Arakshi SS : Jatishwar *ch 5 & 6- pg 15* updated

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: SeasonOfLeaves
Strawberryyy... Eeesh.. That chain scene *hides*
I was listening to a soft bangla song by him at that time u know ;) and so naturally I almost went flat on the train's floor

Once again, beautiful beautiful writing.. Damn kichu notun bhabhte hobe :P

I loved sam's character.. He's always the perfect friend :) loved his conversation with Sakshi.. Hehe the bengali dialogues make jt so real to me.. I can almost imagine them speak
Btw u asked for rain songs? He he he he he
Check out ei bhalo ei kharap and also mone porle

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Ok back! I'm loving their growing attraction ;) waiting to read what u have in store for us next.. Continue soonwa <3

Butterfly, eesh! Ami jantam... I knew it that if anybody was going to enjoy and notice the chain scene then it HAD to be you 😳

Haye... bangla gaan... waise jeta tui reccommend korli, I'll be using one of the songs in the next update (chapter 4) and i think you are going to love it!

What a fatafati song! And eesh... Arijit i hote holo?

I know... 😳

Hope you like this chapter re!

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Chapter 3

A/N : Woah... not even close to fifteen comments?

So does that put this story under Red Alert?

That's kind of a huge drop after the response from the previous chapter!

Anyways, huge thanks to all my lovely readers, have responded to you all personally so do check it out.

For Ritu : The chapter after this will have more of bangla song and that chain 😉 Brishti o bhaab... bas faint hoshna... 😆 Enjoy titaliya 😉

Btw, this is a MAHA update 😳

Love,

You know who 😳

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0913155

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Lovely😊😃 confused which one to like more😉 aarakahi or kaya😉plz continue soon

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sonai

@rajeeviansonai

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

lovely dear.u r awesome.plz continue

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Snehajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Awesome update...

It was perfect...😃😃😃

Sakshi learnt to save herself...😃😃😃

Finally Arakshi confessed...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Another super amazing update dear!!🤗

I loved it to the core! You can understand it from the fact that I read this update thrice! Twice in Arakshi version n once in Kaya!😳

coming back to update,

Shaakhi was in a dream, she saw her parents before her. Their convo was sweet! She was emotionally exhausted after the dream,it was beautifully written! Loved the way she calmed her little bro!👏

Arjun shook her to wake her from her sleep! Poor little boy was to scared for his sissy!

The whole scene of fight was perfectly put up! I imagined every part n enjoyed it! *maar-dhaad is my personal favt* 😉😆

Arjun's team-mates were being killed brutally, but he didn't sit crying, he didn't let their sacrifice go waste! He fought with the policemen bravely! Sameer too! "He knew who died...weep or break down" this line says so much!👏 fantastic! He leaves Shaakhi with a heavy heart, his mind wanders of in dreams of a beautiful life, but again he gets a control of himself n fights on, this is what a true soldier is like, they don't let their dreams come in way of their mission! He fought bravely till what he felt like a temporary end!

Then he saw her again, she came as an incarnation of Goddess Kali! This reminds me of a dance we'd performed, in the end the lead girl kills the villain who's a rapist, it ended with lines, "Maar de usse na rehem kar... Durga tu hi Kaali tu hi!" This suits aptly in this situation! Shaakhi fought courageously with the men, to save her man! 👏 You've beautifully portrayed her similarities with the Kali! Superb!

The scene where she kills the man, it took my heart, you've put it up in the best possible way,really!

Then the petrol bomb, whoa! Girl is definitely too good in action! reminds me of my lead of RB!😉😆

"The rest immediately fled" 🤣 good one! She then went ahead n killed right hand man of Curzon, wow!!👍🏼 "..they would be needing protection"🤣 hell true!👏

Arjun woke up from what he felt like death, nice! Shaakhi's way of reference gave Sameer a kind of shock 😆 he got another chance for teasing them!

The rest Arakshi scene, I'm too short of words, what to say☺️ confession was beautifully written! 😳

Do continu soon

thanks for pm

Love,

You know.. 😉😛

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Wowww Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it sooo very much
Shaakhi dream about her parents n their convo nicely written
The war scene u described so well
" Hoitoba bhalo beshe felechi ..." Hayeee..!!! this line took my heart away Loved it
Loved the way Shaakhi fight for herself n others Mindblowing
Arakshi moments was Supper Awwssmm Sooo Beautiful n their confession Lovely
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

That was flawless.The coalesce of background agitation,blood smeared faces,burning tents and the desire to survive a happy life ennobled the update to a new platform.Loved the pace and progress of story.The story has a certain captivating ambience which makes the reader to remain hooked to it.In precise,the story is going great and in a majestic way.😊😊

Its needless to say how your words are the spells cast over us for days.Thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits.😊