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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
A superb start dear..👍🏼Having found the interest in reading historical Fiction recently, I find this more interesting.😳
The way she was saving her brother and her thoughts..her struggle to be safe..everything was well written.I liked it very much.
Arjun's entry mast thi..! So he is not in favour of the partition and Sakshi is a muslim and now came to west Bengal. Haina? I'm gathering the facts so I could remember it later too.
Finally she is safe but I'm waiting to know what Arjun will tell Sakshi tomo..Anyways it was a very nice update..Liked it.

Thanks for telling the meaning of jaitishwar..But is it a Bengali word or a hindi.?
P.s: Are u a bengali? Well, because of the bengali dialogues I shall learn some..
😳so thanks for that.

Thanks for pm and continue soon.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
SUPER DUPER UPDATE👏
Loved the Bengali version😃
I don't understand what is the difference b/w Hindu and Muslims...we all are humans...isn't that enough??...😔
You portrayed Sakshi's emotions very well..
Loved the bond between siblings😊
So Sakshi really misunderstood Arjun...
Is Sakshi Jatishwar??...

Plsss update it soon and thankxxx for pm...😃

Note:-Don't forget to update My fav.story...Mars v/s Venus...and also don't forget my request...😃


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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
oye why didnt i read it before?
itna acha jarahi hai
cant wait to read more
abhi bhi title ka meaning ni samjha
koi n teacherji samjha denge nxt time na😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Strawberryyy!🤗
I know I am like terribly terribly late.. Kya karein! Work kept me busy and then I was into reading something (onno kothao bolchi😉) Anyway.. I am sooo sorry for commenting this late! I need to comment on ire too.. ekhon thekei sorry bolchi☺️

First of alll... thank you soo much for re-writing this for meee *jumps up and down*
I love love love that u wrote the dialogues in Bangla.. eeesh just imagining him speaking bangla☺️
I haven't read much of Hussain but I adore him already.. and Sakshi (or Shakhkhi) is just the perfect sister.. my heart goes out to her for all that she's gone through.

Strawberry u are doing a brilliant job at the history aspect of it.. I could feel as if I was there.. truly, hats off! And your writing my dear.. I already said you've come a long long way from Aye Khuda.. I have a feeling this is gonna become a favourite of mine😳
I loved their first meet.. hoping for more soon! Joldi lekh!😛
P.S - Hope SF is treating u well😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu

unres

and one more thing...ye IF pr font kuch zyda hi chota hai padha nhi jaa rha
mujhe lga hi tha ye aye khuda ka new version hoga...
interesting...and thanks for telling the meaning of jatishwar
interesting story lines...
sakshi ka bhai hai aur uske parents already maare jaa chuke hai
sakshi ne jhut bola aur uske next second hi uske bhai ne uske jhut ki poll khol di


Yeh Aye Khuda ka ek revised and revamped version hai :)

Glad you liked it.

Btw, if you read the note I clearly stated ki zoom karo... and if not, don't worry... you do get the blog links too 😉

Originally posted by: sairam175

Awesome part

Concept is superb
Ur writing skills no words yaar
Amazing thought
Sakshi and her brother are in danger
Arjun saved her but she misunderstand him
She is Muslim nice
Con so sooon
Thanks for pm


I am so glad you love this sooo much! Means a lot!

Originally posted by: 0913155

Omg😛loved the update😃😆 where do uvget such awesome concept😛 loved the way saakshi and arjun met

plz continue soon thanx for pm


Haha! No idea dear!

thanks btw

Originally posted by: utsha

Finally...the wait is over. Fabulous update dear. Na ekta thanks toh toke boltei hobe for not taking much time to update. Secondly I must appreciate ur mellifluous writing skills for which I'm falling short of words to describe.


One more thing that I like to mention is the educational part of it --- IMPARTIALITY & BELIEVING IN HUMANITY. I simply loved it.

R ki bolbo?. The Bengali versions r awesome & flawless. Thanks for the PM & continue soon to satisfy the hungry mind dear.


HThank you for this wonderful comment! It truly means a lot for me and glad you didn't just point out or summarize it! Thanks a ton again! Glad you loved the way I wrote it, hope you like the next chapter just as much!


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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: preeti4

awesome update
loved it
continue soon

nd thanks for pm


Thanks

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
It was Supperbbb
Loved Arakshi first meet
Arjun saved Sakshi n her brother but she misunderstand him
Loved the Bengali versions Imagining Atjun-Sakshi talking in Bengali it's Amazing
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM


Thanks a ton! Glad you loved the bengali touch

Originally posted by: Maha-Srk

really nyc plz update


Thank you

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

I am not in love with this story yet but have fallen in deep love for the black bold italic fonts .the true soul of the story perhaps lies in the touch of bengali punches.awaiting eagerly for the forthcoming update.Wishing for many interesting twists and turns and surprises too..😊😊

thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits...😊😊


Oh I always wait for your comments! Glad you have loved the writing and I hope you like the story as well! Yep, I was wondering as to why didn't I write something with which I can connect so deeply!

Originally posted by: shaheen82

awesome update...
Just loved it...
Sakshi trying to protect her brother...
Can't wait to read more..
Plz continue soon..
Nd thanx for pm 😊


Glad you liked it, thank you


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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

Supr awesome update...

So sorry for short!! Busy!!!


Thank you for comment

Originally posted by: _Shivani_

Awesome update...
Loved it...
Update Soon


Thank you

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Partition was indeed very painful for everyone...😭😭😭
Arjun helped Sakshi in past life...😃😃😃
Jatishwar meansa person who remembers his past life...thats interesting...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...


