Ariya story *do jism aik jaan* teaser of part 11 updated 09july no pm - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thnx 😊
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Awesome awesome superb update plz cont soon thanks for pm😛😳😃
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interesting. superb. continue soon. Thanks for pm.
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superb
loved it
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cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Meher
Cheif of cib or commetioner k bhai ki beti mgr love her like his own child, she is hate sik bcz us ne is ki family ko mara tha.

Aaisha kapoor.
2nd in command of cbi and she is also encounter and undercover spcl-list. She love her sister vry much.

Utsha kapoor
Research and undercover spcl-list of cbi. She love her elder sister aaisha. And she like gautham gulati.


Acp Suraj rathi
He is sweet and cute 3rd in command officer of cib. He love his duty mother and his wife.

Sandhya suraj rathi
She is beautiful encounter officer of cib.

Gautham gulati ( 😉 bigg boss 8 wala 😉 )
He is a commando of cbi and love utsha vry much liken aaisha se darta hai.



Its dedicate too my frnd madhu utsha



Part 3


In an other place in mumbai

Girl:"wo kahan hai" 😡

Boy:"mem ... Wo ... hum ... Wo ..."

Girl:"kia wo wo laga rakha hai mai ne kaha tha wo bhagne na paye us par nazr rakhni hai" 😡 (sochu sochu kon hogi ye)

Boy:"..." 🥱 🥱

Girl:"Aaisha tum or utsha wahan se chali gyi thin jab mai ne tum dono ko kaha tha k gadown se thori dour chuhp kar nazr rakho tu q nai wahan thi tum dono?" 😡 😡 she is in kali maa avatar and sb k sb usse darr k maare behosh hone waly hain siwaye hamari lady-dabang k

Aaisha:"hamye laga k arjun k hote howe wo wahan se kahin nai jaye ga thats y we both were come back from that place"

Girl:" or jo mai ne kaha us ka kia? Mai yahan k cheif hun ya tum? Tum log mere under kaam krte ho mai samjha pai?" 😡

All:" sorry mem"
She is going to her cabin k achanak wo morti hai or p0chti hai "wo kahan hai?" abi tak nai aya?" all node in negtive.


7:30 pm
In ETF office

Choree jaise hi gadown se farigh ho k etf ate hai com.room enter hote hi

Rathor:"riya tumhare sath thi?"

Choree:"no sir"
Rathor:" dam it" or apne cabin mei chala jata hai.

Chotu:"chal yaar riya k pas chalte hain usy hamari zarorat hogi 😔
Shree:"..." tabi shree k phone bajta hai or num dekh kar shree ayse hota hai k jaise usy katoo tu us mei khoon na ho shree ki halat dekhte howe chotu us k pas wali seats py aa k beithta or us k sholder par hath rakhta hai q k us ko pata hai kis k cal hai jb hi is num se cal aati hai shree ki shakal darr k mare peeli(yellow) hojati hai,

Shree:"maare gye" call utha k

"jai hind"
Caller:"..."

Shree:" ji abi aaya bs aane mei time lag jaye ga"
Caller:"..."

Shree:"ji, jai hind" nd call dead.

Shree:"mai chalun" 😔
Chotu:"shree is ka sirf mujhy or riya ko pata hai tum rathor sir se q nai kehte is tarha tumhe aasani hogi"
Chotu us sholder par se hath hatata hai.

Shree:"naaaii wo mujhy maar daly gi tum nai jante usy." he is still scry chotu

"tum itna q darte ho naam sunte hi kanpte(shiver) lagte ho?" chotu in full funny mood "wo hamare sys ya dam it se zeyada tu darawni nai hogi na?" or hanste lag jata...

