Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Originally posted by: anu91
piya such a cute and lovely daughter...
diary scenes were well written...
arjun angry was superbly written...
loved the update ritu!!!!!!!!
waiting for next...

Hainaa😃

Hehe.. thanks a lottt anuu🤗

Originally posted by: Areesha566
lovely

Thank you!😃

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi
awesome update
ch-13
thank god arakshi n varun are safe
akdu rawte is so romantic
love FBs
love arakshi
ch-14
liked the diary entries
love FB
Piya worried for her parents
Varun saved Sakshi
woh log varun pe 8 saal se nazar rakh rahe the
Arjun's anger was justified
sid piya se phir se haar gaya
loved it
cont soon
sorry for late comment

Thanks a lot for the chapter wise comments.. and it's okay😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
O lord please tell this writer to grant my wish of part 2...

Essshhh!!!!Arjun ka ghusse wala love is tooo much☺️☺️☺️☺️

The emo🤣

Ehmmm... no😛 Or maaaybe partly😛😛

I knoww☺️

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

Heyloo!🤗

I know this was supposed to be a short story.. not more than 11 chapters when I had planned it. And look how I am stretching it😕 Anyways.

I am back with an update.. hopefully it answers some questions you might have had. I have given this update perhaps tooo much thought..and wouldn't have been able to complete it without some help and ideas (thank you, ladies😳🤗)

As always I will say that this is the first time I have put sooo much thinking into a story (this even beats the last one😆) so yeah..galti ho gayi toh pleashh budding writer samajhke bhool jana 😛

Hope you like this onee!😃

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Phew! Hope this worked out..

Do leave your comments and thoughts😳

P.S - I am off on a little holiday on Thursday, so next update will be around next Thurs-Fri (hopefully!). I shall update "Stolen Moments" before I leave😳

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

res!!!!!!!!!!

Me first yuhooo

Ok back

The start was too well thought part

Dealing with her fear of past and present

and the FBs just showed how it all went in with that Editor's plan

Cant wait for Arjun to make keema out of him

The family part!!

Speed breaker!! *you will know what I meant when u get to the chat!! Avni is superb na!!!*

That family time was something that I was waiting too. All three together.

*note the point!! I said them 3, and not like... you know who*

and a small part of Aisha's past too...

too good Ritu...

And yes you are set for another trip... yuhooo I am so excited...

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Sakshi was tensed as to how will they find the culprit. Sakshi and Ayesha's convo was so heart touching. Dono ek doosre ke hamesha rahe chaahe sukh main ho ya phir dukh main

Siddy aur Piya dono ko dekhte hi mujhe mere bachpan yaad aajata hain. Main aur mera ek friend humesha aise hi ladte the. Shree tension main tha ki vo Arjun ka diya huwa kaam poora karpaayega ya nahi. Aur yaha indono ka shuru hojaata hain. Piya ki bina kuch kaam nahi hota ab. Specky Sen - The Techie expert ko hi Piya ki help lena pada. Ha ha tht's a story. Chulbuli Sakshi hoti tho Arjun se zaroor kehti ki ye news front page main chaapegi.

Spanish guys aur vo bhi Shree aur Chotu. Chotu sambhaalke waha bhi unhe kapde ki tarah do math dena.

Piya was so cute. Apne papa aur maa ke beech main aakar sogayi. The great cop Arjun Rawte ko bhi emotional banadiya. Arjun was happy to see his family together once again.

Waiting for the next update.

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

Wowww arjun etf planing perfect

Aisha ka miscarriage

Aisha sakshi bonding

Arakshi and piyu shooo cute

Shree and chotu abb aage kyaa?

Continue soon

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Avantika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

Pehle toh stop complaining! Do u hear us complaining? 😛

Yaya!! You did it.. And it turned out just more than fine..

-One more res-

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

An awsome update di...
reallly loved it...specially that family sleep ...so cute...
piya nd siddi r just too goooddd...
piya help shree...aakhir beti kiski hai...now its time ...
plese con.sooonnn!!!!

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

This is the moment I had been craving for. I don't know why, a tear slides down my cheek as I feel the warmth of my wife and my child's hand below mine. I turn towards them and watch their eyes gently shut close. I smile at the similar curve of their long, dark eyelashes, and the faint smile that appears on their lips as they slip into the world of dreams. I lie on my side for a long time, listening to the sounds of their breathing beside me, my fingers curled loosely around theirs and wondering if a moment could be more perfect than this.

Just becoz of the above kodak moment you are spared & guess what ,U get a Jadu ki Jhappi as well

The Most Precious Jewels You'll Ever Have Around Your Neck Are The Arms Of Your Children...Unknown

Hint for you☺️

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_Aditi_S

@Aditi_S

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Posted: 10 years ago

#359

awesome update

love ETF planning😊

aisha ka miscarriage😲 😲

feeling bad for aisha 😭😭

love aisha n sakshi's bonding 😃😃

love arakshi n piya😃😃

piya n sid are superb

piya help shree😃...after all ACP arjun rawte ki beti hai

love that family sleep scene 😃😃

shree aur chotu spanish guys

loved it

waiting for the next part

cont soon

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#360

Awwwsssmmm Update
Wonderfully written
Aisha had lost her child... that was heart wrenching...
Loved the family moment... Sooo Lovely..
Ek dum perfect...
Cont Sooon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM