Arakshi SS : Jatishwar *ch 5 & 6- pg 15* updated

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preeti4

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

awesome update
loved it
continue soon

nd thanks for pm

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
It was Supperbbb
Loved Arakshi first meet
Arjun saved Sakshi n her brother but she misunderstand him
Loved the Bengali versions Imagining Atjun-Sakshi talking in Bengali it's Amazing
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

I am not in love with this story yet but have fallen in deep love for the black bold italic fonts .the true soul of the story perhaps lies in the touch of bengali punches.awaiting eagerly for the forthcoming update.Wishing for many interesting twists and turns and surprises too..😊😊

thanks for the pm and keep writing with unabated spirits...😊😊

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shaheen82

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

awesome update...
Just loved it...
Sakshi trying to protect her brother...
Can't wait to read more..
Plz continue soon..
Nd thanx for pm 😊

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Supr awesome update...

So sorry for short!! Busy!!!

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sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

nice update
partition time was real cruel time for all the people irrespective of religion
oh so jatishwar means one who remember his past
so who will remember the past arjun or sakshi
ya this did remind me of ye khuda 😊
thanks for pm

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Snehajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Awesome update...

Partition was indeed very painful for everyone...😭😭😭

Arjun helped Sakshi in past life...😃😃😃

Jatishwar meansa person who remembers his past life...thats interesting...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Nethravathi Jagadish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Its very beautiful written Gudiya. Story seems interesting

Sakshi is afraid for her baby brother. Aur her saviour is our Arjun😃

Partition was so painful. Sakshi's parents got killed😭😭😭

Thanks for telling us the meaning of Sak - khi n Jatishwar.

Continue soon

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misakiscarlet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Loved the chpyr..
Arma u do wonders...
Jatiswar... Is going to b amazing...
Contd. Soonish
Thnx for pm

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Delusional Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Awesome start dear!

loved it!

the time of partition of Bengal.. beautifully written.. I really thought I was in that era, reading the history no, actually travelling there!

loved to read all the Bengali convo's! ye padhte padhte kafi kuch seekh jaungi! I love learning different languages!

Shaakhi is running to save her n her brother's life! She really cares for him so much! Her parents already killed n then she reached West Bengal.

n here she meets Arjun! He took her to the camp! Bande ko uss janam me bhi jhoot paand nahi tha.. poor Shaakhi! jaan bachane ke liye ek jhoot bola aur uske bhai ne wo bhi pol khol di! hehe! Arjun hates lies n liars! He is one of the revolutionists! nice!

"The man she misunderstood n was yet to understand." This line was the stealer! loved it to the core!

eagerly waiting for the next update

do continu soon

thanks for pm

p.s. - also waiting for the book! ;)