Arakshi SS - Phir Milenge *Complete* Bonus Chapter - pg 75

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Rituuu rituuu new story..yoohooo

Yes im loving it...the father side of arjun..always wanted to see that from your pov and i got it 😳 😳

I loove the father-daughter relationship piya and arjun shares and also that of best friends 😃

I also wish sakshi comes back and we get to see the complete little family 😃

Oh yes yes you should definitely continue it 😛 😛

Love it..thank you sooo much 🤗

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

it was totally different one...

definitely u should cont.

y sakshi left him...

priya and arjun both missing sakshi badly...
plz yaar do cont soon...

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: --Iqra--
Brilliant!! And yes, yes, yes!! Do continue!!

Thank youuu🤗

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Different but interesting concept
do continue soon

Thanks a lot🤗

Originally posted by: My_loveis_gone
Awesme start dear. I like it

Thank youu🤗

Originally posted by: Fantasia_junkie
Omg!! Ritttudii.. This is wonderphool.. 🤗
I love it already.. Loaded with emotions.. Those of a little girl, raised by a single parent and a father, who was forced to don many roles all of a sudden..
Then of course there's the mystery surrounding Sakshi leaving the house.. I wonder what could be the reason for her abandoning her happy little world..
Something crime related or even serious.

Anyhow, the note brings hope.. For everyone.. I'm already jumping and requesting/demanding an update.. 😆

P. S. The best part is that Arjun ji hasn't changed much.. He's still Akdu, but undoubtedly the best father in the world in little Piya's eyes.. And she seems to be a miniature version of hwr mother.. 😳

Do I need to add, I loved it..
Please jaldi update karo..

Avniii🤗

Yaaay you liked it 😃😃😃

hehehee yes he shall still remain akdu but a loving father too😳

Thank youuu for the comment❤️

Originally posted by: kunchu
Thats a promising start Ritu
Waiting for more
Loved this single father again
Piya is very matured n reminds of Sakshi too
Continue soon

Thank youuu soo much Helna🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: skrafty
awesome start Ritu
Loved it
So Arjun raised Piya alone
I wonder what made Sakshi leave behind her happy Family
Piya's thoughts were nicely written
waiting for the next part eagerly
continue soon

Thanks a lot Shravani 🤗

hope you'll like the next part😃

Originally posted by: Humzy
wow awsm start
very beautifully written
loved it
do continue soon
excited to read
sounds like its going to be interesting

Thank youuu Humairaaa🤗

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
hey another story very good 😃 would always love and welcome ur stories
14 yr ki daughter and sakshi disappeared from arjun and piya's life when she was just 6
but why she did it on purpose or some one forced her
will the story revolve around piya or will we get flash back of arjun sakshi's happy married life
piya got some clue of sakshi
thanks for pm and do continue 😊 hope of again going on nature exploring tour with u 😃

hehee i m glad you liked it Shefali😳

it will include both actually..and yes there will be flashbacks😉

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm start
Loved it
Supperbbb..
Loved Piya very much...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

Thank youu Nikita🤗

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
Are you by any way interacting more with Helna or Avni these days?Fiction k start mein hi rula diya with a cute little girl's POV
Piya seems to be more mature that the kids of her age group.

Baaki ka baadmein.Abhi main thodi emotional ho gai

Heyloo Farheen🤗

heheheee nahi tohhh..ehm sorry to make you emo lol..don't worrry, this story will be more fel-goodish (maybe some emo parts in between lol)

hope you like it and thanks for the comment🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Areesha566
Diffrent concept
ab story start ki hai toh continue it warna bohot pito gi sabse 😛

Thank youuu🤗

lol of course continue karungi hehe ..btw is your name Areesha?

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58
awsome start ritu di...
love piya..and this new concepty..
plz plz plz con.soon...
waiting for more...

THanks a lot Gausiya🤗

Originally posted by: yams.s
Awesome Update

Saakshi left Arjun. Still Piya and Arjun loves her

eager to know why she left

Continue Soon

Thank youuu🤗

Originally posted by: teamasadandzoya
why do you do this to me!!! I am so excited! I just read it and I fell in love!
seriously still such a big fan of yours! your writing is amazing and how you describe and pen everything down is just too phenomenal!
I was like 'this couldn't get any better' but then I would read the next chapter and say " yep, just got better!"
So for my sanity, i do hope you continue this story :D i can't wait for the next chapter xx

awww that means a lot to me Kiya..really it does! Thank you sooo much 🤗

i am like this ->☺️

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome start!
Continue soon 😃

Thanks a lot Jia🤗

Originally posted by: PrincessSassy
continue continue plzzz

Thank youu..will do hehe😳

btw, what's your name?

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: shymali
kahani tho bohoth acha hai
aapko jaldi se continue karna padega
please please please

Thank youuu 🤗

sure suree i will do😳

Originally posted by: fly.high
Remembrance is an apt word for chap 1...bt even Resemblance is...coz everything abt and in Piya resembles sakshi!!

a very promising start...intriguing and addictive like most of ur stories!

pls continue this story!

PS: i 've already found a face for Piya *yippe*

Aishaa🤗

Thanks sooo much for the comment!

P.S - Thanks for the face of Piya - she is perfect😉

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital
Really a promising start...

I loved this concept...

The maturity that Piya's character is having, is very impressive...

I will surely love to know more about their life...

Please cont. soon..

Thanks for the pm...

Thank youuu Anjalii🤗

hope you'll like the next bits😃

Originally posted by: NATURESHIVANI
awseome start di
loved it what a mystry
arjun and sakshi married and they have daughter
but why did sakshi left her family
love piya charactersation
and in last who send the later

Thanks a lottt Prakriti🤗

all that will be revealed in time😉

Originally posted by: PoohLover
Rituuu rituuu new story..yoohooo

Yes im loving it...the father side of arjun..always wanted to see that from your pov and i got it 😳 😳

I loove the father-daughter relationship piya and arjun shares and also that of best friends 😃

I also wish sakshi comes back and we get to see the complete little family 😃

Oh yes yes you should definitely continue it 😛 😛

Love it..thank you sooo much 🤗

Poooh Bearrr your comments mean a lot to me you know that?😳

Thank you sooo much for loving and encouraging me as usual🤗

tu nahi hoti toh mera kya hota?😃

Originally posted by: anu91
it was totally different one...
definitely u should cont.
y sakshi left him...
priya and arjun both missing sakshi badly...
plz yaar do cont soon...

thanks a lot anuuu🤗

hope you like the next bit😉

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Aadhya

@AadhyaAashutosh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Hi ritu

i knw i am super dooper late...am very sry for that

cmng to the update, wht a strt 👍🏼

i felt very bad for Piya...bt she still believes her mom 😃

Poor arjun 😭 😭 😭

thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh
Hi ritu
i knw i am super dooper late...am very sry for that
cmng to the update, wht a strt 👍🏼
i felt very bad for Piya...bt she still believes her mom 😃
Poor arjun 😭 😭 😭
thanks for pm & cont soon 🤗

Thank youuus hai jii😳

and its okaay dont worry about being late🤗