NEW! Arjun/Riya (Ariya) FF: Strings of Desire- Note p34 URGENT - Page 6

Originally posted by: .Avengers.

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Let me let out a ravan laugh AHAHAHAHHAAHHA😆😆🤣

The chapter (the second half mainly) is Arjun Khadoos Rawtes punishment for all the fics I have read where he was a dick to Riya, for the lack of better word. Since he's here as a gentleman who most likely murder others than put them blame of his sexual attraction/frustration to a poor girl, he shall continue to suffer in the purgatory of "couple's retreat"😆 seriously, mistake or other wise, how these two didn't think that theme of love and PDA won't be the main star of a couple retreat??! Ok ok blame it to the exhaustion.

On phone but I will answer your questions huehue. Yes I am aware and I find the whole "I'll be an asshole to this woman since she's an easy target" trope so annoying and unrealistic. I don't see someone like Riya taking shit like that lying down and I cannot digest writing a man like that. LOL yes exhaustion yes

Starting from the start, if dreams are our way of psyche than Arjuns left me a bit confused? Or maybe not- he still misses roshni, still loves her (duh). She's still in his senses overpowering everything else. But but- the debris is his current state of mind and life after she was killed. And then roshni push him off a cliff?! Is it again the metaphor that how he's pushing himself into a dark path to avenge her or the heart cloaking itself behind roshnis presence and pushing him off the cliff of love? 😛 apologies for the cheesiness. But you get my point.

Now the horror which is treasure hunt 🤣 so much happened in the last few hours and the ignorance of Shree led them to this hell hole. You described Arjun perfectly. Even without the tragedy of his past, he comes across as a blunt, brash guy who don't mince his words and hide his emotions under 50layers of poker face. Our core values don't change no matter what+ I remember that Ganesh chaturthi fb of roshni Arjun where she offered him prasad and he refused and then kissed her forehead. Probably the last time he saw her alive. That fb also showed he reserve his softness for very few people who are close to him (Sam rosh) and is a brick wall for the rest of world. No wonder this is a nightmare for him, socializing and doing pda with his 'wife'. I am so glad they chucked the (or rather you did) mangalsutra sindoor nonsense, and Riya true to the value was the one who didn't want them to use for a charade of professional life. What more interesting me for a reader is her getting annoyed with the hunt nonsense and the promotion of love all around, her irritation with the announcer lady😆 once again, never read that in any fics.

Imagine the worst, screechy voice on a mic and then ask yourself who won't be annoyed Ababa hah 😆

I see Riya as a consumate professional. True to her cool logical disposition, I see her mark a clear distinction between professional and personal and I don't see her as the kind of person who'll enjoy such things while she's working - a) because she's working and b) because it weakens her resolve to stay away from him but more on that in the next chapter anyways

Two questions-.

Do Shree and Chotu has any idea or Riya and Arjun? Will they be Cupid?

Explosion means literal explosion right? Bombs and all? Cause I can't believe the first kiss will be a lie (well not really but you get my point). It's not what they would do, case be damned.

Idk time will answer both your questions.

Regarding the suspect, how long the murder has been going on? If I assume 1or 2 week what are the odds that same couple would be there for both the murder? Not every couple can take time off for small romantic vacation every week. It's like Ariya (going by riyas speech) thinking it's one of the couple but if it's some one from hotel staff they won't participate and they won't know who's the suspect, right?

Glad you caught that. I have been neglecting the murder to focus more on the sexual tension and character establishment without doing a traditional character sketch as seems to be the norm in this forum. Now that I've established this, I will focus on the murder and the sexual tension in equal parts... But more on that in the later chapters...

Don't laugh, but last night I tried to search death by drowning. When I say try I mean it was 3am (my standard Time really) and the first search showed these horrifying pictures of corpses and skeleton in water floating. I barely stopped myself from yelling and of course, the search ended there. But still, I stick to my earlier beliefs😛 some clue regarding that, plz? Spoiler alert.

Corpses are so cool. I plan to establish timeline in the next chapter... No spoilers lolll

Love you

Bye