ARJUN SS : Mehfuz..ch 8/page 33 updt 7/6(complete) - Page 16

hmmm...
so arjun has finally decided to meet rosh...
but wo ladki kaun thi..?
arjun...corrupt..kamina policewala...hehe..
d way u showed the battle between arjun's mind n heart was truly nice...

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

Brilliant darling!!

first you gave us Arjun's emo-turmoil...his pain & helplessness to meet Sam's family...& then he finds a ray of hope by seeing Sam's friend...wow!

and his hesitation to meet her was superbly narrated. (Thank your lucky stars that you live that far from me, else I would've printed my red lipstick marks on your cheeks)

& then that tom boy...& his out of the world remarks on Arjun...kya observation hain...👏🤣

Looking forward to see A-R meet. do continue.

@Laila & @REE Thanks for Double PM.

mujhe to triple pm mila... 2 laila se..ek rimi di se.. 🤢

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

thanks dear..😳😳
fall in love?? abhi se??😲

ok toh thik war kr lene do😛 fir un logo ko girna pyaar ke hind sagar mein😃😆

awesome update

Awesome
loved it...

So arjun totally lost...moved towards the railway station,unknown to his destination...
But destiny had decided something for him already😊

loved the part of cutting chai and how beautifully u described that money is not everything in one's life👏
Unfortunately in today's world...people only think about money and at times,though not always compromise with the relationships😒

Roshni was so important for Sam...the way he had beaten the culprit who killed the girl with the same name,very well described that...

Arjun got his destination...finding Roshni...his pov was again beautifully described👏
I personally don't think that Rosh will blame Arjun for Sam's death..the way u had portrayed the character

loved it when Arjun reached Roshni's home...
the tomboy girl...she was just too much😆
well hr policewala corrupt nhi hota and Arjun...kamina😲
humare Arjun ka to gussa hona jayaz hai😃

Now its time to meet Rosh...
jaldi milwa bhi do😆
Continue soon

Thanks for the pm

Awesome
Superb
loved it

Arjun went to railway station unknown to his destination...
but destiny (no,Rimi di😆) has already decided something for him😊

the cutting chai...very beautifully described that money cannot buy everything...happiness👏
unfortunately in this world,most of them just go for money...though not all...but at times they compromise with the relationships😒

finally Arjun got his destination...Dehradun

Arjun's pov was well written...
but i personally don't think that Roshni will blame him for Sam's death
owing to the characterization of the character Roshni

Roshni was really very important for Sam...the way he had beaten the culprit who killed the girl with the same name...well describes this

Arjun's entry to Roshni's home...😆the tom boy girl was really too much😆
she must realise
hr policewala corrupt nhi hota
aur usne to Arjun ko corrupt aur kamina...😆

well ab Roshni ki entry to karwa hi di hai
ab jaldi se milwa bhi do😊
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

p.s
sorry for twice comment,i thought pehla wala delete ho gaya tha

Awesome update

well, awesome!

awesome update👏👏👏👏👏
well going dear😉😉😉😉😉
a very good friend left him😭😭😭😭😭
nyc update😃😃😃😃😃
cont soon😊😊😊😊😊😊

Sry for editing res one late