LOVE HAS NO LIMITS:- Part 17 UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
Awesome work Preeti...
We whole heartedly welcome u as writer...
Congrats for joining Writer's team...
My best wishes for your first story...

That's a bang entry...
great story line...
You are executing well...
Please do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika

Awesome work Preeti...

We whole heartedly welcome u as writer...
Congrats for joining Writer's team...
My best wishes for your first story...

That's a bang entry...
great story line...
You are executing well...
Please do continue soon...


Thank u for reading it...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
I want to clear one thing...my real name is Divisha and i love my name very much...so i will appreciate if u all call me by my name...

Coming to my story I m thankful that you all read and liked my story.I actually didn't expect such nice comments...so thank u once again

Here I come with the second part

After both bosses were done with their chit chats, they went to conference hall to find nobody there. As they headed towards their respective seats, Arjun sarcastically asked,"Aaj hum khud ko Good Morning wish kare kya?"

Sameer: Rawte ho sakta hai who log kisi case ki discovery kar rhe ho.

Arjun let out a sarcastic chuckle and said,"Haan discovery toh kar rhe honge aur pata hai kya...Shree and Liza ne apna khud ka Fight Discovery channel present kiya hai jiska main motive hai dikhana Human v/s Human'.Chotu yeh discover karne ki koshish kar raha hoga ki uski body ko aur build kaise kiya jaye. Woh kuch saalo mei alien toh ban hi jayega. Riya discovery kar rahi hogi ki stats mei aur kya bachta hai jo abhi tak duniya ko nhi pata chala. Aisha toh ladkiyon ka darr phelane ki discovery kar rahi hogi.

Sameer: Rawte please...

As Sameer was about to say something a curly haired boy and a body builder entered and wished them Good Morning.

Arjun: Kaha the tum log?

Shree: Sir woh Rathore sir ne mujhe new equipments ki list banane ko kaha tha taaki woh unka order de sake.

Sameer noded his head in a yes while Arjun asked Chotu,"tum kya kar rahe the?

Chotu: Woh mei Shree ke help kar rha tha.

With that reply they both sat on their chairs. Aisha entered and wished them and told Arjun that she is ready with the reports which Arjun asked her to make. Arjun smiled and said," Good job Aisha. I am really impressed.

Sameer looked at Arjun and gave a "You will never change" look.

Shree slowly muttered to Chotu,"Yaar Arjun sir ko Aisha ka kaam kab pasand nhi aata. Hamesha toh bolte hai I am impressed.

Just then Liza entered and gave Sameer a file and told him that these are the post-mortem reports for last murder case and Sameer told Aisha to attach these with final reports and submit it to headquarters. As Riya entered Arjun asked her where she was so she answered that she was helping Aisha to make reports.

Arjun commented, "ETF mei kuch khaas ho nhi rha saare ek dusre ki help kar rhe toh hum ETF band karke social work shuru kar dete.

Now Sameer said in anger," Agar yahape chit chat khatam ho gyi ho toh hume bohut kaam hai. GET BACK TO YOUR WORK.

Arjun said to himself," Jaag gaya chief, to Sameer, Good Morning Chief. One glare from Sameer was enough to shut Arjun.

AT NIGHT

In a jungle, a small cottage like house was there. A girl clad in white kurta and blue salwar entered the cottage with a beautiful smile and twinkle in her eyes. She wore a dupatta on her neck and her right hand was full of colourful bangles and had a bracelet on left hand. She kept her bag on the sofa table and went to a picture hanging in the middle of the wall. The picture was of a handsome man with sharp eyes and an attractive smile. There were many pictures of the same man on the wall. As she was about to touch the photo her phone rang. She pick up the phone and said, "Hello". A young man replied her and asked her,"Kya kar rahi thi?

Girl: About to spend some time with a special one.

Boy: Tumhe abhi aana hoga.

Girl: Aa rahi hu abhi.

The girl cut the call and turned to the photo and said in a sad voice," Sorry, time for some work. Will be back as soon as possible. Bye. Before closing the door of her cottage she threw a flying kiss at the photo and went for her "work".

Sameer opened the main door of his house. As he entered the house he heard some strange noises so he pulled out his gun and switched the lights on. He saw Arjun standing in one corner with the support of side table. He asked,"Tu toh mere aur Aisha ke baad nikla tha na Riya ko chodne toh tu yahape mere se phele kaise aaya?

