Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75

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Areesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Wow ritu beautiful update
love the fb

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Ritu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Humzy
Wow beautiful update
Loved it
Very nicely written
The flashbacks were fab
Continue soon

Thank you Humairaa🤗

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI
awesome update di loved it
loved the flash backs
n u r giving quick updates 😉

hehehe thoda time mil gaya tha isliye😛

Thanks for the comment!🤗

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update.
Loved it soo much.
The flashback was so sweet.
It brought tears in my eyes.
The sensation u created it was awesome.
Piya is so cute.
Precape looks interesting.
But what is different about her?
Please please con soon..
And Happy Fridayy..

Thank youu Easha🤗

hope you'll like the next part😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
If this is wat is called a filler ritu,then trust me I would love to read more of such filler updates.A family as loving as this is wat one will wish for but then fate played its game that it left a hollow in their lives. Hope the efforts this little angel is making to bring her parents together becomes fruitful & they completes being a Happily ever after family again.

Thanks for the comment Farheen🤗

hehe, will try for more flashbacks then😉 and read on to find that out😃

Originally posted by: shymali
flashback was fabulous
continue soon
awesome update

Thank you so much!!🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: skrafty
Awesome update
Loved it
Both the flashbacks were fabulous
Loved them
precap looks interesting
waiting for the next part
continue soon
Like button not working😡

Thank youu Shravaniii🤗

Originally posted by: kunchu
Even this filler had its charm
The past and present was a beautiful blend
loved it yaar
would love to look ahead for the trip and the meet
waiting eagerly

Thank youuu Helna..it means a lot 🤗

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Loved the Flashbacks...
Beautifully written...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

Thank youuu Nikita🤗

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi
awesome update
love flashbacks
piya is so cute
loved it
cont soon😊

Thank youu🤗

Originally posted by: Armagadon
Awesome part dear...
It is truly amazing!

It's too good...

Really loved the flashbacks...

I am waiting to go to Darjeeling :D

Thank you soo much🤗

Hope you'll enjoy the next part😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update
arjun sakshi flashback was good candle light main thoda romantic ho rahe the ACPji 😃
but arjun misses sakshi so much everything reminds of her
aww piyu is so sweet she just reminds of sakshi
so the whole team is going to darjeeling apart from arjun and sakshi also looking forward
to see piyu and sid bonding 😃
did sakshi lost her memory 😕
thanks for pm

Thanks Shefali 😃

hope you'll like the next chapter! and you have guessed already haha😆

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome update!👏
Loved the flashbacks!
Precap is interesting 😃

Thank youu Jia🤗

Originally posted by: PoohLover
I was eagerly waiting to read some arakshi parts and you did it...i looove the love between them 😳 😳

Piya gone after her father..planning things to solve the mystery 😃 😃

Yayy cant wait to read next chapter after the precap...and what a twist cant wait to see what happened to sakshi 😛 😛

Awesoome update..continue soon and thank you soo much 🤗 🤗

Bharuuu thank you soo much for the comment 🤗

haha i bet you know what's coming already😛

Originally posted by: PrincessSassy
wow

Thanks a lot🤗

Originally posted by: anu91
beautiful update...
flashback of arjun and sakshi was so nice...
loved it...
waiting for them to meet sakshi...

Thank youu Anuu🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: --Iqra--
Loved this update!! It was perfect, had just the right amounts of present and past! I'm eager to know why she left, and what's different about her. Arjun's emotions were depicted beautifully and Piya is such a sweetheart! Really well done, lovely update, thanks for the PM!

Thanks a lottt Iqra🤗

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
first thank you so much for writing this...
i really loved it very much...
present and past all is perfect...
beautifully written...
specially fbs supereb...
plz con.soon..

Thanks Gausiya🤗

so glad you liked ittt😳

Originally posted by: fly.high
*sobs*
why is it so?
that even when u write a happy update...even thn it moistens my eyes :(

such a lovely and complete happy family it ws...why the hell she left then?

even i feel like confronnting sakshi for doing this to her lovely baby and such a nice husband.

i knw she mst be having some justified reson for what she did...bt still i feel bad for arjun nd piya!

continue soon ritu

love.