Glad you loved it! Yeah partition is always painful! 😭

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice update
partition time was real cruel time for all the people irrespective of religion
oh so jatishwar means one who remember his past
so who will remember the past arjun or sakshi
ya this did remind me of ye khuda 😊
thanks for pm


Hey shefu dear! Glad tumhe itna pasand aaya! This means so much for me... hehehe... ab kyu bataun???? 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Its very beautiful written Gudiya. Story seems interesting

Sakshi is afraid for her baby brother. Aur her saviour is our Arjun😃

Partition was so painful. Sakshi's parents got killed😭😭😭

Thanks for telling us the meaning of Sak - khi n Jatishwar.

Continue soon


Thank you so much Fairy! Glad you loved it sooo much!


Thanks!

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

Loved the chpyr..
Arma u do wonders...
Jatiswar... Is going to b amazing...
Contd. Soonish
Thnx for pm


Thanks a ton dear! This really means a lot to me!

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Awesome start dear!
loved it!
the time of partition of Bengal.. beautifully written.. I really thought I was in that era, reading the history no, actually travelling there!
loved to read all the Bengali convo's! ye padhte padhte kafi kuch seekh jaungi! I love learning different languages!
Shaakhi is running to save her n her brother's life! She really cares for him so much! Her parents already killed n then she reached West Bengal.
n here she meets Arjun! He took her to the camp! Bande ko uss janam me bhi jhoot paand nahi tha.. poor Shaakhi! jaan bachane ke liye ek jhoot bola aur uske bhai ne wo bhi pol khol di! hehe! Arjun hates lies n liars! He is one of the revolutionists! nice!
"The man she misunderstood n was yet to understand." This line was the stealer! loved it to the core!
eagerly waiting for the next update
do continu soon
thanks for pm
p.s. - also waiting for the book! ;)


Waaah... I love your comments as always! Oh dear, you praise me too much 😳 I think Arjun pretty much suits the revolutionist role!

Lol, I know... the bhai is evilly cute <3

Glad you pointed out that line!!!

Book coming as a christmas surprise ;)

Loads of love!!!!

You know who!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Swara85

A superb start dear..👍🏼Having found the interest in reading historical Fiction recently, I find this more interesting.😳
The way she was saving her brother and her thoughts..her struggle to be safe..everything was well written.I liked it very much.
Arjun's entry mast thi..! So he is not in favour of the partition and Sakshi is a muslim and now came to west Bengal. Haina? I'm gathering the facts so I could remember it later too.
Finally she is safe but I'm waiting to know what Arjun will tell Sakshi tomo..Anyways it was a very nice update..Liked it.

Thanks for telling the meaning of jaitishwar..But is it a Bengali word or a hindi.?
P.s: Are u a bengali? Well, because of the bengali dialogues I shall learn some..
😳so thanks for that.

Thanks for pm and continue soon.



Oh dear, thanks a ton for your words! It's so much for me! It's a bangla word :) I am not aware though if it means the same in another language!

You have got it perfectly!!!

Yep, I don't think I could have pulled this off had I not been one *hehe*

Originally posted by: Desirable_Star

SUPER DUPER UPDATE👏

Loved the Bengali version😃
I don't understand what is the difference b/w Hindu and Muslims...we all are humans...isn't that enough??...😔
You portrayed Sakshi's emotions very well..
Loved the bond between siblings😊
So Sakshi really misunderstood Arjun...
Is Sakshi Jatishwar??...

Plsss update it soon and thankxxx for pm...😃

Note:-Don't forget to update My fav.story...Mars v/s Venus...and also don't forget my request...😃



Glad you loved it dear. I wish everyone thought the same as us!

Who is Jatishwar or not, yeh next few chapters ke baad pata chalega.

Hope you read Mars V/S Venus update!

I shall definitely try to help you out :) Hope you are picking up bengali from here 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves

Strawberryyy!🤗

I know I am like terribly terribly late.. Kya karein! Work kept me busy and then I was into reading something (onno kothao bolchi😉)

Oooh no issues, I am stull running behind schedule in commenting for you *death by mortification situation for me* Oooh, you didn't tell me yet RItzy love... *frowning*

Anyway.. I am sooo sorry for commenting this late! I need to comment on ire too.. ekhon thekei sorry bolchi☺️

Lol, arekbaar sorry bolbi toh khabi amar kash theke! SYS 😉

First of alll... thank you soo much for re-writing this for meee *jumps up and down*

I had to! Tune manga aur hum pesh laaye... lol!

I love love love that u wrote the dialogues in Bangla.. eeesh just imagining him speaking bangla☺️
I haven't read much of Hussain but I adore him already.. and Sakshi (or Shakhkhi) is just the perfect sister.. my heart goes out to her for all that she's gone through.

Yeah, now he can even sing bengali songs *With Arijit's voice over ofc*

Oh wait.. Ritu? Faint hoi geli ki? I was going on the lines of baarish... for the new jonom and for the old jonom suggest me a bangali arijit song...

Ritu?? Shit... *someone help she's fainted I guess!* 😉

Oh dare you wink back at me on thinking baarish 😡

Strawberry u are doing a brilliant job at the history aspect of it.. I could feel as if I was there.. truly, hats off! And your writing my dear.. I already said you've come a long long way from Aye Khuda.. I have a feeling this is gonna become a favourite of mine😳

Eesh *me faints in the praisewa*

I loved their first meet.. hoping for more soon! Joldi lekh!😛

*Ne, diye delam! pore nei aar bol bhalo lege che ki na, and not necessary to comment... you can drop a word at times and that's a go green signal pour moi*
P.S - Hope SF is treating u well😃

Yes indeed, love you for your words!

S 😉

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