Originally posted by: Armagadon
Rukkkooo!!!!
Phew... wait.. me commenting!Arrey comment ke train main main baaki hoon bhai...Arrey koi iss update ki train stop kheecho!!!*train goes away**crying*tumne pehle hi update maar di... *sniff*nahi... main naya waala main comment nahi karne waali jab tak iska reply na aye... boo hoo!Iss baar main comment karne waali hoon...By hook or by crook!LOL...Toh ek naya warning for today!STATUTORY WARNING : THE AUTHOR OF THIS COMMENT IS MENTALLY EXHAUSTED... THUS SHE HAS NO CLUE OF WHAT SHE IS WRITING! Iske baad bhi agar padhna chaho... toh iss baar Bhagvan Bholenath aapko bachaye!LOLLL Shree... you make me laugh๐คฃ I was laughing sooo much when I read it hehe. Aww.. Abhi reply kar rahi hoon na ๐ณOh wow! You were in India for Durga Puja! Lucky! *me jelly*Yupyup.. in Delhi! Miss it all so much nowChalo chaddo... mennu ki farak padta... lemme start with my erratic comment! LOL!I have loved the way you described the uneasiness of Sakshi when she visits Delhi... and not only the uneasiness with the bustling city but also the one in her mind...Unravelling the past...Whether one has amnesia or not...Such a word always manages to twist the heart as if a knife is inside you..And yes... I loved it when the mother surfaced in Sakshi... it was beautiful...The anger in Arjun when Mrs.Rawte was being affirmed... such an anger... is sweet indeed... it makes you smile... actually...Thanks sooo much Shree! ๐ณYou know the way you described Varun's "mehfooz" place... it reminded me of Kahani... the dingy hotel over there... I got that image in my mind...Oh really? Hehee.. I think I had some other movie in mind.. I can't remember which one now!So aha... Varun and Sakshi stepped upon a fake painting!Frankly speaking one thing... perhaps the mission over the fake painting is something that put Sakshi into the present trouble that it is... but you see Ritu... only this... I find it little hard to digest... it's a fake painting... I don't find a reason as to why she didn't tell the ACP ๐ฅฑ... it is not something that an ACP won't be able to handle... nothing personal too that she would find it difficult to tell him... and I am slightly confused why a journalist would put so much up at stake for this...No it's not that stealing masterpieces is an okay thing for me... as Uncle Sidhu of Satyajit Ray's Feluda series had once spoken... (not quoting) that the stealing of paintings or sculptures which form the treasure of our country... it's equivalent to murder...SO yeah... I am hundred percent sure that you would justify everything... so me waiting for the next few updates to understand everything... I know you always make the point perfect... (I am sorry if I sounded wee bit harsh)I guess even Varun has a story to tell... he has a small screen space as of now... but I must say even in the small space he is extremely effective!Aha! I was wondering when someone would ask me that question.. Yes I had๐ So no, you didn't sound harsh.. in fact I like that you pointed out that fact. So that shows that I made you think๐ this kind of plotting is kinda new to me sooo.. I hope the next update clears your doubts.. if not, feel free to shout out again!๐ And yes, will be revealing most of the lot in the next update!Why is Varun so nervous?There is definitely something more than what meets the eye..Oh shoot... the way you wrote action... so beautifully.. .*boo hoo* mera toh pack up time ho gaya... agar tum bhi action likhne main beith gayi aur woh bhi suspense daal ke toh ab mere IF pe kya kaam!Hawww no waay!! Me too learning you see๐ณEagerly waiting for the next chapter (pout) you already posted it!
Originally posted by: Armagadon
Haye... nahi res karne chahiye thi kyunki tumne reply nahi kiya...
Par kya karoon... aaj kal is unromantic ko romantic stories aur moreover itni sweet updates ko aur bhi pasand aane lagi hai...Sab tum logo ki ghalti hai!Sab log mujhe unromantic se romantic bana rahe ho!By the way... gaana sunke laga ke shayad kuch aur ho... arrey I mean kishi! Direct waala ๐Kidding... this was beautiful enough...Ab main poora comment nahi dene waali!Scroll down mat karo!Yours Sincerely ๐~ The half schizophrenic + fatigued person!
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