Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75 - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Super part ritu
love it alot
the way you discribed excitment of traveling and beauty of journy whole was fas
oh i soo wish to get in a train and travel to diffirend cities in Pakistan, its been years i haven't travel in train
the way you penned down piya and arjun's emotions was awesome
piya sakshi meet was heart wrenching
poor baby
how did sakshi landed in darjleen?
How come she lost her memory?
Hmmm many questions and for answer we have to wait till next update soo update soon sister
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was just awesome...

Seeing Piya, even in her state of lost memory Sakshi feels
some familiarity...its just great...
Eager to know more about Sakshi...

Cont. soon...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

Wow awsm update

Loved it
Very beautifully written
Continue soon

Thanks a lot Humairaa🤗

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Awesome update didu.

Loved it so much.
The scenery u created is so magical I felt like getting lost there.
Flashback was nice and sad.
At last they met.
But Sakshi lost her memory!!
How did it happen?
Arjun found Sakshi..Yappeee.
Please please con soon..

Thank youuu Easha🤗
don't worry all will be revealed with time😉

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI

awesome update ritu dear
loved the excitement of piya n care of sidd.towards her.
arjun feela sakshi.presence
but.why she named anamika
wht happen to her u end it on very crucial.moment
u described darheeling so.perfectly
please updatesoon dear

Thank you soo much Prakriti🤗
haha will be updating it soon don't worry..thanks for reading😳

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

awsm update

Loved it
Very beautifully written
Continue soon

Thanks a lot Pari🤗

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

Had it not been the beautiful Darjeeling beauty+The mini flashback +Piya' happiness to be with her father with no work &excitement to meet her mother+Her long await comin to an end seeing her mother after such a long period,I would have had expression for you stopping at such a delicate moment.I m now confident that you are conversing more with Avni these days.Only she can stop at such a point & have the audacity to tease at the end & now you too😡

OMG that emoticon is very scary - like really! I was reminded of "I know what you did last summer" 😲
Thanks a lot for the comment and I will be updating sooon lol😆
Haahahaha ehm...yes I have been talking to her lol😆😛 but then once in a while cliffhangers are good na😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: misakiscarlet

read all parts in one go
liked the concept
contd. soon
thnx for pm

Thanks a lot Aradhya🤗
Good to see you back 😳

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh

Hi ritu

awesome update 👏
aww...arjun felt sakshi's presence 😳
piya's excitment is so much that i had started to find the kid in her 😆
thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

Thank youuu Aadhya! 🤗

Originally posted by: aditiarakshi

Awesome update
Love Sid's care towards piya...
Love FB
Arjun feel sakshi's presence
But Sakshi lost her memory...
How did it happen???
Loved it
Cont soon

Thanks so much! 🤗
eh, that will be revealed later 😉

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Amazing...
Finally Piya met her Maa
Sakshi lost her memory...!!!!
Cont sooon
Eagerly waiting for next part
Thanks for PM

Thanks Nikita🤗

Originally posted by: jia03

Well, I am ready to throw stuff at you for stopping here... 😡
It was an awesome update... 👏
Loved the description of the train ride... 👍🏼
Beautiful... ❤️
Update fast 😃

Thank youuu Jia🤗
Nahiii don't i will update soon lool😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

ritu!!!it was indeed awesome update...
don know Wt to say...
priya and siddiee bond Wt to say its a friendship or brother sister bond Wt ever no words...just they are awesome...
Arjun he is seeing his mini sakshi in priya...Arjun sakshi FB was so cute...
how cum sakshi forget all things...
priya and sakshi meet was emotional..priya is her daughter but she don knw anything its so painful...
Arjun going to meet sakshi...wow very excited for the scene...but u...how can u stop at right time...don take too much time...do Cont soon...

