Arakshi SS : Jatishwar *ch 5 & 6- pg 15* updated

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_Aditi_S

@Aditi_S

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awesome start

love the concept

waiting for the first part

thanx for the pm

cont soon😊

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Wow..

Awesome concept.

It's seems like Ay Khuda?

I really loved that one.

I am so sorry even I don't read ur stories now a days..

Actually not just urs but some others too.

I only follow which I have been following so far..

And let me tell u one thing.

Your stories are simply amazing.

The way you unfold the events one by one is simply breathtaking.

But as I told you before angst is not my genre.

You tried to push some sense in my thick skull regarding this topic but failed.

The fault is simply in me.

Never let ur reader's lack of response cloud ur judgement..

You are smart and witty and intelligent.

And we all love you with every fiber of our being.

Edited by EashaYousufzai - 10 years ago

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Hey dr...

ur story ill never fade away...

It was such a precious thing...

do write more shri...

The way of ur writing and the way it progress ill always chanceless...

waiting for ur new story to start...

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nice concept...😃😃😃

Continue soon...

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Mishthi_Shivsai

@Mishthi_Shivsai

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Aah jatishwar... Rebirth one of my fav topics of interest. Pls beshi wait koras na, taratari continue kor. Intriguing prologue. Tor likes ba comments er jonyo patience thakte pare but amar nei re. So continue soon, expecting a fresh burst from u dear after Ire. Rock with a complete new genre.

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Hi..
Ok firstly as always I like the banner very much..👍🏼
Concept is good..Read many stories on rebirth but I'm actually very curious to know and read it in Shree's style of writing.
And now what's the meaning of the title..?

Pm me when you update it and also when you update kaya story too (flames)..I don't usually visit that forum.

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Desirable_Star

@Desirable_Star

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

AWESOME CONCEPT👏

Plsss continue soon...

The Banner was also beautiful...👏

Don't think like that Shreetu dii...your stories are FAB...no comparison😃

Waiting eagerly for the update

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 35

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

seems really interesting

do continu soon dear

thanks for pm

p.s. - may I get an update of Oblivion?? *puppy face!* please!

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 35

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

interesting prologue n beautiful banner dear!

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IArmageddonI

@IArmageddonI

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
nice concept.

Thanks

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
Awesome start appijaan... Plss plsss plsss con.soon!!!
🤗

Sure dear :)

Originally posted by: sairam175
Awesome start
Interesting concept
Please con
And send me pm

Sure <3

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Nice concept Pari. Please continue soon

I know even I'm not able to read ur stories n comment on them. Sholly for that😭😭😭

Glad u loved it... it's fine :)

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu
Nice concept...
lets see what you write on rebirth 😉
and what is the meaning wo jatishwar 😕
story ka naam rakhne ki koi khas wajeh to hogi hi
start soon

Glad u love it too <3 Next update main pata chalega!