NEW STORY : Emperor of the Darkness...chap 17/pg 24 - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb... as always
Amazing...
Loved Aman-Dilawar's bonding
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
Awesome update
Loved it
So it was Sultan who saved Sik and Atya
He lost everything in a spur of moment
This Sultan looks mysterious
waiting for the next part
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Great pace o your story yaar
I love this plot a lot
the one that has not been looked upon much
Great job till date.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
The story of meeting Sikander's godfather... beautifully written part, specially the way Sik narrated Sultan, he seems interesting.
Aman 's dialogue bell a ring inside my head, why?

do continue & thanks for PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
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@neha : thanks partner..guess what...I havn't watched OUATIM till I wrote this...but after comments from you people have made me eager to watch this movie and specially this character...I too love Aman and siki... šŸ˜› stay tuned...keep reading.. 😊

@Shree : thanks darling...😊 trust me..i haven't watched OUATIM but now I guess I am too excited to watch it..glad you liked my shade of sultan...but sultan has lots of shades which are yet hidden..you will come to know soon...there is a long way still...well you got to wait for siki to come into limelight first...šŸ˜› Stay with me..and siki offcourse...šŸ˜›šŸ˜›

@gabbu : thanks dear...I am really glad you liked it..keep reading..update would come soon..😊

@Gold : thanks dear...I am glad you liked Sultan...update coming up...stay tuned...😊

@annu : thanks dushman...tumhe bhi ajay devgan yaad aa gaya...bas ek maine hi ye film nehi dekhi kya? 😲 I loved you last line...yep there goes the catch...keep reading..

@nikita : thanks dear..keep reading..

@skrafty : thanks dear..keep reading..

@kuchu : thanks KG...I am glad you liked it..stay tuned for the next parts...😊

@Atisha : thanks re...glad you liked the GodFather...more shades of him coming up...stay tuned..😊


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Posted: 10 years ago
#96
Check the replies in the post above..😊😊

Trailer for Chapter9


hmm leti to hain...per kya haina dilawar...har cheeze ki ek kimat to hoti hain...jaan bachane ki bhi hain...waise inse bhi zyada kuch aur jaan zyada leti hain...chalo dikhata hu,' he said and took me towards another room.

The room was the packing section of expensive and seldom available powdered dope drugs. They were packed inside special sealed plastic bags and transported inside bundles of cleaned clothes and uniformes. I looked on as the workers sealed thousands of packets and hid them between the clothes. I was sweating and feeling sick in the drug filled air and started inhaling sharply. Sultan had not missed my disturbed state and held onto my shoulder. I was feeling drowsy and my eyesight had started to blur out slowly. I heard Sultan's voice call me, but before I could turn I lost my senses.


dont forget your comments about the same...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Res//Unres
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!
me first
🄳🄳🄳🄳
Awesome update
loved it
Aman had Lunch with Sikki
constable was shockedšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Sik told the next part of his story
Loved the Drug Supply part
Sultan brought the dead bodies of Abbu and Ammi
ab kya hoga?????
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Edited by skrafty - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
sorry sorry sorry di
i know i am commenting after almost a month, i had an accident and wasn't allowd and not in a state to use cell

update was really good as usual
thankyou so much for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
yippe me first
can't dance not allowed
thanks to my sis jisnd fast forward mein part parha aur ab mere liye comment kar rahi hai

update was super duper dhamakedar blockbuster wala hit tha

loving this story more and more
thanks for pm

p.s. Mera blog invite expire hone wala hai, please re invite me
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update Di
loved it
Aman n Siki had lunch together n the constable was shocked..hehe!šŸ˜†
loved this line " when someone genuinely cares for him he doubts his concerns,but when someone fakes the concerns, humans trust them" superb n really true!šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ¼
Siki told the rest of the story..
Atya was eager to meet her Ammi.. Dilwar found it hard to answer her😭
Sultan ran illegal business of drugs n weapons..😳
Dilawar fainted due to smell of drugs.. poor child.. šŸ˜‰
the drug supply was beautifully penned.. kitna ghumkar sab hota tha.. 😲
Siki doesn't miss a chance to tease AmanšŸ˜†
Siki learned the trick of hiding from Sultan..good!šŸ‘šŸ¼
Sultan brought bodies of Ammi n Abbu.. 🤢
ab aage kya hoga??šŸ¤”
interesting!
do continu soon
thanks for pm

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