Anuuu🤗
awww thanks soo much for all that🤗 it means a lot..and i am glad you are liking the story! hope u will love the rest of it too😃
don't worry will update sooonish hehe😃
btw it's Piya😛

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

wow i just felt that i was teleported to darjaling those beautiful and misty mountains that toy train
green grass rocky mountains
liked the bonding of siddi and piyu siddi helping piyu and teasing her 😃
piya reaches her mom and recognize her smell her voice her love but sakshi doesn't know who is she
which leaves piya confused but ofcourse sakshi lost her memory as i guessed but how and how did she reach darjaaling
arjun felt something in his bones as soon as he landed here and now he saw her his sakshi and hope now that he is here it might help sakshi to get her memory back
thanks for pm

Thanks so much for the comment Shefali!🤗
Very glad i could transport you there he he 😃

Originally posted by: NainaSM

wowwwsuperb story Amaazing update .👏... i love this story yaar ... sorry exam ke wajah se nahi paddha ... read in one go ... its really Amazing 😳...continue soon👍🏼

Thank youu for reading the story from the beginning Naina! 🤗
hope your exams went well😳

Originally posted by: shymali

very beautifully written dear

continue soon

Thanks a lot🤗

Originally posted by: shreya09

Rituuu 🤗 🤗

i am finally here 😃
read all the chapters & i am glad that i am here 😃
like all the time i must say its beautiful 👏
& i am in love with Piya. such a sweet cute caring daughter 👍🏼.

Initially i was a bit skeptical about the concept... i mean... i am never really fond of memory loss stories ... especially if the person who lost the memory is the lead girl of the story... cant really tell you why... because even i don't know the real cause 😕... but i always have the habit of ignoring this kind of fictions.

but here, the sweet daughter Piya... & the lovely & caring dad Arjun... both of them (actually its you !!!!!) are forcing me to read & cherish it. & i am really loving it.
The father-daughter boding is beautiful ❤️
very nice going re.
waiting for more 😊 😳

Heylooo Shreya🤗
Good to see you here 😉
first of all thank you for reading so far..hehe i know it's a weird concept but i have something fun in mind..hopefully i can execute it and hopeee that you'll like it too😳
it's a lil different concept but hope that it goes well😃
haha thanks soo much for all the kind words..it means a lot lot lot to me!🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: manurocks

rituuu...

y did u stop at this point...!!!!!!!! :(
ur really awesome...
sakshi lost her memory... oh god...!!!1
how did this happen...
arjun found sakshi yeah...!!!!!!!
will sakshi recognise arjun???????
continue...soon

Thank you soo much 🤗
hehe will continue soon😃

Originally posted by: yams.s

Nice update

They meet finally

Saakshi has lost her memory

Continue Soon

Thanks a lot for the comment! 🤗

Originally posted by: skrafty

Awesome update
Loved it
Beautiful
Sakshi lost her memory😭😭
Arjun felt Sakshi presence
thats what they call true love
amazing
waiting for the next part
continue soon

Thank youuu Shravani🤗
hope you'll like the next one😃

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Sakshi lost her memory. Arjun found Sakshi. Interesting cont soon

Thanks a lot for the comment🤗

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Arrrggghhh cliffhanging...😡😡😡 😡😡😡

Awesome update...
Piya was so exited...😆😆😆
LOL...Poor Siddie...😆😆😆
Sakshi lost her memory...😲😲😲
What a wrong point to stop at????😡😡😡
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

oops i got it wrong hehe ..hope u had a good trip then 😃
LOL yes ..but will update soon😉
Thanks soo much for the comment! Hope you'll like the next chapter!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie

For chapter 3 :

Girl! You make me smile and cry, both at once.. Those flashbacks were so touching..

Initially I'd thought that maybe Arakshi had issues between them and that is why Sakshi had left, but nope.. The flashbacks tell an entirely different story..

They were so adorable, a couple so much in love with their bundle of joy completing the picture..

Piyaa.. She's actually too mature for her age, but I guess that was a part of growing up without her Mom and watching her father in pain.. I wish once reunited with Sakshi, she gets to relive all those moments she's missed out on.. With both her parents by her side..

Again, I'm in love with your Papa Arjun.. Even when in pain, he seems endearing to me.. 😆 ❤️
Ignore that, I'm hopelessly in love.. 🤪

Yippee! Bags packed and ready for a tour to Darjeeling.. It's been nearly 10 years since I've been there.. And I'm sure you're going to make me revisit those memories.

