The Wait (Ariya FF) part-23 updated (page-44) - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
amazing updateee..
interesting too read more..
continue soon..
waiting for next..
updateee..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice update dear
Love it
Next time thoda badawala update dena
Eagerly waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb update dear plz pm me next time eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64
Wow dear so nice
Loved choree convo it was too emotional
Par bahoth chotusa tha
Next time bada wala dena haa
And riya ki entry wala teaser jaldse jald dena
And this not fare yar tumne pm nahi kiya par pls agli bar mat bhulna ok
Cont soonish
Bye take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Superb amazing update
Thanks for update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
Apologies for the late reply, I read it last night hiding under blanket and couldn't reply 😆 ok the hospital is shady. Twice is no accident, though I wonder if two critical patient died in there and their families are speaking up now what theh did to Riya. ChoRee talking about her was so sweet,poor guys. Wonder how long it will take for others to catch up as to why the men in the team are so gloomy.
Lovely writing. Update soon,can't wait!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: sana1819786

Wow dear so nice
Loved choree convo it was too emotional
Par bahoth chotusa tha
Next time bada wala dena haa
And riya ki entry wala teaser jaldse jald dena
And this not fare yar tumne pm nahi kiya par pls agli bar mat bhulna ok
Cont soonish
Bye take care

Next time pakka bada part ;-) sorry about forgetting to pm and yes teaser posting now ^_^
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Posted: 7 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

Apologies for the late reply, I read it last night hiding under blanket and couldn't reply 😆 ok the hospital is shady. Twice is no accident, though I wonder if two critical patient died in there and their families are speaking up now what theh did to Riya. ChoRee talking about her was so sweet,poor guys. Wonder how long it will take for others to catch up as to why the men in the team are so gloomy.

Lovely writing. Update soon,can't wait!

Thank you 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Hello Ariya lovers ;-) like i had promised here is the first glimpse of Riya 's comeback as a teaser (^_-) so sorry if it is too much fictional but i wanted something like this to happen in the show since Riya died so i wrote it here. (bear with it :-P)
Also i love Rathore - Ayesha so you will too get to read their love story with Ariya :-* Enjoy.!



The Wait
Teaser---
"pura room achhe se check Karo. Har ek file, har ek paper ko double check Karo. Hospital me kya chal raha hai ye yahin se pata chalega.
Shree vo computer se sare data check Karo. Fast."
Rathore ordered, as soon as his whole team barged inside the secret room and all spread out starting their search operation in every corner of the room.
"ye toh kuch medicines ki requirement lists hai."
Ayesha murmured while checking a file.
"aur yahan sayad medicines prepare karne ki processing likha hai. Ye sare formulas and all.."
Sakshi added checking upon another file.
Both nodded their heads at each other and resumed their work.
Chhotu was checking the drawers, when he got something among few papers and stood up.
" Sir, mujhe ek note book mila hai jisme kuch logon ke naam likhe hain."

"Ye kahin wohi notebook toh nahi jiski baare me Raghu marne se pehle baat Kar raha tha? Chhotu check Karo Usme kahin bhi Raghu ka naam likha hua hai kya.?"
Arjun asked thoughtfully, then went back to the file he was reading.
"Dekhta hun sir."
Replied chhotu, and flipped over the pages of that notebook.
"haan sir, iske piche Raghu ka naam likha hai."
He declared few minutes later.
"iska matlab ye unn patients ke naam hai Jo jinda hai, per doctors ne unhe mara hua bol diya hai.? "
Ayesha piped in, curiously.
Chhotu looked at her, then at the notebook, in surprise.
"Per ye toh kuch 30 se upar honge log."
All turned their heads to him that instant , stunned.
"kya.? 30 se upar.?"
Rathore muttered in shock.
"haan sir."
Chhotu confirmed his doubt.
"itne Sare logon ko duniya ke liye mara hua batake, ye doctors unke sath kya kar rahe hain? Abhi kahan honge ye sab? Aur zinda bhi hai ya..?"
Sakshi blabbered in disbelief, thus all fell silent afterwards?

"Hum jitna soch rahe the ye sab usse bhi kuch bada kar rahe hain Rathore."
Arjun chirped eyeing him intently,and Rathore silently agreed to him.
"ek min... Chhotu,Usme Jo naam likhe hain jara ek ke baad ek padhna."
Shree spoke, with his eyes fixed on the computer screen.
"haan Aakash chhabra, Rupesh Kumar, Anjali Taneja, Dev Mathur.. Isme toh Anita ji ke bete ka naam bhi hai."
Chhotu murmured, astonished.

"Sir, notebook me Jo patients ke naam hai, yahan unki puri details hai. Jaise ki vo kis din hospital me admit hue the, unhe kya bimari thi sab Kuch, Vo bhi unke photo ke sath."
Shree explained, hence Rathore came and glanced at the screen briefly.
"ek kaam Karo chhotu tum sare naam padhte jao, aur Shree check Karo kya sabke details available hai?
Agar kuch extra patients ka naam nikalta hai toh usse note down Karo. Quick."

"yes sir."
Both shree and Chhotu said in union, before going back to their work.
"Rathore."
Arjun called out.
"kuch mila Rawte.?"
Rathore approached him quickly.

