Arakshi SS : Jatishwar *ch 5 & 6- pg 15* updated - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
#61
nice update
sakshi looking for arjun first thing in the mrning and arjun gone to get her clothes 😊
so sam is here and he is half bengali and half rajasthani
arjun jealous of sam for his bonding with sakshi
i liked it how arjun said ur not beautiful seems he was trying to say that to himself
rather then sakshi 😛
thanks for pm
will comment on mars/ v in few days 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
nice update devil
hmmm...samy ki entry ho gyi...half bengali half rajasthani...wah wah yaha bhi tumne sam ka rajasthani connection dikha diya...hehehe
luvd d bonding of shaakhi nd samy...bcz of der sufferings dey can.relate each others pain
Arjun nd shakshi ki bond to start hi fight se hui
ufff...ye shakshi har story mein Arjun ko glt hi kyun samajhti h ...binabaat lga diya uske face pr
shakshi is a strong girl ... had lost prents bt still manahe to rescue her brother frmroits...luvd it.
hehehe...shakshi ko bura lga vn Arjun said she is nt beautifu 😃 🤣
nw cm to my fav character...;-)
Arjun is birth mein bhi wrng k against ldrha hai...gr8 😛
he saved ppl nd also dey gave shltr to refuges... 👏
Needed stuff lana samy ka plan tha Arjun ka nhi...bechara sam ko dantne k chakkar mein khud fas gya 😃
Arjun said to shakshi"u r nt dat beautiful" bt seems more den shakshi he tries to convince himself 🤣
👏 👏
luvd dis new version of JBUHB...prolouge pdhkr lga tha k uska new version h ...I vs gng to ask u tmne last ch mein khud hi clear krdia
bengali k dialouges k liye thanksss U lvd it ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Loved it. Arjun-Sakshi moments were too good. Continue soon please.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Strawberryyy... Eeesh.. That chain scene *hides*
I was listening to a soft bangla song by him at that time u know ;) and so naturally I almost went flat on the train's floor

Once again, beautiful beautiful writing.. Damn kichu notun bhabhte hobe :P

I loved sam's character.. He's always the perfect friend :) loved his conversation with Sakshi.. Hehe the bengali dialogues make jt so real to me.. I can almost imagine them speak
Btw u asked for rain songs? He he he he he
Check out ei bhalo ei kharap and also mone porle

Thud
Thud

Ok back! I'm loving their growing attraction ;) waiting to read what u have in store for us next.. Continue soonwa <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: sairam175

Awesome part

Sakshi wake up and search for arjun
Like Sam and sakshi bond
Wow arakshi fright is nice
Like there pov
Con soon


Thank you dear for your comment! Glad you liked the proceedings of the chapter :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Awesome update dear
Loved it

Aah I always wait for your comments ji!

Shaakhi is relaxed to find her little bro happy! good!

Yeah, she's a sweet girl out here!

Sameer n his wierd accent, but he's really sweet! Teasing Shaakhi with Arjun's name, yahan bhi enjoy kar raha hai! Shaakhi-Sameer share a sweet relation, beautifully written!

Ab Sameer ko yeh chance kaise na de?

Poor Shaakhi, Sameer isn't leaving any chance to tease her, though unknowingly! Arjun buying clothes for her, oh my!!

Hahha!

the fierce convo of Arakhi, it was burning! Sameer was still enjoying in teasing his friend!
Arjun was shopping for her, Shaakhi, you've really got a bad timing! very bad! The next scene that followed, I'd already guessed it n it was the same, but I enjoyed it thoroughly!

Haha! Glad you loved it Yeah... either Arjun has a bad timing of speech or Shaakhi has a bad timing of entry - chose your pick 😆

"Enough for Arjun to sigh,... be miles away from her." I don't think you'd want that at all!
She gave her gold chain, whoa, n Arjun was freaked out! Arjun get a grip, you're losing yourself! haha! The girl is busy shouting n he's in his lala land! Oh God!!

Hahahhaa! Well he does have some control over his thoughts 😆

He asked her to help them, n she agreed! Good!
She isn't beautiful, oh really?!? another fiery convo!

😳 😳 😳 We know whom he was actually convincing ;)

"To accept an apology..." loved this line to the core!
He spoke of trust, well that's a wonderful beginning!

I simply loved your comment! Thank you!!!

do continu soon
thanks for pm
Love,
😊
p.s. - Christmas surprise.. oh that's quite long! But will wait! :P

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Posted: 10 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Beautifully Written
Loved the bonding Sam-Shaakhi share Sooo Sweet
Awww he was teasing her with Arjun's name
Aye, bunu... Arjun da ikane neyi ." Loved this line :D
Wow! Arjun was shopping for Shaakhi Lovely but his outburst hurt her
Loved Arakshi's heated convo Supper Awwwsssmmm
Arjun want her to help them n she accept nice
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM


Aww! Thank you so much for your comment! I am glad you liked this version of Sameer as well :) Hope you like the next part as well 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice update
sakshi looking for arjun first thing in the mrning and arjun gone to get her clothes 😊
so sam is here and he is half bengali and half rajasthani
arjun jealous of sam for his bonding with sakshi
i liked it how arjun said ur not beautiful seems he was trying to say that to himself
rather then sakshi 😛
thanks for pm
will comment on mars/ v in few days 😊


Thanks a ton shefu! Yep a perfect summary of the chapter!

Yep you exactly caught what Arjun was trying to portray 😉

Take your own time sweetie!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: prachi90

nice update devil

Woah! After so many days and thank you for your huge comment!!!

hmmm...samy ki entry ho gyi...half bengali half rajasthani...wah wah yaha bhi tumne sam ka rajasthani connection dikha diya...hehehe

Sameer ko Rajasthani na banau yet toh impossible hai ji!!!

luvd d bonding of shaakhi nd samy...bcz of der sufferings dey can.relate each others pain
Arjun nd shakshi ki bond to start hi fight se hui
ufff...ye shakshi har story mein Arjun ko glt hi kyun samajhti h ...binabaat lga diya uske face pr
shakshi is a strong girl ... had lost prents bt still manahe to rescue her brother frmroits...luvd it.
hehehe...shakshi ko bura lga vn Arjun said she is nt beautifu 😃 🤣

Han ji, Arakshi ke meeting kabhi soft aur ache se ho sakta hai? Only Ritu has mastered the art of writing Arjun and Sakshi in a believable circumstance. Hum toh bhai aasmaan main teer feking 😆

nw cm to my fav character...;-)
Arjun is birth mein bhi wrng k against ldrha hai...gr8 😛
he saved ppl nd also dey gave shltr to refuges... 👏
Needed stuff lana samy ka plan tha Arjun ka nhi...bechara sam ko dantne k chakkar mein khud fas gya 😃
Arjun said to shakshi"u r nt dat beautiful" bt seems more den shakshi he tries to convince himself 🤣

Haha, woh sach hai!!!!

👏 👏
luvd dis new version of JBUHB...prolouge pdhkr lga tha k uska new version h ...I vs gng to ask u tmne last ch mein khud hi clear krdia

Haan, correct! it's a much more revised version of that one :)

bengali k dialouges k liye thanksss U lvd it ⭐️

Welcome 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Devangana

Loved it. Arjun-Sakshi moments were too good. Continue soon please.


Aww! Thanks a ton Devangana! Hope you like the next chapter!

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