always you are only going to talk? (Irritated)

Ay: stop it both of you, Choti go stand with Shree and Mr V go stand with Chotu. God, I can't believe that you two are worse than Liza and Shree, they aren't even fighting that much anymore

Ch: virat do you really think dr Rukshar likes me?

V: of course bro, I can tell that Dr. Ruksar...

Rukshar came in at the same time

Ruk: me what?

Chotu and Virat were tongue tied and Manvi just shook her head

L: nothing, Rukshar we just waiting for you

Ruk: me? Why?

Ay: actually we have a cat actually a kitten, we found her just yesterday and we took her in but today we found out that we need to go to Benaras for three months and it's so suddenly that we don't know what to do so I wanted to ask you if you could take care of her while we are gone

Ruk: are you all going?

R: yes, I hope I am not burdening you with such a request

Ruk: nahi toh, we are friends right? We should help each other but is it necessary for all of you to go to Benares? (She slightly looked at Chotu)

Man: yes, commissioner sir's orders and that too three months, we have to spend there

Ruk: three months? For such a long time?

Sh: it's a mission so we have to do it

Ch: it's our work

Rukshar didn't know how to react to this news

At the same time Samjun came out of their cabin

S: Dr. Rukshar, you here? Is something wrong?

Ruk: no, I just came to say hi

S: ok, I suppose you already heard that we all are going to Benaras. I wanted to thank you for helping us with the case and even if we didn't had the time to work together, we acknowledge your help

Ay: sir, we are already close, she just isn't close to you or Arjun sir (sarcasticly), and she is going to take care of our kitten

S: you mean the cat you found on the street

A: Rathor, it still is kitten but you couldn't even tell if cat is male or female when it's born

S: Rawte (angry) stop making stuff up

A: whatever, listen Ayesha you can bring your kitten too if you want, you can put it in the pet carrier and we aren't going overseas so the plane will land in a few hours

Ay: really sir? I can bring her along?

A: yes, should I repeat or should I take back what I said?

Ay: no, no sir, thank you sir. I am so happy, sorry Rukshar I didn't mean to...

Ruk: it's ok, I am glad that it worked out

S: damn it rawte, who is the boss here?

A: you but I am still second in command

Ruk: sir, I have work to do, I will take my leave now

S: ok

L: Rukshar, will you come at the airport to see us off?

Ruk: ok, at what time?

Sh: before 8 am

Ruk: ok, see you later

Rukshar left from there with a heavy heart but soon Chotu followed

Ch: sir, I need to go check my bp, I will be back sir

He ran as if his life depended on it well in this case it is

S: since when does he have bp problem?

A: how would I know? Does anyone know if he has problems?

Sh: no sir, only heart will know what problem it is

Samjun looked confused at the comment

Meanwhile Chotu ran after Rukshar, she was almost at the parking place when chotu almost bumped into her, she got shocked so she turned around, they shared an eyelock but she broke it off first

Ch: Ruksharji, woh I wanted tell you but today only commissioner sir said that we need to go on a mission and that too for three months, I didn't know that but it is a mission and we have to follow our protocol and we... we (he talked in one breath)

Ruk: calm down, your bp and stress level will be high, just take deep breathe and blow out, are you calm now (he nodded) I know that all about the police job and everything but because it's new and it's so sudden, we just became friends and now that I was going to try something new but now it seems that it is impossible

Ch: new? What new?

Ruk: I wanted to tell you that I like you

Ch: what? You... you like me? Really? (Shocked at first then happy)

Ruk: yes, I know that we just met and everything but I know that you are a good person and you care a lot about people around you so I thought... (She became silent for a while) but it doesn't matter now because you are going so far and so long

Ch: we can try to be in a long distance relationship and I really liked to for a long time but I couldn't tell you because I thought that you would see me as a stalker and I didn't want to put the new friendship in trouble so I going to ask you will be you be my long distance relationship girlfriend?

Rukshar was shocked at first but soon compose herself

Ruk: you are sure? Ok but we will see the first month if we are meant to be for each other or not so let's not get our hopes up ok? and let's not tell anyone yet, when we will are sure than we should tell them

Ch: ok, do you have my mobile number? (She nodded no) here is my number

They exchanged their numbers and didn't talk for a while not knowing what to say

Ch: I think I should go, otherwise sirs will not spare me, and these two days we won't be able to meet but can you come to the airport?

