Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75

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Ritu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh
Hi Ritu
hope you dint forget me as i seldom comment i am really sry yaar...i was busy with studies...iss saal we are burdened more than ever before 😭 😭 😭
just nw caught up with all... wow...all are unique & spl in their own way 👏
atlast sakshi remembered her name
ahh...all those Arakshi moment were so magical
i dint feel lyk i was reading but it was happening for real...the lilly pond, the candles...i felt lyk i had been transported there and laal ishq was a cheery on top 😃
piya & sakshi were just too cute...loved them.. 😳
sakshi and arjun are on their journey to dig the past...hope sakshi gets her memory back soon
thanks for pm 🤗

Heyloo Aadhya🤗

That's totally okaay..dont worry about it😃

Aww.. i hope your burden reduces a little bit..studies are

Glad you liked all the parts😳

THanks sooo much for the comment🤗

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Kya karu haaye,Sab kuch ho gaya

Can this get more romantic?Love letter to her husband

Piya

Ye Lo

Awwwiee..itne saare emos😆

Thanks soo much for leaving a comment!🤗

He he he he ab cycle se dhakka maara hai toh badle mein return gift toh dena chahiye naa😛

But don't worry..is baar delay nahi karungi😈

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Heylooo🤗

Huge huge apologies for the delay! I was in India for Durga Puja and got really busy...

Anyway I am back now and with an update!😃

I am sure you'll have tons of questions by the end of it (if not then I won't be surprised..this is the Arjun forum after all😆).. but yeah I'll answer them with the updates if so😉

First attempt at writing an action sequence..so agar koi bhool ho jaye toh maaf kar dena😆 Hope I have pieced together the plot well.. if there are loopholes then feel free to point them out😛

But of course, be prepared for the filminess😆

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I'm ready with my running shoes🤣 I can already see you picking up the knives from the kitchen counters..😛

Anywaay jokes aside... I know you might have missed Arakshi, but will make up for it in the next one😳 This bit was needed for revealing a bit of the past!

Do comment pleashhh😃😃

P.S - I hope that was an okayishly written action sequence😕

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Bhag Ritu bhaag

I can see a knife axe n punches on yr way

Escape!!

Will b back soonish if u r alive

back: ye kya hua? kaise hua??

Gb tujhe maar dalegi yaar

Action and suspense pack, something different from you

But of course it had your that spl touch in it.

Piya proved she is a junior Rawte.

Painting, Micro Sd cards, shooting, fire...

Lord.. jaldi update karo

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Arjun ke mana karne ke baad bhi Sakshi aayi

Ye Varun itna dara dara sa kyu hain? Someone attacked them. Arjun ko goli lagi

Piya aur Sid ki nok jok tho kabi rukegi nahi

Piya found the chip jisse Sakshi ne chupaaya tha locket main

Hope Arjun is fine

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#275

Eh chup!

I'll be back later.. and don't u fear.. majaal uss gundi ki! 😛

no KKHH moment but koi nahi.. yeh toh Main hoon na wala hottIe nikla.. 😉

-Chapter 11- (I hadn't reserved a post.. Or if I did, I can't seem to find it..) 🤪

Aah! Firstly, the opening paras..I could never imagine what it must be to live without memories, but your Sakshi (and you) have made it happen..

She has just realised that 8 years have been an illusion. Despite knowing that she had lost her memory, to realise what and how much she missed, must be shattering...

Especially the fact that the man she accidentally met, and is attracted to, is none other than her husband.

And then the fact that she had a daughter all along..

Her emotional mini-breakdown was very touching! And Arjun's concern too..

Bravo lollipop partner! Tussi chaa gaye.. Really.. 👏

Water-lillies!! Dark night and Arakshi (For a second I qent back to Gundi's demand) 🤣

Awwie.. Piya is such a sweetipie.. And sooo strong!

