Ariya story *do jism aik jaan* teaser of part 11 updated 09july no pm

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Hye guyz its me shomaila khan and its my 1st story plz achi lagi tu shabashi dyna agr buri lagy tu andy tamater mat pehnkna plz




Acp Arjun rawte
A hot akro kharos cop of etf wo sirf aik gol ly kr jee raha hai roshni ka badla lyna. And he is best frnd of sameer. Riya se pyar bhi karne laga hai magr izhar sik ka metter close hone k bad.


Roshni arjun rawte
She was a sweet and fun loving girl she love her husband vry much. She was best frnd of sameer. Sik ne uska qatal kr dia tha.


Acp Sameer rathore
He is a super duper hot cop of mumbai. He is best frnd of arjun and roshni, arjun se nazar tha bcz of roshni murder liken ab nai.


Shreekant sen
He is tech-exprt of etf and also of cib,
He is fun loving boy he is best frnd of riya and chotu, he love riya like his own sister.


Chotu (mujhy p0ra naam yad nai 😉 )
He is commando of etf
and best frnd of shree and riya.


Riya mukharjee.
A fun loving girl, she is research, encounter and undercover spcl-list
of etf. She fall in love with arjun
and bst frnd of shree chotu.




part 1



Boy:"Ye sab kuch tumhari waja se howa hai"

Girl:"but mai ne"

Boy:"chup aik dam chup aik lafz bhi mat nikalna agr tum na aati bich mei tu aj wo zinda na hota sirf tumhari waja se mai usy pakr nai saka dour raho mujh se q nai samjhti ho tum riya" (yes sai pehchana its our super hot cop acp arjun rawte)

Riya bichari roti howi wahan se chali gyi


"dam it rawte ye kia tariqa hai us ne jo bhi kia tumhe bachane k lye kia agr wo tumhe dika na dyti tu wo tumhe maar dalta" rathor ne ghusse se kaha or wahan se chala gya



Churee tu bs sar juka k khare hain or dil mei akro kharos apne boss ko ghaliyaan dy rahe jis ne un ki bff ko bewaja rola dia.



Arjun wahan se suv mei jaa k beithta hai or ghusse mei gari ura kar chala jata hai


Shree:"yaar arjun sir k sath masla kia hai jab dekho rii ko dant'te rehte hain"
chotu:"sai kaha bichari rii ki tu is baar koi ghalati bhi nai thi"

Shree:"chal jaldi se is gadown ko seal kr k evidnce akathy kar k rii k pichy jate hain"

Chotu:"haan chal pata nai kahan gyi hogi"

They both collect the all evidnce, bodies and seal the gadown.

*FLASH BACK*
In morning riya shree chotu in conf.room and doing masti
Riya:"ary shree kisi waqt tu apni g.f se dour reh liya kar"
shree ko samjh nai aya in mind * meri g.f tu hai nai phr ye kis g.f ki baat kr rai*
shree:"kia matlab??"
chotu:"mere bhai tu shree hai or ye tu sab ko pata hai k tere g.f teri leppy hai" riya or[ chotu taali maar k hansne lag jate hain
"tum ..." shree kehne hi wala hota hai k "ye play ground nai hai ye etf hai or na tum teeno bachy ho" rathor in vry angry mood.

Trio:" sorry sir"
Rathor:" aj sham tak mujhy tamam paper work mere table par chahiye"

Shree:"sir tu buhat khatarnak mood mei hain" chotu or riya halka sa sar haan mei hilate hain. Tabi arjun conf.room mei enter hota hai
trio:"gud mrng sir"

Hamara hero sar hila k apni seat py jaa k beith jata hai file parne lagta hai,
02:30pm rathor ka mobile bajta hai.

"koi khabr us ki"
Arjun or trio apne cheif ki tarf dekhte hain unhe pata hai kis k bary mei baat[d ho rai hai.

"Thek hai hum abi nikaalte hain" nd cal dead

Riya:"sir"
rathor tamam team ki tarf dekhta hai or arjun ki tarf dekh kar kehta hai

"wo aagya hai or abi wo abc gadown mei apne sab logn se milne wala hai hum sab ko abi nikalna hoga shree spcl force ko keh do nikane k lye hamye usy zinda pakrna hai"
shree:"yes sir"
rathor:"rawte usy zinda pakrna hai"
Arjun wahan se uth kar chala jata hai gari ki tarf.

*arjun in mind*
"mai usy nai charun ga aj mera badla pora hoga aj roshni ko insaf mily ga"

T.b.c



Acha lagy tu comment zaror karna.