Ruk: ok, I already promised the others so I will be there

Ch: ok (still not leaving) (shy)

Ruk: Chotu, your bosses will be waiting for you

Ch: oh no, if they get angry toh meri kher nahi (then I am toast)

Ruk: are you so scared of them?

Ch: yes

Ruk: but why? They seem nice

Ch: I will tell you later but first I will go back to office otherwise I will be burnt toast, bye

He ran so fast that Rukshar couldn't believe her eyes

Ruk: I hope that I made a right decision at this time

She went to her clinic smilingly

When Chotu reached the office again, everyone was getting ready to leave

S: Chotu, do you have bp problem?

Ch: no sir

S: then why did you run after dr Rukshar?

Ch: I wanted to know if I have bp problem

S: so do you have problem?

Ch: no sir, I reached on time

Seeing Sameer was asking too many questions Ayesha intervened

Ay: sir, we can ask questions when we meet at the airport, shall we leave?

S: ok, you can go, and remember...

S+Ay: don't be late

Sameer glared at Ayesha but didn't say anything to her while Ayesha just smiled at her victory

S: Mr Virat, I am going, are you coming with me?

V: yes, Sameer sir, I am coming with you

S: then hurry up (he went outside)

Virat quickly said his byes and followed Sameer

A: Siddarth, let's go (he looked at Riya but Riya didn't notice him then he also left from there)

Sid: ok Arjun (he looked Sakshi but she was not looking at him) bye everyone

They also left from there

Sh: thank god, they left so Chotu what happened?

Ch: what happened? (Trying not to understand about his meaning)

Sh: between you and your doctor ji

Ch: it's a secret, will tell later

L: come on why being so secretive between friends?

Sa: maybe being secretive is better for now (hinting at Shriza so they couldn't say anything)

Ay: I agree, Chotu when you are ready you tell us

R: but for now let's go

Man: so what are we waiting for Christmas? Let's go

They also left from there and went home to prepare for the journey that's about to begin, for some a new beginning

These two days passed in a blink, some slept well some didn't, for a few love sickenes but for one of them was it tension and that person or Angel is Sakshi

Sa(in her mind): why isn't anyone answering, not even M or mentorji is reacting, I don't know anything about that place, and maa and baba don't know what will happen now?

Everyone was waiting at the airport to board the plane when Rukshar came to say goodbye, they said there goodbyes and she left from there, chotu almost got disappointed but then he got a message from Rukshar, he got happy again

They boarded the plane, Samesha sat together, and Liza sat with Virat, Shree with SAkshi, MAnvi with Riya and Sid, and Chotu with Arjun

The whole ride was for Arjun, Ayesha and Sakshi a torture for various reasons, for Arjun was because he wanted to sit next to Riya, for Ayesha was Sameer didn't even talk he only nodded and fell asleep and Sakshi didn't know what to expect in Benaras

The plane landed and they got their bags and the pet carrier and went out of the airport, where a surprise waited for them

precap: meeting new people and meeting M and reason behind the transfer

thanks for all the likes and comments for the prev chapter, i hope you like this one as well
i wrote this in a hurry so sorry for any mistakes


sorry for the late post
my internet connection has been bad for awhile
so sorry about that


Edited by VirMan505 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
Haaawww itne Dino k baad update... Koi na update mila to sahi...
Super duper update... Achanak transfer se aisa lag rha h k kuch na kuch chut rha h iss transfer k piche... Hmmm
Aur sakshi our angel uska bhi Magic kaam nhi kr rha Matlab definitely kuch chut rha h but I think Jo bhi cchut RHA h uska paa Sid ko h...
Chotu rukhsaar convo masst...
Hmmm toh sakshi k Mr. M ki entry hone wali h... I think Mr. M nd sakshi ki bonding dekh sid sochega k Maine ye mission q liya?? Apne hi pairo pe kulhadi q maari??? Hehehehe...
Continue soon and send me pm also...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yeh Banaras ka Kya chakkar hai aisa kaun say case hai chotu ruksaar convo nice but missing ariya scene nice update dear eagerly waiting for nxt thanks

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