Sakshi-Piya reunion was just how I had imagined it.. Sweet, teary and full of smiles.. 😳

That feel u get when lying curled up in a mother's lap is something very very soothing and difficult to describe in words.. (our mum's would probably faint or get all 'shaqi' if we do that now) 😆

im not surprised that sakshi instantly warms up to piya and cocoons her in a motherly embrace; the mere realisation of truth seems to have awakened her motherly instincts.. something again, that cannot be reasoned with or explained..

But I felt it.. 😳

And then Arjun! His relief and the content look that u wrote about; haaye.. my heart went out for him.. as a single father who had watched his angel pining for, and growing up without a mother, it must be such a soothing moment..

Eesh... the dupatta.. 😳 yes, I remembered the real one.. 😉

And guess what, laal ishq started ringing in my ears..

Hopeless.. I tell u.. 😆

Aah! The walk.. I wonder what nicholas spark would do if he discovers u or your works someday.. apni stories ke saare 'walks' tumse hi likhvayega..

And no.. Im not kidding.. honestly, there's always something magical about them.. 😳

Haha.. and the cuteness.. sach mein 'pappu can't flirt sala..' but now there's no reason to do it na.. he has his biwi back with him..

Aah! God bless piya and her inherited Rawte brain.. ab bass gundi kI demand ka bhi kuch kar de.. tumse toh kuch hoga nahi.. 😛

Yay! A mature and dabangg sakshi is always my favorite.. and it's only natural that she should go along.. might be risky, but why fear when hubby dearest is here.. okay, that was the silly me.. ignore..

On a serious note, the trip will help trigger her memories.. and that is exactly what happened, nahi..

Woman, what your words do to me!

You've been alone too long.. mujhe tumhara saath dene do.. <3

Reminded me of PC's dust to dust VM.. ❤️

The flashback.. ❤️ a cute, happy family. And piya toh bachpan se hi shaitan thi.. the cutest cupid ever.. 😆

And the view from the viewpoint..

Mujhe bhi darjeeling jaana hai.. 😭 It was soo long ago but I still remember the view of kanchenjunga from our hotel balcony at gangtok. Haaye.. kya din the woh..

(And guess what they had a small shelf full of books.. I must've finished 3 jeffrey archer's in 3 days..) 😛

Awwie.. that little bestie scene between Ayesha n Sakshi conveyed soo much.. time and distance never really matters na.. secret looks, teasings and comforting gestures, that's something which stays permanently..

Ooh! That flashback was indeed scary.. and her boss was definitely intimidating..

So, reunions have happened, acceptances are done with. Now it is time to go digging into the past..

Now that I've read the next ones, the build up and gradual revelations seem all the more real and scary..

Bola tha. Ainvayi doubt karti ho.. 😛

I loved this chapter for it's emotional quotient and cuteness.. and piya.. ❤️ it had a bit of everything in it.. just perrr..fectt.. *madhuri-ishtyle'.. 🤗

Thank u soo much for a virtual trip to darjeeling.. bass kahin se ek cup darjeeling tea bhi mil jaati..

Yeah.. greedy me.. 😈

Okay then.. 1 down.. 3 more to go.. I'll be back tomorrow.. abhi sleeping time.. and I need to be fully awake when I read the dhishoom dhishoom again..

Tata for now.. 🤗

-reserved for Chapter 12-

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 10 years ago

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Omg

Fake painting

SD card

Arakshi

Now what next agar arjun ya sakahi KO kuch bhi hua naaa

Tum gayi sys

Continue soon

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Awsmee update di! !!
love thiz...
piya find chip...i love little nok jhok sis nd piya...
arakshi n dsnger...
hope everythjng goes welll...
con.sooonnn!!!!!

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638783

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Posted: 11 years ago

#278

Superb update! 👏

so sakshi came to knw about the fake paintings...

But why did you stop here? I want another update ASAP! 😒

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#279

Run away Ritu dear
because I already have a knife in my Hand😈😈

Jokes apart
Sakshi's past seems interesting and Mysterious
Hope they are fine
can't wait more
Next update jaldi dena
else 😈😈😈
waiting for the next part
continue soon