ARIYA SS - PYAR KA DARD HAI part 1 on pg 3. 4/6

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hii everyone me again to eat you brain but this time not at all alone .my partner in crime will be stuti aka angelariya. we are starting new one.n credit of concept goes to stuti .



I know I know I have many pending story but I'll complete two of them soon.

so read it n plz give us your reviews

thanks by

1 . me
2 . stuti
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prologue


Mumbai city

sea beach of Mumbai. some guys n girls are doing party their chilling, singing, dancing n chatting. everyone enjoying very much.

but a person is standing far from them , he is standing there taking back support of a rock with his hand fold till chest n there is no emotion on his face

his POV

mai bhi kabhi aise hi khush raha karta tha.mai bhi kabhi sapne dekha karta tha.mere bhi dost the meri bhi duniya thi. Maine bhi kabhi pyar kiya tha , ek angel si dikhne wali ladki se .itna pyar ki apna sab kuch kho diya .apni hasi apne sapne apni puri duniya. or aaj mai ek tanha or soulless life je raha hu. mere sathi mujhe akdu, khadus , gusse wala or emotion less admi bulate hai. kabhi kabhi sochta hu waqt bhi kya chij hai sab badal deta hai . or is waqt ne mere dhadakte dil ko pattar kar diya.jaha kabhi sirf pyar basta tha aaj waha kuch nahi kuch bhi nahi.
agar roj uthna sona khana khana or duty karna Ise aap jindgi jeena kehte hai to haa mai jee raha hu ye jindgi.
par aaj tak ye nhi samajh paya ki mujhe ye saja q mili , Maine aisi kya khata ki thi.khair ab mujhe in sab se bhi koi fark nahi padta.

he left place

mujhko yeah jindgi lagti hai ajnabi
dhup hi dhup hai , bite kai pal ye wahi
mujhko ye jindgi lagti hai ajnabi

Jane kahan se aayi thi , waqt ki ek aandhi yaha
sab le gayi uda k wo , baki nahi kuch bhi raha
mujhko ye jindgi lagti hai ajnabi
dhup hi dhup hai , beete kai pal ye wahi
mujhko ye jindgi...

kal tak thi jo Jaan meri , Jaan meri wo le gayi
jhakam itne lage dil par , ab koi dukhta hi nahi
mujhko ye jindgi lagti hai ajnabi
dhup hi dhup hai, beets kai pal wahi
mujhko ye jindgi




note - credit goes to original song.I just put my words according to our plot
Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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character sketch

arjun rawte - once a funloving , free spirit n over emotional guy now turned into arrogant lifeless emotion less person. his past still scare him. not believing in love any more. only aim of life is to serve his nation.ryt now second in command of etf n one of best cop of department. he only listen sameer but after his marriage he also respect her as bhabhi n is avi n his wife .
age -27. status - single

riya mukharjee - young beautiful , ambitious n emotionally stable girl. want to prove herself in man dominating field . soon joining etf as research specialist.not believe in love n marriage.
age - 26 status - single

sameer rathod - etf chief and Arjun's senior n mentor like.he adore his work n dedication toward duty. worried about his wellbeing n life. want to know about his reason of indifference n share it.
age 30 status - married to Aisha recently

Aisha rathod - wife of sameer n a house wife but she is a writer n write many blogs n books . love n care arjun like bro n always take his tension. she is sweet clam n loveble girl
age 28. status - married

chandrakant patil - commando of etf same as show
age 28 status - married to swati

shreekant sen - tech expert of etf same as show
age 27. status - committed to Lisa

Lisa dcruz - shree's class mate and girlfriend. forensic exp of etf .same as show.love to pull shree leg always
age 27. status - committed to shree

roshni waliya - she was Arjun's college mate n bff. but now he close himself from her also which hurt her so much. she is wife n best friend of avinash n now a school teacher.she always jealous of arjun n avi friendship.but its just show actually she is proud of both of them
age 27 status married

avinash waliya - he is best buddy of arjun .love him too much n want him as he was.he met arjun by roshni but both avijun share great bond much more then arni.doctor by profession. n know everything about arjun hate someone very much.
age 27. status married

sakshi anand - she is same as show in nature.but lill sis of rosh. n hear about arjun so much from her sis so want to meet him.but now she know he change alot so she want him to be the person she adore.want him to smile.soon joining etf .
age 26. status - single




Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow another ariya story..
hmm interesting concept
would love to read more of it...
plz update soon
😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous CS
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome cs & concept
pls do cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting concept and cs
please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome prologue..
and cs
continue soon..
thanks for PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intresting dear..
Plz update soon
Thanks 4 pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awsome concept & cs dear pls cont soon

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