NEW! Arjun/Riya (Ariya) FF: Strings of Desire- Note p34 URGENT - Page 2

That all i can say about this.

Now crime + sexual tension, that's a genre which is my fav. So much scope of writing. From your way of writing it's evident you are a veteran and i could not be more glad that you discovered this show and decided to write on it. As much as I despise the show maker, I have to admit they create real, flesh and blood characters which inspire a lot and makes your mind overboard with story ideas 😆 Not trying to sound pretentious, but Riya and Arjun in your story has a quite mature and different voice, something I have never read in any FF. We all see the tragedy and anger issue of Arjun and cleanliness freak with statistical talk wali Riya but not the people. It's almost like we highlight those traits and write them and not the actual character itself. Riya had to have a service career prior the show since she come from research desk to ETF field work and she had to see the political/nepotism issues of police force, and Arjun being the just , stern man of principle, has to respect Riya for her tenacity and good work. They has those bickering about her number talks but they will have sensible conversation about case too. And those heated moments which goes poof in seconds 😛 This progress I see in this story is maybe down 1/2 years of their working relationship. Riya fighting the attraction is a refreshing change I swear cause the general perception goes like she's so smitten that she can barely see straight! That's something quite insulting imo, I mean that guy is such a jerk that any sensible girl would run far away from him 🤣 Arjun on the other hand is quite accepting of her effect on him and fighting it more due to his job than his tragedy, correct me if I am wrong. The last scene made me go Aww, really! He respects her brain and beauty too, blood rushing to somewhere else lmao 🤣 that made me chuckle.

Ooh now coming to my fav part- the case. Drowning immediately made me think it has to be a bath tub or swimming pool but dragging a body from pool to personal room seems impossible. Since there was no sign of struggle maybe the victim was unconscious before the drowning. A drug which entered his system through common food/drink or injection maybe? About the obsessive cleanliness all around the killer maybe house staff/someone who's into forensic/ medical student who knows what he's doing. Whatever it is, I will surely Google death by drowning tonight 😆 since someone attacked Ariya hotel room so does that mean someone from hotel staff leaked it? If killer is from house staff he would know for sure. Btw question- if they were undercover then their going to that crime scene would raise suspiciobs right? Why would any civilian (as far as people around is concerned) will enter a crime scene?

I am hooked. Will send a mail to your mail account for next update, please notify whenever you update . And update fast! I don't get much story to be excited about these days.

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I like to speculate hard ...It's a bit annoying 😆

So hotel staff just informed the police and let them do their work and they were nowhere near the place so nobody really knew who entered...So Ariya remained safe. Did I get that right?

Thanks for reply. Your story made my day too