Arakshi SS : Jatishwar *ch 5 & 6- pg 15* updated - Page 5

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu

unres

and one more thing...ye IF pr font kuch zyda hi chota hai padha nhi jaa rha

mujhe lga hi tha ye aye khuda ka new version hoga...

interesting...and thanks for telling the meaning of jatishwar

interesting story lines...

sakshi ka bhai hai aur uske parents already maare jaa chuke hai

sakshi ne jhut bola aur uske next second hi uske bhai ne uske jhut ki poll khol di

Originally posted by: preeti4

awesome update
loved it
continue soon

nd thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

Supr awesome update...

So sorry for short!! Busy!!!

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Its very beautiful written Gudiya. Story seems interesting

Sakshi is afraid for her baby brother. Aur her saviour is our Arjun😃

Partition was so painful. Sakshi's parents got killed😭😭😭

Thanks for telling us the meaning of Sak - khi n Jatishwar.

Continue soon

Originally posted by: Swara85

A superb start dear..👍🏼Having found the interest in reading historical Fiction recently, I find this more interesting.😳
The way she was saving her brother and her thoughts..her struggle to be safe..everything was well written.I liked it very much.
Arjun's entry mast thi..! So he is not in favour of the partition and Sakshi is a muslim and now came to west Bengal. Haina? I'm gathering the facts so I could remember it later too.
Finally she is safe but I'm waiting to know what Arjun will tell Sakshi tomo..Anyways it was a very nice update..Liked it.

Thanks for telling the meaning of jaitishwar..But is it a Bengali word or a hindi.?
P.s: Are u a bengali? Well, because of the bengali dialogues I shall learn some..😳so thanks for that.

Thanks for pm and continue soon.

Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves

Strawberryyy!🤗

I know I am like terribly terribly late.. Kya karein! Work kept me busy and then I was into reading something (onno kothao bolchi😉)

Oooh no issues, I am stull running behind schedule in commenting for you *death by mortification situation for me* Oooh, you didn't tell me yet RItzy love... *frowning*

Anyway.. I am sooo sorry for commenting this late! I need to comment on ire too.. ekhon thekei sorry bolchi☺️

Lol, arekbaar sorry bolbi toh khabi amar kash theke! SYS 😉

First of alll... thank you soo much for re-writing this for meee *jumps up and down*

I had to! Tune manga aur hum pesh laaye... lol!

I love love love that u wrote the dialogues in Bangla.. eeesh just imagining him speaking bangla☺️

I haven't read much of Hussain but I adore him already.. and Sakshi (or Shakhkhi) is just the perfect sister.. my heart goes out to her for all that she's gone through.

Yeah, now he can even sing bengali songs *With Arijit's voice over ofc*

Oh wait.. Ritu? Faint hoi geli ki? I was going on the lines of baarish... for the new jonom and for the old jonom suggest me a bangali arijit song...

Ritu?? Shit... *someone help she's fainted I guess!* 😉

Oh dare you wink back at me on thinking baarish 😡

Strawberry u are doing a brilliant job at the history aspect of it.. I could feel as if I was there.. truly, hats off! And your writing my dear.. I already said you've come a long long way from Aye Khuda.. I have a feeling this is gonna become a favourite of mine😳

Eesh *me faints in the praisewa*

I loved their first meet.. hoping for more soon! Joldi lekh!😛

*Ne, diye delam! pore nei aar bol bhalo lege che ki na, and not necessary to comment... you can drop a word at times and that's a go green signal pour moi*

P.S - Hope SF is treating u well😃

Yes indeed, love you for your words!

S 😉