Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heylooo! Yeh kya I wasn't supposed to start a new story

But I was itching to write this just today - it just jumped at me when I got a little free at work *touchwood better not jinx it lol* 😆 and yeah the crazy me started writing.
I haven't even decided on a title yet🤪

So anywaaay, before I proceed on building the story and thinking of a title, I wanted to give you a lil preview of this 😳 let me know if you would like me to continue!
Very limited readers these days, so would only continue if you want me tooo!😃

Um, don't worry the update for "Forever with You" is coming up next (mostly tomorrow or Friday)

It won't be very long...maybe 8 chapters or so! The below POV is from Piya, the fourteen-year old daughter of Arakshi.
Read onnn..hope u like it!😳
Edited: YAY found a title!😳



Index:

Chapter 1 - Remembrance - Page 1

Chapter 2 - The Phone Call - Page 4

Chapter 3 - Memories of the Night - Page 7

Chapter 4 - The Valley of the Mist - Page 11

Chapter 5 - The Man in the Mist and the Woman with a Past - Page 15

Chapter 6 - Silent Conversations - Page 18

Chapter 7 - Serendipity - Page 22

Chapter 8 - Reminiscent Rain - Page 25

Chapter 9 - Colours of Love - Page 27

Chapter 10 - Matters of the Heart - Page 30

Chapter 11 - Facing the Past - Page 33

Chapter 12 - The Dark and the Distorted - Page 37

Chapter 13 - Moments of Love - Page 40

Chapter 14 - The Final Picture - Page 44

Chapter 15 - The Next Moves - Page 47

Chapter 16 - Checkmate - Page 50

Chapter 17 - The House of Memories - Page 53

Chapter 18 - Touch - Page 56

Chapter 19 - The Last Letters - Page 59

Chapter 20 - Second Chances - Page 63

Chapter 21 - Darkness and Moonlight - Page 66

Chapter 22 - The Perfect Picture - Page 69

Epilogue - A Christmas Surprise - Page 69

Epilogue 2 - Page 72

Bonus Chapter - Page 75

Chapter 1 - Remembrance

June, 2014

I don't know why she left. I just remember that one day it was suddenly just my father and me. And the empty house. She left without saying goodbye. All that was left behind was her familiar smell that lingered in the house even after she left. She left behind the echoes of her laughter that seemed to follow me around wherever I went. She left behind her smile that still lurk in the corners. She left behind her voice that was so full of life. She left behind the sound of her jingling bangles that always adorned her hands.

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Eh...how was it? Should I continue? Feel free to say no!😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Brilliant!! And yes, yes, yes!! Do continue!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Different but interesting concept
do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesme start dear. I like it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg!! Ritttudii.. This is wonderphool.. 🤗
I love it already.. Loaded with emotions.. Those of a little girl, raised by a single parent and a father, who was forced to don many roles all of a sudden..
Then of course there's the mystery surrounding Sakshi leaving the house.. I wonder what could be the reason for her abandoning her happy little world..
Something crime related or even serious.

Anyhow, the note brings hope.. For everyone.. I'm already jumping and requesting/demanding an update.. 😆

P. S. The best part is that Arjun ji hasn't changed much.. He's still Akdu, but undoubtedly the best father in the world in little Piya's eyes.. And she seems to be a miniature version of hwr mother.. 😳

Do I need to add, I loved it..
Please jaldi update karo..
Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thats a promising start Ritu
Waiting for more
Loved this single father again
Piya is very matured n reminds of Sakshi too
Continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start Ritu
Loved it
So Arjun raised Piya alone
I wonder what made Sakshi leave behind her happy Family
Piya's thoughts were nicely written
waiting for the next part eagerly
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awsm start
very beautifully written
loved it
do continue soon
excited to read
sounds like its going to be interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey another story very good 😃 would always love and welcome ur stories
14 yr ki daughter and sakshi disappeared from arjun and piya's life when she was just 6
but why she did it on purpose or some one forced her
will the story revolve around piya or will we get flash back of arjun sakshi's happy married life
piya got some clue of sakshi
thanks for pm and do continue 😊 hope of again going on nature exploring tour with u 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awwwsssmmm start
Loved it
Supperbbb..
Loved Piya very much...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

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