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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

What has this marriage done to Sakshi? She has lost her personality, cleaning around the room just to please Arjun without worrying about her wounds. After all that she has been through now she has to see Arjun kiss Riya. Please continue soon.

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sakshiarjun

@sakshiarjun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

You broke my heart😭

Waiting for the next update...

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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+ 33

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Another awesome update dear

Loved it enormously!

Dr. Arjun Singh, well mentioning him in the very beginning is for the reason I loved him a lot, really! he's just like my Vikram!I'll surely love to see a beautiful bond of friendship between him n Sakshi! He will be a best of friend one can have! I do have a feeling that you'll put it up that way, or maybe some other way, my dear twister! 😛

Riya, this girl has literally screwed her own life with her own deeds! It is her fault but not entirely! This is more like the circumstances made her behave the way she did! Portraying a grey character isn't easy but you've done it really well in showcasing Riya the way she is! Her story was well written! She has a young daughter too, that's sweet! Aayat, hmm.. something tells me that Arjun is going to have a special bond with her! n maybe they three could make a happy little family! Just my thought! 😉

Arjun, oh what shall I say about my dear tragic hero?! He has everything yet he doesn't have anything! I just remembered an old song which suits him aptly, "Mera jeevan kora kagaz, kora hi reh gaya, jo likha tha aasuon ke sang beh gaya.."Right now he has a wife who he has almost lost n the lost love of his life! Do naavo par sawar he janab, doobenge to zaroor! Let's see what you have in store for him!

Lastly coming to Sakshi! She really behaved like the typical Indian wife, pati parmeshwar hota he! She was shattered yet collected herself, be it just a facade of being strong n unhurt, but she's a bad actress, at least her eyes n her face speaks all the truth! She is giving yet another chance to Arjun, but I don't think after the last scene it will be the same! Next chappy will be more interesting, really looking forward to it!

Do continue soon

Love you loads,

You know..😉😛

p.s. - what about the books?! Dec. has ended! 😊

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Super Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Loved it so much
Full of emotions
Sakshi is heart broken can't see her like this
Riya's story was tragic she is facing the consequences of what she did
Agreed she did mistake but we can't blame her she had her own reasons then
Just loved the way you have portrayed Riya's character
Awww Riya had a daughter loved the name Aayat
This new Arjun is Superbbb loved him
Arjun Kapoor - Sonam Kapoor lol
Let's see what happens next
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

nice update
it's so tragic that one's one wrong step changes not only their lives so much but also affects other people's life related to them so much
poor sakshi what she is going through is so heartbreaking btu what she said to arjun is right that he loved riya so much that he is not capable of loving anyone any more atleast till he does,nt have a closure with his past
this new arjun kapoor or rathore is so cute atleast he brought smile on sakshi's face 😃
riya's story was so sad what she had to go through just because of her one wrong decision
she has a daughter now
now that arjun knows every thing what is he going to do
will he finally be able to move past his demons towads sakshi or will he go back to his past 🤔
thanks for pm

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0913155

@0913155

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Awesome awesome awesome superb amazing update😊 loveddd it tooo good ppz update soon thanks for pm

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Shri dr...

I don know for whom I should cry riya r arjun r sakshi...

But am feeling very sad by seeing sakshi like this...

Poor soul...

The written way was too good Loved it so much. ...

Waiting for next...

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Duwidha mein dal diyo tum... kiske liye sad wa feel kar... kispe gussa ho...kucho samjh na aayi... Pata Arjun bitwa ab kiska howat hai... Ek Arjun kam tha...or ek chalat awat hai... Badi Confusia Gaye Hum...Ab konsa Arjun konse Kabutoor ke sath fur fura jaega... Ima Samjh mein nhi awat hai... Ab Writer Mohtarma!!!..Aap Hi Isse Jaldi Suljhao...Pllleeaaassseee... Update soon... *Jai Ramji Ki*

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Wow di just superb
The way you wrote a disturb and troubled marriage and people tied in it was amazing
Please please never stop writing
Okay coming to the part
Sakshi, Riya and Arjun... Everyone are in a mess created by themselves
Hayee "Aayat" 😃
Pata hai meine bhi socha tha agar meri shadi ho aur beti hoyi toh uska naam Aayat rakhon gi 😊
Well mein aur kuch toh nahi bol sakti as you know every time I read a peice of beautiful work by you or my other beautiful friends and di I left young tied 😆
Thanks for pm di
Update soon

P.S. sorry for late reply