Har Ghalati ki muafi mangti hun


Part 1\page 1
Part 2\ page 2
Part 3/ page 5

Part 4/ page 7
Part 5/ page 11
part 6/ page 15
Part 7/ page 19
Note/page 21
Part 8(A) /page 22
part 8(B)\ page 25
Part 9(A)\ page 31

Part 9(B)\ page 37
Part 10 / page 41
Teaser / page 47
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cieli.Santi

Interesting continue soon

thanx dear😊
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Originally posted by: zubiya92

Awesome update
Cont soon

😊 😊 thank you so much 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting concept
uff arjun again scold riya 😡
continue soon
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😊 thanku
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Originally posted by: cuteariya

interesting concept
uff arjun again scold riya 😡
continue soon

😊 😊 thank you sooo much. Yes he is a real sariyal 😡
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😊 😊 thanx
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Very nice update.
Woh sikander hai kya???
Purani yadein taaza ho gayi.
Cont soon. Will be waiting to read the end.
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Part 2


Riya on call "haan wo aa gya hai hum udr hi ja rahe hain"
"..."
"abc gadown nazar rakhna us wahan se bach kr tu nai jaye ga agr wahan se nikalne mei kamyaab ho jaye tu mere hathun se bachy ga nai"

"..."

Call dead...

All in suv arjun driver seat co.driver seat nd trio on bck seats...

Rathor:"usy aj hum ne jane nai dyna or usy har hal mei zinda pakrna hai q k us ka case hamye nai dia gya got it"

Trio:"yes sir"
Our arjun se boiling in anger 😡 in 20 mints they all are front of abc gadown.

Rathor:"shree apne holicoptr cameras nikalo"

Shree:"sir"

Sb ki ankhen shree k lappy par hain or in 10 mints they knw that there are 25 members.

Sb ready ho k andr jate hain or sb ki guns par slncr laga howa jis k waja se kisi ko pata nai laga or dekhte hi dekhte 15 are dead

Shree:"sir ab jxt usy or 2 girls ko mila kr 10 bachy hain"

Sb 2nd par jate hain 2 gaons ko chotu marta hai or ahista ahista room mei jate hain q k wahan kisi k hansne ki awaz aarahi hai WO udr hi hai

Arjun aik fire krta hai or 1 mar jata hai udr rathor fire krta hai or aik or gya.

"bhai ye inhe kia h0wa?" altaf in vry scry voice
Jao jaa k dekho tabi aik larki super-women ki tarha gardan par kick marti hai or jo 2 member or khare h0te wo bhi zameen par gir kr usi wqt maar jate hain,

"ye kia kia tu ne nadia" altaf yell in angr
"k0n ho tum"
"tumhari mout" nadia giving him smile
"hahaha aj tak mujhy koi pakr nai saka tum mujhy kaise maro gi" wo hansne lagta hai tabi achanak 2no larkiyan bhag jati hain.
"hahahaha ary meri mout kahan gyi hahahaha"
"altaf ye dono thin k0n?"
"bhai mujhy tu aik drug dealer nadia ka pata or dosri aik khatrnak chor thi rehana"
"pagal ho wo dono police wali thn bhago yahan se"
"itni jaldi bhi kia hai sikendar" arjun in red bcz of angr

"tum acp arjun"
"wah tum ne tu dekhte hi pechan liya waise apni mout ko q nai pehchano gye"
Rathor in calm voice and try tu fire him but sab ki guns mei goliyaan khatm ho chuki hain.
Arjun rathor shree and chotu jxt seeing him
"hahahaha goliyaan khatm ab kaise maaro gye mujhy?"
And arjun him hard on his stomch
"aaah ..." and then fight start arjun vs sikendar rathor vs altaf...
"sir hamye zinda pakrna hai" shree shouted
Altaf behosh hojata hai maar kha kha k or sikendar bhi gir jata hai mgr behosh nai bs arjun se dar jata hai
Tabi sb jate hain un dono ko utha k jate hain suv k qareeb ate hi un ko gari mei dalte hain or rathor shree or chotu se
"sb evidnce utha kr gadown ko seal kr dyna hum inhe com.office ly k jaa rahe

"arjun sir" riya shout and arjun ko dika dyti or dono gir jate hain riya arjun k upr hai or aik dosre aik tarf dekhte hain "sir ap thek hain" riya in a vry caring voice "hmmm"
"chotu chuhrna mat bhagne mat dyna" rathor in so much anger or awaz sun k dono arjun nd riya hosh mei ate and jb wo dekhte hain tu sikendar bhag chuka hai or chotu or rathor us k pichy jate hain
After some time
Chotu rathor or arjun wapis ate hain
In so much angr bcz sikendar bhagora nikla ( 😉 haha sai naam dia na)
Arjun tu bs riya ko dekhte hi shuru ho gya
*FLASH BACK END*


T.b.c

Har ghalati ki muafi mangti hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: utsha

Very nice update.

Woh sikander hai kya???
Purani yadein taaza ho gayi.
Cont soon. Will be waiting to read the end.


Thanx utsha 😊 yes he is sikendar 😡

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