Ariya story *do jism aik jaan* teaser of part 11 updated 09july no pm - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Awesome update..
Poor shree has to handle so much anger..
I really thought cbi chief is Riya.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Hey I just read all update
Brilliant work
I would really like to read more of this
Please pm me next time
I have already send you buddy request
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Awesome update.
Intresting story.
I really thought that girl is Riya.
Hmmm so sree aur riyu C.B.I main bhi kaam kartey hai good.
Arey suraj,sandhya matlb Diya aur baati bhi mix hai.
Keep it up
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
😊 😊 😊 thanku vry all of u for ur price less c0mment
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Nice start 😊
Welcome to family 😊
Will read all parts when free
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Part 4



In cbi office

Gautham:"aao utsha mai tumhe chor dyta hun" with beautiful smirk
Utsha:"aaisha dii chalo na mummy baba wait kr rahe hun gye mujhy un se milna hai 8 m0nth bad" she is vry happy 😊 like 2 years old child happy nd excited when his mama give him a new toy 😊
Aaisha:"shree subh wahan rathore sir kitne bajy aate hain?"
Shree:"9 bajy"

Aaisha:"suraj sandhya aj tumhe usy har jaga dhondna hai warna u knw meher vry wl"
Sanraj:"yes mem" (sandhya ka san or suraj ka raj mila kr sanraj 😉 )
Aaisha:"ok, both of u go n0w"
After sanraj left

Aaisha:"gautham informers ko keh dia hai?"
Gautham:"yes mem" in that time door opne and meher enter in conf.room.

Meher:"shree chalo i wil drop u"
Shree:"chalo 😊 "

Meher:"tum teeno gud bye kal milen gye gauthan inhen ghr drop kr dyna"
And left with shree.

Gautham:"chalo utsha and aaisha i wil drop u both"

Aaisha:"hmmm, ok chalo"

In suv

Meher:"shree sb thek tha?"

Shree:"nai yaar kahan sb thek hosakta hai u knw na sik ka pakre jana ya encounter kitna important tha or ab wo hath mei aa k nikal gya hai tu sb hi ghusse mei hain sb se arjun sir and i knw arjun sir se bhi zeyada tum ghusse mei or dukhi ho" and she wiped her tears

Meher:"hope so ab wo pakra jaye liken ab aik dafa hath aye ga mai us ka usi wqt encounter kr dun gi 😡 😡
Itne mei shree ka ghr aata hai tu meher kehti hai.
"uncle anty ko mera hye kehna or anty ko kehna lunch buhat suwadish tha"

Shree:"ok gud nite"
Meher:"gud nite" in fake smile.

Meher apne ghar ati hai or table par keys or apne dono mobile rakhti hai or aik buhat bari F*Ly photo k pas jati hai with lots of tears in her eyes [;(]
Meher:" i am realy s0rry maa baba, omm and chutki mai usy nai maar saki jis ne meri samne ap sb ko maar dala tha" she is on like taking her last breath
"mai hath jour k muafi mangti hun mujhy muaf kr den plz forgive me plz." roo roo k us ki halat kharb ho jati hai.
"agr aj meri team mai khud mazbot hoti tu wo zinda na h0ta"
After one and half hour on call.

Meher:"hello,
Bary papa?"

"beta ji ap phr hum haar gye"

Meher:"bary papa mujhy apki zarorat hai" or wo phr rone lag jaati hai

"beta ji u knw na ap hi meri or khanak ki beti ho ap rooti raho gi tu kaise chaly ga u r a my brave officer na?"

Meher:"mujhy mere bary papa ki zarorat hai commetioner sir ki nai."
(com meher k bary papa hain)

Com:"hum aa rahe hain beta dnt wry" and call dead 😔


*FLASH BACK*

"mama mama yahoo aj hum papa k han jaye gye maza aye ga" one 22 years old girl is super duper happy bcz she love her bary papa vry much her bary pata like her own papa and her bary papa usy apni beti hi mante hai q k unki apni koi ulad nai hai or usy apna banaya h0wa hai,

Wo usy meher keh kr bolaty thy is ki waja se sb F*Ly waly usy meher hi bolate thy.


Omm.:"meher didi ap bary papa se itna q pyar karti hain? Or unhe papa q bulati hain?"
One boy come to meher and asked. boy was younger brother of meher and he was 17 years old itne mei aik 14 saal ki larki pink frock mei ati hai and says :"didi mai kaisi lag rahi hun?"
Meher:"meri nandini meri jaan meri chutki buhat achi lag rai hai 😊 😊 "


After some time all gone to shiwaji satam (acp pradhiman cid 😉 ) house to srprz him but wahan punhch ka pata chalta k wo or un ki mrs zarori kam se gye hain.

Meher cal him and he says that :"ap beithy hum bs 15 mins mei aye" after 15 mins meher house k bahr aati hai shree se milne k lye q k shree sath waly ghr mei rehta tha usi wqt


Ghr mei koi aata hai with his 2 brothers and 5 gaons and p0chta hai k cib cheif shiwaji satam kahan hai?

Mgr sb darr jate hain koi kch nai kehta and wo sb par gooliyaan chalawa dyta hai.

Or phr p0ra ghr cheak krta hai bt koi nai milta tu wo chala jata hai,

After 5 mints Jb meher wapis ati hai tu sath hi shiwaji bhi suv se bahr nikalte hain or teeno ghr mei dakhil hote hain tu

Sb noker maar chuke hote hain and sath sath

Meher k maa,baba brother and sister are also dead

*flash back end*

T.b.c

Har ghalati ki muafi manti hun.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
😲👏OMG!!!!!! THIS IS QUITE AN UPDATE.
Awesome one.👏
Somethings got cleared but much more remained unanswered.😕
Loved CBI team bonding.😊
Tumne CID ko bhi nehi choda??? Good good. Ab aur konsi serial ki entry hone wali hai???😛😃
Meher ki past was so painful and horrible. 😭😭
Usse toh arjun se bhi bura laaga jab sik bhag gaya. Ab samjha why was Shree giving her some space.🥱
Pls cont soon. Its getting too interesting with each update.
Thank u for the pm.😛😛

Lagta hai ek khas insaan bada hi jaldi me hai kisiko drop karne ke liye aur uski haasi toh ruk hi nehi rahi hai.😉😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Fantastic
Who is Meher? How is she related to shree and Riya?
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
I lovers ur story but u didn't pm me 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Beautiful update..

Continue soon




Thank u 😊 😊

I'll update soon

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