ARIYA SS - PYAR KA DARD HAI part 1 on pg 3. 4/6 - Page 2

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prologue and cs look interesting
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Interesting concept...
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interesting prologue n cs
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Part 1

Location Mumbai

Etf office

Shree chotu lisa n varsha ( short role) is sitting and chatting in conf hall .

Then enter our two super cops samjun or kaun ?

All look at them n wish them in return both of them wish . sam
Left for his cabin

Ar - lisa wo autopsy report aa gayi .

Li - yes sir ye rahi.

Arjun take it n going to read but
Var - good morning arjun sir

ar - abhi to kuch der pehle good morning bola .or waise bhi aisa kya khas hai aaj ki morning mai.

He tell all that while reading file n her face fall

Arjun went to his cabin then n shree nudge her

Sh - kya hua varsha aaj do do bar good morning .

Var - huh khadus kahi ka dekh uska favoutite black pehna hai aaj maine or wo meri taraf dekhna to dur ulta kehta hai aisa kya khas hai is morning mai.

Shretuza giggle
Sh - tujhe to pata hi hai na wo kaisa hai.

Var - haa yar , par wo aisa q hai. Dekh na yar kitna hadsome hai or kitna macho bhi par kisi ladki ki tarf dekhta hi nahi.

Ch - waise tujhe kaise pata iska fav color black hai.

Var - qki wo black or black shade wale kapde jyada pehenta hai.

Li - ohh.ye bat hai .waise hai to handsome par tu usse dur hi reh , tera dil hi tutega or kuch nahi hoga . waise bhi wo khadus pyar nahi kar sakta use to 24*7 bas kam or kam .

Sh - she is ryt varsha , mujhe nahi lagta aisi koi ladki hai jo is khadus ko pyar karne par hasne par majboor kar sake.

Var sadly - hmm shayad mera teesra pyar bhi adhura hi reh jayega. Par ye wala sabse hot or handsome tha yar. Khair mujhe lagta hai mumma Jo rishta layi hai use haa kar dena chahiye.

All nod n she sadly smile

After one week

All are in conference hall

Sam - team aaj se hume ek crime journalist join karne wali hai.

Ar - crime journalist ki Hume kya jarurat hai sir

Sam sigh - pata nahi ministry se order hai humare kam ko public tak pahuchana chahiye isilye

Arjun just nod

Sh - pata nahi kaisi hogi
Ch - kaisi hogi , hogi koi Buddhi khusat jiske chehre par humesha gussa or Rob hoga

Tabhi ek sweet si voice aati hai

Excuse me

Sab uski taraf dekhte hai or

GI - hii guys I am sakshi anand or mai etf ki new crime journalist

Sh - hii mai shrekant sen or

N he.introduce all

Sak - arjun kaha hai mujhe usse Milan hai

Ch - sakshi arjun sir nahi rathod sir head hai etf ke

Sak - mujhe pata hai unse mil kar formality puri kar chuki hu mai. Ab batao bhi arjun ka cabin kaunsa hai.

Li - aage se right 2 nd cabin

Sak - thanks

Shreetu - bechari ek or heart broken list mai add hogi kuch dino mai

Li - ryt iska on 28 hoga .

Var - hmm. Khair tum log meri shadi mai aa rahe ho na.

Trio - ofcourse yar.

In arjun cabin

Sak - hii arjun

Arjun raised his eyebrow

sak - shayad pehchana nahi mujhe mai sakshi , sakshi anand. Roshni di ki sister

Ar - to tumme pehchanne jaisa kya hai .tum koi victim ya culprit hoti to jarur yad rehti

Sak move her head in disbelief.

Sak - haye tumhare liye to mai culprit bhi banne ko taiyar hu.

Ar - apni ye bakwas band karo or batao yaha q aayi ho.

Sak - I am new crime journalist of etf you know

Ar - ab to ho gaya etf ka kalyan

Sak - arjun

N she pout

Lunch time

Sakshi easily mixup with all, all are taking their lunch

Sam goes to Arjun's cabin

Sam - arjun chal lunch karte hai

Ar - sam bhai aap q bhabhi ko pareshan karte hai. Mai kuch bhi kha lunga

Sam - kya bat kar raha hai mere bhai tere karan to mujhe ye khane ko milta hai warna Teri bhabhi mujhe bolti canteen mai khaya karo.

Arjun smile lightly. They take lunch n sam left. Sam is on door n see arjun reading case file

Sam MV aisa q hai tu arjun, na khane ki sudh na jindgi ki. Agar mai tujhe force na karu to shayad tu lunch bhi na kare or WO to avi or roshni hai Jo tujhe dinner kara dete hai.he sigh n left.

Arjun n avi flats are beside eachother. Sam n avi are cousins so he know avi n rosh .
But avi never told him reason of arjun behavior

Arjun took out a payal

Ar - dekho tumne kya bana diya mujhe na khud khush rehta hu na kisi ko khushi de sakta hu sab meri wajah se dukhi hai aayi baba adi ( his bro aditya) avi rosh sam bhai Aisha bhabhi sab.

Same night

Arjun is reading case file in his room .door bell ring

Avi - chal khana ready hai.

Ar - avi aaj man nahi hai.

Avi - arjun dekh tu gussa mat dila .kya there liye wo hi sab kuch thi ki wo nahi to hum bhi koi nahi

Ar - chal par apna emotional atyachar band kar.

Both enter n roshni avi n arj take dinner

Avi - or suna sab kaisa chal rha hai.

Ar - sale tune apni sali ko bula liya yaha to sab accha kaise chalega

Ro - how mean arjun

Ar - or nahi to kya mai to ye soch rha hu etf ko kaun bachyega

Aviro giggle

Ro - meri Behan to lakho mai ek hai dekhna tumhare etf ka mahol badal jayega warna kuch log to bas muh fula kar baithe rehte hai.

Ar - ha or tumhari behan din bhar paglon ki tarah Hasti rehti hai

Avi - waise ek or good news hai WO kal se yahi rehne aa rahi hai.

Ar - matlab mujhe kahi or flat dekhna chahiye

Ro - ha ha jise hum tujhe Jane denge .

Ar - yaa .I know. Accha hai par tujhe company milegi to humara dimag kam khayegi.q avi

Avi - marwayega kya chup kar.

He said silently n arj smrik

Ro - haa or parso Maha shivratri hai na to hum sath mai puja bhi karenge

Ar - mai chalta hu

N he leave immediately.rosh start crying n hug avi. his eyes is also moist

ro - sorry avi mujhe mahashivratri ka jikar nahi karna tha .mai

avi - its OK rosh , tumhari galti nhi hai ye sab uska kiya dhara hai. I wish wo mere samne kabhi na aye warna mai Jane kya kar baithunga.

ro - kya haal kar diya usne humare jun ka. kya koi aisa nhi Jo use fir jeena sikha de.


TBC by stuti

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awesome
love it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Amazing
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sach me satating bhot hi acha he...

Varsha Bechari ka dil tut gaya..

Sakshi ke aane se mahol thoda halka huva he..

Arjun...avi. ...roshan ke bich ki bonding Kafi intresting he...

Arjun kisi se pyaar karta tha par kise. .

Arjun ke sath kya huva...

Vo ladki kon he...

Please. ...Please. ...Ab story regular update karna. .


Jaldi. ...Jaldi. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hye nice c0ncept dear.
Thanx 4 the p.m
And
Sorry 4 late

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