Thanks a lot Aisha!🤗

Awww sorry to make you cry! kya kareinn the emotions pour out of me sometimes hehe

read the next one to find out the why😉

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital
Every single thing of Piya reminds Arjun about Sakshi...really saddenning...

The FB part was really beautiful...
It increased my curiosity to know why she left her place...

Eagerly waiting for the next update...
Cont. soon..

Thank youu Anjali🤗

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
amazing update.
loved the story very much.
superb concept.
written beautifully.
and sorry for not commenting on previous chapters.
thankx for pm.

Thanks a lot Parii! And its okaay dont say sorry😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome story...

Read in one go...👏👏👏 👏👏👏

Why Sakshi left????😕😕😕

Loved Piya...😃😃😃

Liked the FBs...😃😃😃

PIya didn't informed Arjun about the envelop...

Hope Piya finds her mother soon...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM>..-

Thanks a lot Sneha!🤗

Hope your exams are over and they went well?😳

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Part 2
love it 👏 ⭐️ 👏
love the bonding of piya and siddhi,
sammy is also nice
darjling? Anamika? Am confused
continue soon
yes my name is areesha 😊
ritu? Real name?

Thank youu Areesha🤗

actually real name is Rituparna but people hardly call me that 😆(especially here people faint if i say Rituparna..they are like sorry whaaa?! So i have just shortened it to Ritu lol)

Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie
Rituu.. 🤗
Sorry maaf kar do.. My silly Internet connection has been giving me nightmares..
I had to re-type my comment all over again..

For Ch 2-
Phew.. And here we go again.. I really don't know how you manage to do it each time.. Despite the tears, tragedies and hurt, there's always a faint silver lining, like a ray of hope in all your works.. 😳

Sid Rathod is suuper adorable and so is chasmish Sammy.. Loved the bond between the kids.. It's soo warm n cute, reminds me of my childhood friends.. 😳

Arjun n Piya seem to be like any other father-daughter duo but it's only when the silence speaks for itself, the cracks begin to show.. They're both incomplete without Sakshi.. 😭

So, the phone call! I do have a tiny winy idea of what you're planning, jst keeping my fingers crossed..
Anamika is Sakshi, isn't she? Rest all can be dealt with I'm sure but please tell me Sakshi knows that she's got a family waiting for her..

Anyway, why fear when you're right here..
I love it! ❤️
Looking fwd to Piya manofying Papa Rawte for a trip to Darjeeling.. 😳

Thanks for the PM.. I' ll read n comment on the next tomorrow when I have a slightly better connection.. 🥱

Do write more soon..😳 🤗

Avniii🤗

Why is it that your comments always make me feel good about my writing?😳

Thanks soo much for taking the time out to read and then comment tooo..it means a lot🤗

Aww thanks for all the praise ☺️

hehe i think you know what i am planning already..but read anyway to find out😆

Hope all is well🤗

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Wow ritu beautiful update
love the fb

Thank youu Areesha🤗

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Ritu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

Heylooo🤗

I am backkk! With lots of filminess! Yes, this one is going to be totally filmy and Bollywood ishtyle😛 So don't think about whats realistic and what's not lol😆

I am trying to make the plot as real as possible, but if there are loopholes do forgive me!

So, here starts the journey in Darjeeling! I went there when i was a baby so I don't remember much...but I have tried to pen it down anyways (thanks to Google😆)

If any description goes wrong somewhere, again, please don't mind😃

Ok, that's all. Read onnn!

P.S- I bet you already know what's going to happen😛

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Okaaay, I am wondering how many people are ready to throw stuff at me for stopping there now! 😆🤪

Do leave your comments and likes - they mean a lot!!! (yes yes they do!)😃😃

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Wow awsm update

Loved it

Very beautifully written

Continue soon

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

Awesome update didu.

Loved it so much.

The scenery u created is so magical I felt like getting lost there.

Flashback was nice and sad.

At last they met.

But Sakshi lost her memory!!

How did it happen?

Arjun found Sakshi..Yappeee.

Please please con soon..

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_shadesnature_

@_shadesnature_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

awesome update ritu dear
loved the excitement of piya n care of sidd.towards her.
arjun feela sakshi.presence
but.why she named anamika
wht happen to her u end it on very crucial.moment
u described darheeling so.perfectly
please updatesoon dear