Arjun: Mai Riya ko chodne gaya tha uski autobiography nikalne nhi.

Sameer: Thik hai bhai...firse mujhe pagal mat kar. Waise tu kar kya raha tha?

Asking this from Arjun he kept his gun in the drawer and went to wash his hands. He came back to found Arjun standing in front of their picture.

Arjun: Tera welcome.

Sameer: Bhai kabhi apne ghar bhi chale jaaya kar. Dekh toh le ki ek hafta ghar band karne ke baad kaisa lagta hai.

Arjun: Nhi yaaar...uss ghar mei akelapan mehsoos hota hai...koi welcome karne wala nhi hai.

Sameer: Haan yahape toh tu mujhe aise tariko se welcome karta hai. Meri shaadi ke baad bhi yahi rahega aur aise hi welcome karega?

Arjun: Haan. I hope Aisha ko koi problem nhi hogi.

Sameer: Kya?

Arjun: Kuch nhi. Tu bata ki kya khayega?

Sameer: Kuch bhi. Waise hum subah Riya aur tere baare mei baat kar rhe the. Kuch socha?

Arjun (ignoring Sameer's question): Yaar bohut neend aa rhi hai. Jaldi se khana khate hai aur so jaate hai. Kal baat karenge.

Sameer: Yaar teri yeh baat talne ki aadat mujhe bohut gandi lagti hai. Kal mai yeh baat sun ne keliye raha hi nhi toh?

Arjun: Tu jaa raha hai, with a smile, matlab yeh flat mera aur Aisha bhi.

Sameer said to himself, "Isska kuch nhi ho skta" and with frustration he left for kitchen and Arjun sat there laughing. After dinner they both went to their rooms saying goodnight to each other.

In Arjun's room,

He was thinking about Sameer's question about Riya. He like Riya but he feel that something is missing in his life which Riya can't give.

So second part finishes...sorry for any mistakes...hope you will like it...plzzz do comment

[Note:- Arjun gets friendly with Aisha so as to make Sameer jealous]

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsomeee update Divisha...Reallly enjoyed alot...nd loved it very very much...One thing i like nd love is our hero character...Suppperrbb...fantastic con o's nd taunts!!!😆...I just loved this Arjun ...ohhoy..new girl...why she is living in jungle area?? i thought she is our bubbly girl ...
Anywas waiting for next ...Con.soonnn!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Hello Divisha,

Just came across your work now. Love has no limits.
Good beginning and I like the fact that you don't drag your stories :) Good going and keep on writing like this.

I sense that there might be an angle or rather a triangle regarding Sakshi Riya Arjun. I truly hope it's not like that, and if it is then steer away from the usual love triangle sort 😊

Welcome as a writer and keep up on your good work 😃

Best rgds,

Armageddon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Divisha, that is a nice name...
Divi, u just nailed it... The way story is heading, there gonna be revelations, heart breaks and sacrifices (Think so...) ... The way u molded and sketched characters is awesome... It is lovely and funny update... Please do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

Awsomeee update Divisha...Reallly enjoyed alot...nd loved it very very much...One thing i like nd love is our hero character...Suppperrbb...fantastic con o's nd taunts!!!😆...I just loved this Arjun ...ohhoy..new girl...why she is living in jungle area?? i thought she is our bubbly girl ...
Anywas waiting for next ...Con.soonnn!!!!!!

Thank u so much...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: IArmageddonI

Hello Divisha,

Just came across your work now. Love has no limits.
Good beginning and I like the fact that you don't drag your stories :) Good going and keep on writing like this.

I sense that there might be an angle or rather a triangle regarding Sakshi Riya Arjun. I truly hope it's not like that, and if it is then steer away from the usual love triangle sort 😊

Welcome as a writer and keep up on your good work 😃

Best rgds,

Armageddon


Thank u so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika

Divisha, that is a nice name...

Divi, u just nailed it... The way story is heading, there gonna be revelations, heart breaks and sacrifices (Think so...) ... The way u molded and sketched characters is awesome... It is lovely and funny update... Please do continue soon...


Thank u so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
arjun is awsm luvd him
fab update
plss update nxt pt soon..

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