"ye dekho, Kuch foreign companies ke naam pe presentation ready kiya jaa raha tha, deal ke liye . companies ki list hai isme. " Arjun handed him few papers.

"kis cheez ki deal.?"

"ek medicine ki."
Then Arjun thought something, before continuing speaking.
"ab kuch kuch samajh me aaraha hai Rathore.
Inn logon ne kisi medicine ki khoj ki hai, Jo na India na kahin bahar available hai.
Ye presentation dikha ke Jo bhi foreign company zyada bhav dega, usse vo medicine bech diya jaayega. Lekin ye presentation adha hi hua hai, pura nahi. "

" itna chori chhupe kaam ho raha hai, upar se crime kiya hai inn logon ne. Toh vo medicine koi achhe kaam ke liye toh ni hoga for sure. "
Rathore shook his head.

" Exactly. Medicine koi achhe purpose ke liye hota toh doctors itna bada racket ni chalate, Vo bhi hospital me. "

" Per ek baat samajh me ni aaya, medicine ki deal se unn masoom patients ka kya lena dena hai.? "

" lena dena hai Rathore.
Medicine naya hai, toh Zahir si baat hai uski testing kiye bina kisiko ni bech sakte.
Yaad hai Raghu ne statement me kya kaha tha? Ki usse aese patients pe najar rakhne ke liye kaha jaata tha jiski khabar lene wala koi na ho, ya jiski pariwar walon ko uske bachne ki umeed Kam ho ya doubt ho.
Kyunki aese logon ki maut se kisiko Shaq ni jaayega, aur doctors aaram se patient ke jaise dikhne wale kisi dusre admi ko uska face mask pehna ke mara hua bata sakte hain.
Aur Jo asli patient hain unpe ye medicine ki testing ki jaa rahi hai. "

" matlab ho sakta hai, abhi tak jitno ki maut hui hai unki maut ki wajah vo medicine ho.? "

" ho sakta hai. "

Both Rathore and Arjun sighed, when Rathore realised chhotu had stopped speaking, and Shree, Ayesha were calling him again and again.

" chhotu kya hua? Ek toh ye computer itna slow chal raha hai, upar se tum kyun ruk gaye.? "
Shree cringed.
" chhotu, Shree kuch keh raha hai."
Ayesha tried to shake him, but he was standing like a statue, eyeing the notebook blankly.

"Chhotu.?"
Both of their chiefs came standing near them, while Rathore shook him causing chhotu to jerk up with fresh tears rolling down of his eyes.
Rathore softened a little.
"kya hua hai chhotu.?"

"Sir vo vo..."
Chhotu stammered pointing at the notebook, then wiped his tears with his palm.
Arjun took the notebook from him and checked the front en back of it,but found nothing.
Taking a glance at chhotu's state he went through the patient's names, Rathore too joined him.
After some 2 pages Arjun suddenly stiffed on reading a particular name in the 3rd page, and he rechecked the list to ensure he read the name right.
The creased confused lines from Rathore's forehead disappeared, as soon as his eyes fell on the same name, hence he took the notebook from Arjun staring at the name blankly.

"guys kya hua? Sab suddenly itna tensed kyun hogaye.?"
Sakshi asked confusingly, specially eyeing Arjun.
"Sir, kiska naam likha hai Wahan.?"
Ayesha asked in a low voice.

"Riya Mukherjee."
Rathore replied, still in a daze, whereas Shree stood up from his chair that instant.
Sakshi and Ayesha looked at each other, then at their team members.

They may not know what attachment the girl had in their lives, but they knew the name.
They knew why Shree and Chhotu used to be silent sometimes in between their chit-chats, why Rathore used to look away at the mention of that brave girl whom he failed to save,why a tough guy like Arjun Rawte's face used to soften at her one mention.
And now by looking at their faces they could see the emotional trauma they were going through ;though it was hard to fetch any changes on Arjun's face, but then sakshi knows him a little after all.

"Per.. Ye Koi aur bhi toh ho sakti hai."
Ayesha murmured and Rathore looked up to her nodding in understanding.
"shree, pehle Chhotu ko Pani pilao."
"ji sir."
Shree blinked back his tears and took the glass of water from the table, when his eyes moved to the computer screen in front of him.

The next thing all heard was the breaking sound of the glass that scattered on the floor in pieces and turned around to witness a stunned Shree taking few back steps abruptly.
"Shree.?"
Arjun looked puzzled, while others went forward towards him.

"Sir ye kaise ho sakta hai.?"
Shree gulped, sounding in disbelief.
Everyone followed his gaze to the screen and their doubts were clear now.

"ye toh wohi hai."
Sakshi's lips parted a little in shock.
Rathore couldn't blink his lashes from the details of the patient no - 39 Riya Mukherjee, displaying on the screen.
Chhotu now smiled faintly, getting to see her face Again.
And Arjun leaned over the table to take a closer look at the photo of the patient.
Dressed in the hospital robe and an oxygen mask over the face , the girl laying on the bed was none other than Riya, and he suddenly remembered the day he had closed her eyes taking her as dead.
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Edited by muskan760 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Awesome teaser
Plzz cont soon

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