Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75 - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Armagadon

Rukkkooo!!!!


Phew... wait.. me commenting!

Arrey comment ke train main main baaki hoon bhai...

Arrey koi iss update ki train stop kheecho!!!

*train goes away*

*crying*

tumne pehle hi update maar di... *sniff*

nahi... main naya waala main comment nahi karne waali jab tak iska reply na aye... boo hoo!

Iss baar main comment karne waali hoon...

By hook or by crook!

LOL...

Toh ek naya warning for today!

STATUTORY WARNING : THE AUTHOR OF THIS COMMENT IS MENTALLY EXHAUSTED... THUS SHE HAS NO CLUE OF WHAT SHE IS WRITING! Iske baad bhi agar padhna chaho... toh iss baar Bhagvan Bholenath aapko bachaye!


LOLLL Shree... you make me laugh๐Ÿคฃ I was laughing sooo much when I read it hehe. Aww.. Abhi reply kar rahi hoon na ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Oh wow! You were in India for Durga Puja! Lucky! *me jelly*

Yupyup.. in Delhi! Miss it all so much now

Chalo chaddo... mennu ki farak padta... lemme start with my erratic comment! LOL!

I have loved the way you described the uneasiness of Sakshi when she visits Delhi... and not only the uneasiness with the bustling city but also the one in her mind...

Unravelling the past...

Whether one has amnesia or not...

Such a word always manages to twist the heart as if a knife is inside you..

And yes... I loved it when the mother surfaced in Sakshi... it was beautiful...

The anger in Arjun when Mrs.Rawte was being affirmed... such an anger... is sweet indeed... it makes you smile... actually...

Thanks sooo much Shree! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

You know the way you described Varun's "mehfooz" place... it reminded me of Kahani... the dingy hotel over there... I got that image in my mind...

Oh really? Hehee.. I think I had some other movie in mind.. I can't remember which one now!

So aha... Varun and Sakshi stepped upon a fake painting!

Frankly speaking one thing... perhaps the mission over the fake painting is something that put Sakshi into the present trouble that it is... but you see Ritu... only this... I find it little hard to digest... it's a fake painting... I don't find a reason as to why she didn't tell the ACP ๐Ÿฅฑ... it is not something that an ACP won't be able to handle... nothing personal too that she would find it difficult to tell him... and I am slightly confused why a journalist would put so much up at stake for this...

No it's not that stealing masterpieces is an okay thing for me... as Uncle Sidhu of Satyajit Ray's Feluda series had once spoken... (not quoting) that the stealing of paintings or sculptures which form the treasure of our country... it's equivalent to murder...

SO yeah... I am hundred percent sure that you would justify everything... so me waiting for the next few updates to understand everything... I know you always make the point perfect... (I am sorry if I sounded wee bit harsh)

I guess even Varun has a story to tell... he has a small screen space as of now... but I must say even in the small space he is extremely effective!

Aha! I was wondering when someone would ask me that question.. Yes I had๐Ÿ˜† So no, you didn't sound harsh.. in fact I like that you pointed out that fact. So that shows that I made you think๐Ÿ˜ƒ this kind of plotting is kinda new to me sooo.. I hope the next update clears your doubts.. if not, feel free to shout out again!๐Ÿ˜ƒ And yes, will be revealing most of the lot in the next update!

Why is Varun so nervous?

There is definitely something more than what meets the eye..

Oh shoot... the way you wrote action... so beautifully.. .*boo hoo* mera toh pack up time ho gaya... agar tum bhi action likhne main beith gayi aur woh bhi suspense daal ke toh ab mere IF pe kya kaam!

Hawww no waay!! Me too learning you see๐Ÿ˜ณ

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter (pout) you already posted it!



Originally posted by: Armagadon

Haye... nahi res karne chahiye thi kyunki tumne reply nahi kiya...


Par kya karoon... aaj kal is unromantic ko romantic stories aur moreover itni sweet updates ko aur bhi pasand aane lagi hai...

Sab tum logo ki ghalti hai!

Sab log mujhe unromantic se romantic bana rahe ho!

By the way... gaana sunke laga ke shayad kuch aur ho... arrey I mean kishi! Direct waala ๐Ÿ˜‰

Kidding... this was beautiful enough...

Ab main poora comment nahi dene waali!

