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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Amazing. Continue soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
awsome update

love it

Chalo ruksar n chotu ki story bhi aage badi..

hmm new case n mission kafi intresting lag Raha he..

Sakshi ke Mr m ki entry hogi..

plz continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
Superb amazing update
Thanks for update
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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I love ur story...
Plz update soon
And also can you pm me about your further updates...
Thank u :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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They r going to meet M nice
It's getting more interesting
Awesome update
Cont soon
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awesome
loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
Pls continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome updated..
Interesting ..
Thanks for pm dr..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Brilliant chapter
Oh god ETF got transferred in banaras for 3 months
But the mission is still secret as commissioner sir haven't told ETF
Loll Arjun dialogue anger Sameer & made laugh others
But sakshi is worried as she doesn't know anything abt banaras & even M & mentor ji isn't answering her
Wow finally chotu & rukshar confess their feelings for each other but they r going to try
Also keeping secret from others as first they want be sure abt their relationship
Wow Arjun gave permission to Aisha they can take kitten with them
Loll Arjun was upset as he wanted to sit with Riya on the other hand Aisha got bore as Sameer didn't answer much
Continue plz
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

CHAPTER 50b

As soon as they got out of the airport, they saw a band playing "Mumbai se aaya mera dost as soon as the band saw them, a small girl gave the girls flowers and shook hands with the guys and went away

S: what is going on?

A: if I knew I wouldn't be here standing with you

Suddenly a bouquet was infront of Sakshi which was made of orchids, someone jumped from behind that bouquet

M: surprise, A

Sakshi didn't move for a while but after a few seconds she ran to him and hugged him and cried, he hugged her back

The girls and choree knew that he must be Sakshi's bff while Samjun and Virat were confused who the guy was while Siddarth was getting jealous by the each second

After a while he broke the hug and said: how much are you going to cry, are you trying to get even for two years? (He wiped her tears)

Sa: very funny (she hugged him back)

M: are you going to introduce me to your colleagues or not? They might get impatient and might getting the wrong idea (mohit sehgal from miley jab hum tum)

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Sa: oh haan I forgot, this is Samrat Mohit Shergill, my childhood friend and best friend until forever plus my colleague and M this is ...

M: let me guess this is Acp Sameer Rathor, head of ETF (he shook his hand); this is Acp Arjun Suryakant Rawte second in command (he shook his hand too), Virat Vadhera undercover agent, Liza D' Cruz forensic expert, Ayesha Kapoor ammunition expert and undercover agent, Chotu Patil encounter specialist, MAnvi and Shree Sen the twins technical experts, Riya Mukherjee the research specialist and last but not the least Siddarth Kapoor third in command and ex commando (he shook all of their hands but at the end when he shook Sid's hand Sid almost crushed his hand but M didn't react knowing why he did that, he just gave him a smile and continued shaking his hand until Sid let go of his hand)

Sameer was the first one who spoke:

How do you know our names?

M: A already told me who you are but most importantly commissioner Sir already told me that you were coming so I am here to pick you up

A: then you should know why we are transferred here?

M: that's not for me to say but the commissioner sir will tell as soon as he will get here so for now shall we go, I called a bus because we are too many and it will be much better this way

Sid: and why is that? And why should we listen to you? (Angrily)

Sa: arre because we are undercover and commissioner sir already said that we would get picked up by someone we know right Arjun sir?

A: well in this situation Sakhsi knows him so I agree with her but what is wrong with you (indicating to Sid)

Sh: looks like Sid is turning into Arjun sir number 2 while living with him (he said to Chotu but Arjun heard him)

A: what Mr Sen? (He looked at Shree strongly)

Sh: n... n...nothing sir (sweating)

S: let's save this chitchat for later for now let's go, we have been standing here for a half hour now

Shree in his mind thanked Sameer for his interference for he knew he would be toast otherwise

They all went to the bus and sat inside, shriza sat beside virman in the back so they wouldn't fight, Chotu sat next to Sid, SAmeer next to Ayesha and Arjun next to Riya while SAkshi sat next to M (Samrat)

The ride was torture for Sid because he saw Sakshi holding M's hand and she was leaning on his shoulder but for Arjun the ride was enjoyable because riya fell asleep, the two days were so hectic that she couldn't sleep and the plane ride was short so she couldn't sleep too, her head was bouncing forward so Arjun put her head on his shoulder, she found a good position she fell asleep deeper while Arjun closed his eyes and fell asleep too. Chotu was busy with his mobile while Shriza fell asleep too while Virman were looking outside watching the scenery, well with Samesha, Ayesha was playing with the cat much to annoyance and irritable for Sameer, he was busy with his mobile but he didn't like cats so he got irriataed with the meowing

S: Miss Ayesha, how long are you going to play with that cat?