Shree:"wo rathor sir or arjun sir ki bhi maa hai,
Hum sb tu kehte hain k wo jungle mei chali jaye tu sher(lion) jungle mei khud chuhp jaye,
Jis mujrim ko pata lag jaye k wo un k pechy hai tu wo hamare arjun sir hathun maar khane ko zeyada tarjii dy ga" [|(] he fl proud


Chotu:"hailaa mujhy tu usy dekhy bina hi darr lag raha hai" chotu in shock
Shree:"chal chalte hain or han rii ko aj akela chor dyte hain wo akela rehna chahti hogi subh baat kren gye"

Chotu:"haan tu thek keh raha hai..."
Tabi rathor aata hai or kehta hai k "wo dono larkiyan kon thn?" pata karo mujhy kal tak un k about sb jankari chahiye or ab tum dono jaa sakte"

Choree:"yes sir"


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Edited by FAJR4 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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8:00pm an other place

Ek shaks kanpta howa aik cabin ki tarf jata hai or sb usy pitty look dyte hain 😕 (pehchano k0n ho sakta hai)


Wo cabin knock krta hai andr se "come in" wo ander enter hota hai

He says "jai hind mem"

Wo usy file se sar utha k dekhti in full angr uski ankhen lal ho chuki hai ghusse se.
Or wo dil mei tamam bhajwano ko yaad kar raha hai or bol raha hai k "mujhy bacha lo"

Girl:"tum dekh nai sakte thy shree?" (yes he is shree) shree:"mai... Mem ... Wo mai... Darasal mai ..."

"ye kia bakri ki tarha mai mai laga rakhi hai mai ne kitni dafa kaha hai k har wqt apni aankhen, kaan charo tarf rakha karo mgr aj tum ne... Laparvahi ki bhi had hoti hai." wo tu jaise pathar ban gya pata nai wo kia keh rai hai mgr hamara shree tu kch sun hi nai raha tha 😉
Wo us k kandhy ko zour ka jatka dyti hai or kehti hai

"mai kch p0ch rai hun" 😡
Shree:"ji?

"i said whats going on in ETF?"

Shree:"mem rathor sir ne NADIA OR REHANA k about tamam info kal ly aane ka kaha hai"

Girl:"thek hai sb ko con.room mei aane ka kaho" n0w in clm voice.

Shree sb ko con.room mei ane ka kehta hai,


8:45pm

All team in conf.room of cbi.

Girl:"aaisha tum subh ETF office jao utsha k sath or just ye batana hai k tum UC mei thi as a nadia or utsha as a rehana ban k pichly 8 months se mere aboudt kch nai kehna mai samjha payi?"


All:"yes meher mem" the girl name is meher( sb ko laga tha na k ye riya hai na 😉 ).

Meher:"suraj and sandhiya tum dono usy jaga dhondo har jaga mtlb har jaga,

Gotham apne informers ko kam par laga do aik dafa phr subh tak ALTAF ko hosh aa jaye ga us k bad Sik k thikano ko tabha karna hoga...


Go bck ur work or mujhy sb k sb kal yahan sham 4 bajy milen jai hind and god bye.


T.b.c


Har ghalati k muafi mangti hun
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Posted: 9 years ago
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THANKS A LOOOT FOR U DEDICATION. I don't know what have I done to deserve it. But its really an honour for me.
Update was very nice.
Shree is such a darpok.
Shree and Riya CBI me bhi kaam karte hai kya???
Its getting interesting with each update.
Thank for pm.
Pls cont soon.
Edited by utsha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome sweetheart
Yrr story mein mere utsha Dii bhi hai
Wow BTW utsha di ka koi partner tai kiya kya
I so wanted to see her blushing n go the deepest shade of red
And as she say she is weak in subject romance
Humne knsa PhD ki hai
We're weak too na
Wow new characters
Meher the Chief
But yeh team knsi hai ???
Nia , ib , CBI , cid ??????
Riya kya hai ????
is abeer here too ??
Suraj sandhya all wow
Update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelariya

Awesome sweetheart

Yrr story mein mere utsha Dii bhi hai
Wow BTW utsha di ka koi partner tai kiya kya
I so wanted to see her blushing n go the deepest shade of red
And as she say she is weak in subject romance
Humne knsa PhD ki hai
We're weak too na
Wow new characters
Meher the Chief
But yeh team knsi hai ???
Nia , ib , CBI , cid ??????
Riya kya hai ????
is abeer here too ??
Suraj sandhya all wow
Update soon
Thanks for pm



Eh stuti!!!! Bohot maaza aarahi hai na tujhe.
Ruk meri agli story me I'll make u villain. He he he.
Chal just joking.
But I'll definitely req shomi to keep me single .
Main aise hi thik hoon re.

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