Scroll down mat karo!

Yours Sincerely ๐Ÿ˜‰

~ The half schizophrenic + fatigued person!

Hahahaa... it's okaay.. thanks for taking out time and commenting! Means a lot Shree๐Ÿ˜ณ
Acha hai na.. be a lil romantic! I'm a hopeless one. I admit it๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NainaSM

omg its so romantic

i m blushing
haaye akkdu rawte can be soo romantic
arakshi love it
piyaa sam ayesha supportive
continue soon

Thank you Nainaa๐Ÿ˜ณ Hahahaha.. he can be๐Ÿ˜‰

Originally posted by: jia03

Awesome update!

Thank God that both arjun and sakshi are fine along with varun...
the flashbacks were lovely... โค๏ธ

Thanks soo much Jia๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

well cheesy is just fine ๐Ÿ˜‰ won't complain u see u can go more cheesy ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
so sakshi actually some how managed to get arjun and varun out from that fire ans called aisha
oh wow she has started getting full on flashbacks from her life and 1'st thing she remebered was how arjun proposed to her ๐Ÿ˜Š which btw way was very impulsive for akdu rawte ๐Ÿ˜‰ he just couldn't let her go and when she refused to rejoin he asked her to marry him
second thing that she remembered was her akdu gifting her red saree for there 1'st anniversary and becoming romantic rawte ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
she wants to go home hope she remember every thing after she reaches there ๐Ÿ˜Š
thanks for pm

hahaha I can see๐Ÿ˜›
Thanks a lot for the comment Shefali๐Ÿ˜ณ


Originally posted by: angelicdeepti

no curses... only praises for a beautiful piece e of writing...

thanx for the PM

continue soon

Aww.. thank youuu๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: life93

hi ritu๐Ÿค—

what a beautiful and action packed part๐Ÿ˜†
sakshi ziddi๐Ÿ˜†...
inn lamhon ke daman meinโ˜บ๏ธ was beautiful ๐Ÿ˜›
but wait when they got married ??๐Ÿ˜•
update soon ๐Ÿค—

Thanks sooo much Neeru๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Cheesy aur ye update. Nahi re it was a beautiful update


Sakshi tho ziddhi hain hi but Arjun se thoda sa kam ziddhi hain

Red saree ko dekhkar Sakshi ko Arjun ke saath bitaaye huwe romantic moments yaad aagaye. Haaye aur Song was perfect for this situation

Flashback main tho Akdu Rawte bade hi romantic banrahe the aur ab bhi kam romantic nahi hain

Loved the update

Thank you sooo much! Hehe happy you liked ittt๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it very much
Supperbbb... as alwsys...
It was Sooo Beautiful...
Thank god Arakshi n Varun safe...
Hayeee...!!!! Akdu Rawte is so romantic...
Wonderfully written...
Flashbacks were sooo Magical... m
Amazing Update...
Cont sooon
Thanks for the PM

Thanks sooo much Niki๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

Tu kitni achhi hai, tu kitni bholi hai
Pyaari pyaari hai, o Ritu o Ritu

Tere jaisa yaar kaha, kaha aisa yaaraana
Yaad karegee duniya, teraa meraa afsaana

Arjun-Saakshi
I super loved loved loved the update.Can i have more of such?And ofcourse one with the papa-mumma-piyu moments๐Ÿ˜ƒ
I know I am Laalchi kahi ki

Hahahaha kitne gaane gaaye tumne๐Ÿ˜†
Glad that I could make you happy๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿค—
Of course... very soon๐Ÿ˜‰ (that wink doesn't mean what you think!)

Originally posted by: shreya09

Rituuu ๐Ÿค—

this was a very lovely & sweet chapter
the flashback scenes & the moments in Sam's friends house are sooo beautiful
My favourite Piya โค๏ธ i am missing her . She understood something was wrong. bring her beck to her parents soon please ๐Ÿ˜ณ
very nice writing ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
waiting for more ๐Ÿ˜Š

Shreyaa๐Ÿค—
Thanks sooo much! Aww.. yes yes jaldi they'll be meeting๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: skrafty

Husshhh

Finally khatam ho gaya
mujhe laga tha kal tak khatam hi nahi hoga๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Awesome update
Loved it
tumne itna sara likh dala ki mujhe samajh nahi aaraha kis baat pe comment karoo๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ
I love cheesy though๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
The FB was really cute
waiting for the next part
continue soon

LOL... kuch zyada lamba tha I know๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
It's okaay.. thanks for reading Shravani๐Ÿค—
And glad u liked it๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Awesome update.

