LOVE HAS NO LIMITS:- Part 17 UPDATED

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guyzzz I don't know whether it is right to write a story without anyone's interest but someone has encouraged me to write my first story without any hesitation...so HERE i present
LOVE HAS NO LIMITS!!!!

Before starting the story some points to be noted:-

1)Arjun lost his parents in an accident.But now he is happy and normal as he found a family in ETF.

2)Riya is there in the story and u may get to see some ariya scenes but basically it is arakshi story.

3)Sakshi is not a part of ETF.

So here I go

A middle aged man entered a huge building situated in the middle of Mumbai known as the hell for criminals and a justice court for innocent people, ETF. As soon as he entered the main office everybody turned silent not because they were afraid of their chief but because they respect him.

Inspite of going into his cabin he went into another cabin where two people were already present. He was welcomed with a dimple smile and an ignorance look from his 2nd in command. The girl came forward and wished him good morning and left the cabin for her two bosses. The two looked each other and the chief started the conversation.

Chief: Ab kya kiya maine jo mujhe subah subah aise looks diye jaa rhe hai?

2nd in command: Aap toh kuch karte hi nhi hai rathore sahib. Saari galti humari toh hai.

Rathore: Rawte ab kya hua?

Rawte: Kal raat ko kaha tha?

Rathore: Woh mai Aisha ko...

Cutting him in between

Rawte: Koi nhi...ab Aisha ke aage hum kuch bhi nhi hai.

Rathore: Tu ab firse shuru mat hoja...aur waise yahape chal kya raha tha?

Rawte: Kya...Riya mujhe sirf chai dene aayi thi.

Rathore(with a naughty smile):Accha...waise Rawte Riya acchi ladki hai.Tera itna khayal bhi rakhti hai...tu kuch sochta kyu nhi tum dono ke bare mei.

Rawte: Oh please...tu yahape apna marriage bureau mat khol ke baith jaa...i accept she is a nice girl but phir bhi...

Rathore: Accha baad mei baat karte hai iss bare mei...koi case aaya?

Rawte: Nhi

So here I finish my first chapter...Sorry for any mistakes...plzzz do comments...agar pasand nhi bhi aaya toh bhi atleast give me some reviews so that I can correct my mistakes...


Index

Part 1- Page 1
Part 2- Page 2
Part 3- Page 3
Part 4- Page 4
Part 5- Page 7
Part 6- Page 8
Teaser- Page 11
Part 7- Page 12
Part 8- Page 16
Part 9- Page 18
Part 10 and a Note- Page 21
Part 11- Page 24
Teaser and Pic- Page 27
Part 12- Page 28
Part 13 and a NOTE- Page 29
Part 14- Page 31
Part 15-Page 33
Part 16 - Page 35
Part 17 - Page 39

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi...good concept..👏but if its an arakshi story then please don't make riya as a negative character..basically i love both ariya and arakshi..so don't want to see riya like that.. 😊

waiting for the next part...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey awsm story
luvd it n i luv arakshi
cnt soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First of all welcome to writers land...And congrates for the first story!!!!🤗
Awsomee start ...
Truly i loved it...the tiffss between besties...nd Arjun is normal here(best point)...So Riya too in it..nd our bubly girl isnt part of ETF...Great...would love to see how they meet and love journey sttart...
One question..Arjun hving past of Roshni???
Anywayes con.soonn...nd try to give little big update😃
Waiting for next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ahh u bring me here again ..when I left this ...

What a brilliant start dear
Something fresh as Arjun is calm headed person inspite having a loss in his past
Good

The conversation between Rathore and Arjun was nice

I thought you are going to write character sketch too 😳...

Anyways you write really well

Don't hesitate please ...

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: parvathycv

hi...good concept..👏but if its an arakshi story then please don't make riya as a negative character..basically i love both ariya and arakshi..so don't want to see riya like that.. 😊

waiting for the next part...😊

Thank u so much for reading it...i will not make Riya a negitive character
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

First of all welcome to writers land...And congrates for the first story!!!!🤗
Awsomee start ...
Truly i loved it...the tiffss between besties...nd Arjun is normal here(best point)...So Riya too in it..nd our bubly girl isnt part of ETF...Great...would love to see how they meet and love journey sttart...
One question..Arjun hving past of Roshni???
Anywayes con.soonn...nd try to give little big update😃
Waiting for next...


Thank u for reading my story...and Arjun is having a past related to his parents but it didn't bother him much as he love ETF more than his family...Roshni is not there in my story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHADESOFNATURE

Ahh u bring me here again ..when I left this ...


What a brilliant start dear
Something fresh as Arjun is calm headed person inspite having a loss in his past
Good

The conversation between Rathore and Arjun was nice

I thought you are going to write character sketch too 😳...

Anyways you write really well

Don't hesitate please ...

Continue soon
N
Check your pm


Thank u...i was eagerly waiting for your comment as you helped me very much regarding all this...so thank u for everything😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shurtiekta

hey awsm story
luvd it n i luv arakshi
cnt soon..


Thank u so much for reading it...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: preetikumar


Thank u...i was eagerly waiting for your comment as you helped me very much regarding all this...so thank u for everything😊

Your welcome dear 😳

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