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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: NainaSM
omg
arjun never really loved roshni
neither he loves sakshi
he always love riya
Arjun why the hell he behaving like this
now what ? sakshi ... arjun ... riya
all three life in confusion
continue soon

Oh ok... you can't exactly brand him for not completely loving Roshni or Sakshi. You can say he didn't love them the way he loved Riya. Arjun is a broken man. He's been cheated by a woman he loved for ten years, he took on a rebound relationship with Roshni which turned out worse than imagine. Guilt spurred out love and by the time he stepped out of his past and walked forward to embrace a life with Roshni, Roshni had died.

And that's what actually destroyed Arjun.

Sakshi acted like a soothing balm over his injuries and just when he's about to get healed, he faces the woman due to whom he thinks everything had happened.

He wanted to vent out to Riya that due to her he can't love anyone further and then you know what happened - hope this answers your queries and clears out why Arjun is behaving the way he is. :)

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: NainaSM
omg
arjun never really loved roshni
neither he loves sakshi
he always love riya
Arjun why the hell he behaving like this
now what ? sakshi ... arjun ... riya
all three life in confusion
continue soon

Ah, no no... you see Arjun is broken as the woman he loved for ten years left him all of a sudden which turned him into an emotionally abusive husband and by the time Arjun could hold his horses, step out of his shadows and embrace his present, he received his dead wife.

That's what truly broke Arjun and he thinks that it was due to Riya that everything happened. So when he saw her, the volcano erupted.

So that's why he is behaving that way :) Stay tuned!

Originally posted by: samirakhan16
I am so confused who s the heroine end of the story ariya ki yeh arjun and shikshi ki I love ariya that y I want to know

Ok let me tell you that this is not a pre written story so honestly even I don't know who is going to get whom! Or maybe neither will get him!

Originally posted by: Asyalover
...so much emotional drive...i feel so enraged at arjun here...

Thanks for ur comment, I hope the further chapters will help you understand Arjun more :)

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Cieli.Santi
Well this story is amazing. Just love it

Thanks a ton!

Originally posted by: anu91
Shri...
It was awesome update...
Emotionally written...
Loved it so much...

Thank u so much dost!

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Super Awwwsssmmm Updates
Loved it to the core
It was Brilliant
You have portrayed each n every emotion so Beautifully
Arjun's pain of losing his first love then his guilt for not able to give Roshni what she rightfully deserved n now with Sakshi he want to move on but can't
Loved the way you portrayed Roshni's character
Riya is now regretting her decision n realised her mistake
Sakshi's pain... what she is going through is unimaginable
Now she has broken completely
Let's see what happens next

Wonderfully Written
Emotionally Beautiful

Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thank you so much Nikita! I truly love the way you have penned down your comment! Thanks a bunch, I hope the next chapter surprises you to your liking!

Originally posted by: Devangana
Absolutely fantastic. Have no words to describe how beautifully Arjun, Sakshi, Roshni's emotions were portrayed. Waiting for the next update...

Thanks a ton for your comment! :)

Originally posted by: angelicdeepti
Very emotional updates
Beautifully written
Had tears in my eyes whike reading... could feel each emotion

Continue soon

Oh dear thank you so much! It means a ton when you can connect with the story! :)

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jayanthi

@jayprabu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Amazingly and beautifully written updates. You words have brought the emotions of the characters so well that I felt like I was going through everything. I felt more pain towards Sakshi. Roshni's part was very impressive and sad. Arjun who doesn't know how to deal with his first lost love. Unintentionally he hurt Roshini and not able to forgive himself for the way he treated her. Sakshi, he tries but still he is hurting her more. But he is the one who is most broken of all. Eagerly waiting to know what happens next.

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sakshiarjun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Nice job dear... keep it up...

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Areesha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

<font size="3">Part 1

#Your Words:

"Hold On People!

First of all let me clarify that none of the girls are villains out here so you won't see anyone turning into Shakespeare's Don John for no reason. Plus I have no intentions of belittling either of the female leads"

Phew that's a relief 😆

"I needed a strong character opposite Arjun hence resorted to take Riya

Ummm okay, your the writer sis 😛

So ariya is married here, nice but!!!!!
Clearly Arjun haven't gotten over his past ant its NOT roshini behind his this state

Poor sakshi, she lost all her charms and hope for a better and full of happiness life with her love 😭

Arjun is aware of her change and fear but sadly can't help himself or her

It's a good thing he still think of her and tried to mend something between them

Scenery at the beach was describe beautifully 😊
I thought I was there seeing myself

Oh Riya is back!!!!
What is Arjun going to do now??

Going to get know
No thanks for pm as of your command 😛</font>

Edited by Areesha566 - 9 years ago

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Areesha

@Areesha566

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Part 2

It was sooo hurtfully true
You show how can people change (even I am changed, am not the girl who used to trust everyone, now I can't trust my own people to share what I felt and its soo frustrating)
Riya kitni badal gayi,
Money, Power, Fame she wanted all and for get that she through everything out of her live, even HER LOVE 😭
Hopefully now Arakshi will share there inner turmoil and fears and arjun won't break sakshi's trust...

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Part 3

Awesome
No truly it was really very awesome
The way you describe sakshi's affection and Arjun's reaction
His wanting her but in denial of it
Then putting in blame on her
Then the flashbacks...
I had shivers reading them
Poor roshini
She had to bear all that for nothing
And now he's doing this again with sakshi 😭
I can't say more other than that it was fantastic
Love it

P.s. dates were misplace in updates 😛
Pehle December 2010 aya phir March 2010

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Part 4

I am speechless
Love it 👏
Juldi update karo di
Can't wait

P.S. sorry for late reply

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Chapter 3 & 4

Pehle hi bata deti hoon main ki I could never hate u. I love u🤗 Its just a update. Aur as u who knows... someone else might pop in too!😆

Coming to the update it was awesome as always👏👏👏
U always describe each n every person's emotions very well. Arjun's pain of losing Roshni, his guilt when he was with Sakshi, his past when he saw Riya, everything.
In sabki reason vo Riya hain. Arjun ne usse itna pyaar kiya ki na vo Roshni ko pyaar karpaaya aur na Sakshi ko. Riya always haunted him

Even the dead body of Roshni didn't have the twisted pain nor emptiness in her eyes as his wife of two years stared right back at them. Sakshi had died, then and there. - This line describes how Sakshi felt seeing her husband with another girl. 😭😭😭