(Will read and comment on Ch 4 later.. Using my phone!)

Thanks for the PM, Rituu.. I'm loving this one.. 😊


Avniii🤗
First of all thanks soo much for taking out the time and reading anddd writing such a huge comment 😳 Again, it makes me feel good and i have a huge smile on my face
hehe you are in love with my Arjun and I think I am hopelessly in love with your one😆
mera real-life Arjun kahan haiii🥺
anywaaay thank youu again❤️
P.S - me too i went there when i was a baby so barely remember anything! but hope i have been able to do justice to the beautiful place with my words😃


Originally posted by: kunchu

I am sorry to say that I hate you

You make me wish for a looong trip with each update of every story
I seriously hate u for that because there is no chance for a trip in my cards.
hate u again...
but I still love each of your updates
irony indeed.
Piya meets her mom and then anamika!
What happened?? jaldi bathao na!!
And the meet of Sakshi and Arjun was just to magical
as if she came infront of him from the thin air
just like magic
lovely yaar
continue soon
and I hate to love you
and love to hate you tooo

he he he he he i had a hugeee smile while reading your comment!
not because u cant go on a holiday but because you hate to love me and love to hate me lol😆
ahh dont say that! i m sure you can go on a holiday soon! everyone deserves a break..i know some managers can be reallly khadoos 🤔
i got lucky that my manager loves to travel himself so when i ask him about a holiday he himself gets so excited and starts asking me about where i'm going LOL😆 but i m finishing with him soon sighhh..pata nahi next wala kaisa hoga
my ex-manager on the other hand wasn't this kind
anyhooo..just pack up your bags and go one day 😃
until then, the least i can do is transport you there 😳 (virtually hehe)..i hope i do an okay job out of it 😛 that' was a long comment..i m just loving my keyboard lol
Thank youuu 🤗
P.S - Anamika is Sakshi only😛

Originally posted by: Areesha566

Super part ritu
love it alot
the way you discribed excitment of traveling and beauty of journy whole was fas
oh i soo wish to get in a train and travel to diffirend cities in Pakistan, its been years i haven't travel in train
the way you penned down piya and arjun's emotions was awesome
piya sakshi meet was heart wrenching
poor baby
how did sakshi landed in darjleen?
How come she lost her memory?
Hmmm many questions and for answer we have to wait till next update soo update soon sister

Aww thanks sooo much Areesha!🤗
you know what? you should take out some time and totally do it..there's so much to see in this world 😳
your questions will be answered with the upcoming updates..maybe not all at the moment, but with time yes😃
Thanks again for reading and for the comment😃

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital

It was just awesome...

Seeing Piya, even in her state of lost memory Sakshi feels
some familiarity...its just great...
Eager to know more about Sakshi...

Cont. soon...
Thanks for the pm...

Thanks a lot for the comment Anjalii🤗
hope you'll like the next bit😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...a very different and new concept...👍🏼
i read all the four parts in one go... superb...👏

cant wait for ur updates...continue soon...

please pm me too...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angelicdeepti

wow...a very different and new concept...👍🏼

i read all the four parts in one go... superb...👏

cant wait for ur updates...continue soon...

please pm me too...


Helloo! Thank you soo much for taking out the time to read and comment🤗
Glad you liked it..and sure will PM you😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heyloo! 🤗
Guess who's back with an update?😆 Thanks to all the angry faces and numerous question marks, I decided to do a quickish update..and a longgg one especially for youu😳 Haha..it wasn't supposed to be so big but kinda wanted to include a lot of things in it!
Very very sceptical about this chapter as probably it reaches the height of filminess😆
But anyhooo, you are the judge, so do let me know if you really hate this concept or if it's going okay! Hope this chapter will clear some of the questions you have!

Pardon me for the extra long update again! And read onnn!

Note: I don't have much knowledge about amnesia..whatever I have penned down is a lil borrowed from Wiki and some of my imagination😛 so if any info is wrong/incorrect, do forgive me and just read it like pure fiction😆

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I am praying that you don't see this as a cliffhanger😆

Do leave your comments and likes pretty please😳

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago

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