Ay: sir, if you are so annoyed you can go sit somewhere else, two days long I neglected her but I am trying play with her now, I was so annoyed in the plane because of someone snoring next to me

S: how dare you? I don't snore

Ay: yes, you do sir

S: no, I don't

Ay: yes,

S: no

Ay: yes

S: no

They didn't realize their face come close, only when the bus made honking sound; they realized their position and moved back focusing on what they were doing before but this time embarrassed

After a while the bus stopped and they arrived at their destination

Hearing the sound of stopping, Riya woke up first and saw that she was leaning on Arjun's shoulder, she looked at him closely first but got startled at thinking that he was handsome she moved back to her seat

M: we arrived, everybody step out

One by one everyone got out; when they saw the house they were shocked to see a mansion not a house

http://alyssachia.info/wp-content/uploads/2017/11/pretty-mansions-pretty-houses-estherxie.jpg (ps this is fiction I don't know if there is a place like that in Benares)

Sh: wow, Satyi sundara

Ch: a house with a pool

Sh: I think you mean a mansion

L: really lovely

V: tip top

Ay: mind blowing

Sa: wow, not bad

Man: satyi sundara (beautiful)

Samjun just nodded, they are too self-image headed to acknowledge that it was a pretty sight and Sid didn't want show that he was insecure

Riya stood with open mouth looking at her surroundings, Arjun looked at her expressions so he decided to tease her, and he went and stood beside her and said:

Miss Mukherjee, close your mouth otherwise flies will go in it

Riya looked at Arjun with wide eyes; he just chuckled and went back to his place

M: welcome to my humble home

Sh: humble? This is a mansion

M: really? It is where I stay so it has to be my home

Ay: do you live here alone?

M: no, I live with my family

Sa: does she know that I am coming? I am really excited to meet everyone

M: yes, and she has been like that since she knew that you were coming, so let's go inside, my family is very eager to meet you

They went inside and were shocked to see the interior was more beautifull than from outside

https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTZFN_y7rc6UtbEC1fuRwEUZwQRjoFuQHgzutQwr12TTAkBppLR

But before they could say anything, a girl came running towards them and stopped right infront of them, Sakshi looked at her and asked M if she was the one

M nodded

Sakshi hugged the girl and so did the girl

M: I will like to introduce Gunjan SAnaya Shergill, my wife

Almost everyone minus Samjun: wife

(sanaya irani)

Gerelateerde afbeelding

https://i.pinimg.com/236x/c1/ff/07/c1ff073497b2e2454bcf56099128d5f8--sanaya-irani.jpg


Sid: you are married?

M: should I not have gotten married? I have been married fot one year and two months and counting

G: hi, I am gunjan (after the hug scene she introduced herself)

After the introduction, they went to sit on the sofa; Riya spoke for the first time:

You two live alone in this big house?

G: no, we live here with my sister and her husband

M: technically we live with my best friend and his wife

Ay: wait, your best friend married her sister and she (pointed at Gunjan) married you, the friend of the best friend

M: yeah something like that, A is my BFF and he is only my best friend

Someone suddenly walked in and said: purana dost mila ki nahi naye dost ko bhuladiya (since you met your old friend, you forgot your new friend)

https://encrypted-tbn0.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSNOmKLUZiM0zjoZcdlvlrv1JzuCEsA0nLe7vxckbNXKslxdKnx (barun sobti as Arnav)

Everyone turned and saw a quite handsome man standing with a smirk on his face, the girls were murmuring about how handsome he was while the boys were jealous at their behavior while SAkshi went and said:

Don't be jealous, Mr Arnav, I am just temporarily here, after I leave, you can have him back

Ar: you must be Sakshi; you are exactly the way Samrat told me about you. You are quite beautifull but unfortunately I am already married. But let's be friends, it is much better to be friends with me than with him (pointed at M) (he forwarded his hand)

Sa: really? How so? (She shook his hand)

Ar: because I am more handsome than him, and I don't have anyone to gossip about him, my wife and his wife take his part only and a beauty as you should be friends with someone like me

M: aren't you being too flirty?

Ar: hey it's not flirting, I am giving her a compliment

M: tell that to your wife

Ar: don't tell me she is standing behind me

Sa: I think so

Arnav closed his eyes and turned to see his wife fuming with anger, Everyone turned even Samjun who were wanted to see who she was, thye got shocked to see someone looking like Gunjan standing infront of them, they looked at Gunjan and back to Arnav's wife

Gunjan chuckled and said: we are twins; she is older by 2 minutes
the gang and Samjun looked at her and mumbled an ok

Ar: Khushi, darling, it was just a joke

Kh: really Mr Raizada, it didn't sound it to me like that

Ar: listen Khushi, I was just complimenting her

Kh: haye devi maiya, see what my husband is doing, infront of his wife he is complimenting a girl and he saying that he wish he wasn't married, haye devi maiya, why did this happen to me? (She put her hand on her head and did as she was really hurt)

Arnav knowing his wife dramatic gestures, he knew that she was kidding and said: wifey, I know that you love your drama's but shouldn't you welcome the guest first?

Khushi looked at Arnav angrily and said: guestsss not guest, there are more people here

Arnav looked at her sheepsily and said: I know ok, I just wanted to meet my competition

https://secure-media.hotstar.com/r1/thumbs/PCTV/54/1000007754/PCTV-1000007754-hsm.jpg (sanaya irani as khushi)

Kh: what do you mean?

Ar: I wanted to know who Samrat's best friend was so I could compare myself with that person, but it looks like I already lost

Sa: I am maybe his bff but one thing I cant be

Ar: and what is that?

Sa: a brother

Ar: really now? Look like I am still in the competition anyway let's meet the girls (Khushi glared at him) I mean the rest of them


precap: secret meeting


here guys finally posted, my internet connection has been really bad, and if any mistakes then sorry, i wrote in a hurry

pms will be send later
sorry for the late update
thanks for all the likes and comments for the prev chap

hope you like this one as well

Edited by VirMan505 - 7 years ago

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