Loved it soo soo much.
It was filled with intense emotions that I got lost in the world of ur update..
Coon soonz..
Waiting eagerly for the next chapter..

Thank you soo much Easha๐Ÿค—
That means a lot๐Ÿ˜ณ

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

Super Awsome update di!!!!
Really loved it alot!!!!
Really love this romantic akdu rawte...and his lovely wife...
finaally they r safe nd at a secure place thanx to sam d his friend...
arakshi all scene is just beautifulll...
con.soonnn...

Thank youuu Gausiya๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: kunchu

Rituuu

Kya nishana tha... lagtha hai cupid gunda ke roop me aya tha... (just for our GB)


It was emotional and then their love... hayee.. and the best song for the situation
FB, gaana, talks, and even proposal.. sab kuch ek sath. maza agaya...
Love uuu

Hahahaa๐Ÿ˜†
Yaay...glad you liked it๐Ÿ˜ณ
Love you tooo๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Sakshi was scared but she took her courage & saved Arjun & Varun...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Flames mein bhi ko apni zidh pyaari hai...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
FB of confession was ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Liked Arakshi...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Super man...Wonder woman...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Raesha reached at hospital...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
They had not told Piya anything but she is mart enough to guess that something is not right...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
What is there in the card which Aisha didn't told to Sakshi...๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
Red Saree...perfect for romance...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Akdu Rawte converting into Romantic Rawte...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Last time Axe wala emoticon sirf darane ke liye tha otherwise humko next update kaise milta...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thanks sooo much Sneha๐Ÿค—
You'll know that in the next update.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Hahaha of course..๐Ÿ˜†

Originally posted by: Areesha566

wow
awesome
sakshi the wonder women
she remember more
*blush*

Thanks a lot Areesha!๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yams.s

Wonderful Update

Saakshi met one of her collegues who was working with her in her secret mission which probably cost her memory

Piya finds the hd chip Saakshi had hodden in the locket

Arjun's life in Danger

Continue Soon

Thanks a lot!๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: yams.s

Wonderful Update

Simply Beautiful

Various Shades of Arjun and Saakshi's relationship was portrayed nicely

Continue Soon

Thank you sooo much ๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: anu91

part 12 full of actions...awe!!!!!

part 13 cute update...
loved it so much...

Thank you soo much Anuu!๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyloo!๐Ÿค—
Back with an update!! I think I am getting too attached to this story๐Ÿ˜•
Anywaay... there was a lot to be explained in this one so might be a little long.. take your time๐Ÿ˜ณ
It's the first time I have done so much plotting and thinking soo.. if you have questions after reading this, feel free to ask!

*deeep breath*
Here goes!

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Yeah, fire away all the questions (if any)๐Ÿ˜†

Do leave your comments pretty please๐Ÿค—

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres...me first...๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ
Awesome update...

Diary entries were superb...Sakshi was not knowing while writing it that it vll help her to regain her lost memory in future...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
FB of Arjun getting injured & Piya getting scared for her father & Sakshi getting scared for her family was nice...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
ME was involved in the racket...๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Piya worried for her parents...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ...Hatts off to her...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Varun saved Sakshi from that ME...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
They were keeping eye on Varun from past 8 years...๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก
Arjun's anger is justified...Sakshi knows how to calm him...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
" The orange fiery ball of the sun burns in his eyes"...Awesome line...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Siddie har gaya Piya se...lol...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
Edited by Snehajain - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey its awesme. Cnt like. Like buttn is nt wrking. bdw dairy part was good. Piya knew that her father is in pain.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb update! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
So finally what happened in the past is clear now...
Hope now the culprits get their due punishment
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Posted: 10 years ago
res/unres...

Awsome update Ritu di!!!! ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘...Just loved it!!!โค๏ธ โค๏ธ โค๏ธ...Your writting skills always lef me speechless...Now saki know all the truth...The FB was lovely!!!..last Arakshi part super awsome!!!and ya alwqys love piya nd siddie!! con.soon...
Edited by Arakshiya_58 - 10 years ago

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