Arakshi SS : Jatishwar *ch 5 & 6- pg 15* updated - Page 9

Originally posted by: 0913155

Lovely😊😃 confused which one to like more😉 aarakahi or kaya😉plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

It was perfect...😃😃😃

Sakshi learnt to save herself...😃😃😃

Finally Arakshi confessed...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

Another super amazing update dear!!🤗

OMG... this comment is so big! *thanks a ton*

I loved it to the core! You can understand it from the fact that I read this update thrice! Twice in Arakshi version n once in Kaya!😳

OMG... I love you yaar!

coming back to update,

Shaakhi was in a dream, she saw her parents before her. Their convo was sweet! She was emotionally exhausted after the dream,it was beautifully written! Loved the way she calmed her little bro!👏

I am really glad that this came out well <3

Arjun shook her to wake her from her sleep! Poor little boy was to scared for his sissy!

The whole scene of fight was perfectly put up! I imagined every part n enjoyed it! *maar-dhaad is my personal favt* 😉😆

Hehehe... aapka toh maar dhaad se hi lagau hai ji 😆 😆 😆

Arjun's team-mates were being killed brutally, but he didn't sit crying, he didn't let their sacrifice go waste! He fought with the policemen bravely! Sameer too! "He knew who died...weep or break down" this line says so much!👏 fantastic!

Thank you so much Neha! I can't tell u how much your words mean for me!

He leaves Shaakhi with a heavy heart, his mind wanders of in dreams of a beautiful life, but again he gets a control of himself n fights on, this is what a true soldier is like, they don't let their dreams come in way of their mission! He fought bravely till what he felt like a temporary end!

Ah yes... that's true... a teeny tribute to our soldiers! :D

Then he saw her again, she came as an incarnation of Goddess Kali! This reminds me of a dance we'd performed, in the end the lead girl kills the villain who's a rapist, it ended with lines, "Maar de usse na rehem kar... Durga tu hi Kaali tu hi!" This suits aptly in this situation! Shaakhi fought courageously with the men, to save her man! 👏 You've beautifully portrayed her similarities with the Kali! Superb!

THANKS A TON! Yes... these lines are perfect, I believe any woman has to power to fight as long as she has the will to do so. I am so amused that we're in a country where the mightiest of all Gods is a women (Durga) , the destructor of all is a woman (Kali) and the consort of the greatest lord (Parvati) are worshipped with blind faith...

Yet, that same woman, in the form of a human... gets raped, abused, mistreated and forced...

A country of ironies!

I read a quote which stirred my heart.

"Goddess Lakshmi was so pleased by their devotion that she decided to visit them.

But they aborted the girl child."

The scene where she kills the man, it took my heart, you've put it up in the best possible way,really!

Then the petrol bomb, whoa! Girl is definitely too good in action! reminds me of my lead of RB!😉😆

Kya pata, punar janam main kahi Neha na nikal aaye 😉 🤣

"The rest immediately fled" 🤣 good one! She then went ahead n killed right hand man of Curzon, wow!!👍🏼 "..they would be needing protection"🤣 hell true!👏

Ab jab Kali ka avatar ek aurat main aaye... tab kaunsa insaan khada rehke apne mauth ko bulayega?

Arjun woke up from what he felt like death, nice! Shaakhi's way of reference gave Sameer a kind of shock 😆 he got another chance for teasing them!

The rest Arakshi scene, I'm too short of words, what to say☺️ confession was beautifully written! 😳

Ah... you won't believe but I was a bit freaked out for that!

Do continu soon

thanks for pm

Thanks for you wonderful and fantastic comment!

Love,

You know.. 😉😛

Wah, yeh tagline kahi suna suna lag raha hai 😉

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Wowww Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it sooo very much
Shaakhi dream about her parents n their convo nicely written
The war scene u described so well
" Hoitoba bhalo beshe felechi ..." Hayeee..!!! this line took my heart away Loved it
Loved the way Shaakhi fight for herself n others Mindblowing
Arakshi moments was Supper Awwssmm Sooo Beautiful n their confession Lovely
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

That was flawless.The coalesce of background agitation,blood smeared faces,burning tents and the desire to survive a happy life ennobled the update to a new platform.Loved the pace and progress of story.The story has a certain captivating ambience which makes the reader to remain hooked to it.In precise,the story is going great and in a majestic way.😊😊

Its needless to say how your words are the spells cast over us for days.Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.😊

Originally posted by: sairam175

Awesome part

Arakshi rocks

Wow loved it

Arjun confess his feelings nice

Con soon

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

what a chapter dear👏

Aww... thank you so so so much!

loved it how arjun inspite of not saying the whole thing confessed his feelings to sakshi and then he left her and sakshi ran after him

Kuch baatein chuppi main ho jaati hai 😉

and the the scene where u described sakshi killing the brit solider it felt like vaishno ma ne bharonath ka vadh kiya tha aur uska sar ma ke charno main tha
it was so brilliant

Thanks a TON dear! Really... thanks a TON! I really wanted to highlight the goddess element in her <3

ant then in carriage arjun finally said i love u to sakshi he was afraid that he will never get another chance to say his dil ki baat and how sakshi understood his fear and said she would prefer one day with him rather thousand days without him these r the sould made for each other jinko mauth bhi alag nahi kar sakti

True, they are made for each other :) I really hope that you like the next chapter too! <3 Means a lot for me!

thanks for pm 😃

Love <3