ARJUN SS : Mehfuz..ch 8/page 33 updt 7/6(complete)

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Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Awesome update..
Arjun missing Sam and his emotional state, his helplessness and pain to meet Sam's family all was well written as always.
Liked his pov about meeting Roshni..
And the girl at the last I mean the tom boy and her last sentence about Arjun was superb..🤣
Waiting for A-R meet.
@laila and @rimi ..thanks for double pm.cont soon.

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kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#162

I was also thinking what exactly would Arjun say to Roshni

and how could e wish her to support, guide or even like him

because as far as I got it, she dont know him

so thinking to the extreme is tough

still waiting for the update

and I liked your tom boy a lot too

thanks for the 2 PMs

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ponnuz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Hey..Sorry that i couldnt comment before..Have been away for some time..But anyways...the story is taking an interesting turn..👏 Hmm..Roshni is Sam,s Good luck charm.huh??😉 I hope she turms out to be arjuns too..It is so refreshing that even after the show ended we get to read such good pieces of wriring...we remain connected to our favourite characters,,thank u for that wonderful update..👏

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princess_pari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

emotional kar diya yaar...

really good story...

loved the way you described impact of sameer's death on arjun...

dialogues are awesome esp the one one where roshni's roommate calls him corrupt police officer...

too good.

👍🏼

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it
Amazing...
Beautifully written...
Loved that girl...
Arjun corrupt b kamina 🤣
Finally he is gonna meet Roshni...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM

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638783

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Posted: 11 years ago

#166

ch 1:

awesome start👍🏼

loved the relation between sam and arjun ❤️

but then arjun lost sam... so sad😭

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638783

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Posted: 11 years ago

#167

ch 2:

the breakfast table part was really sad.. arjun and masi both are missing sam...😭

loved the way arjun treated that criminal... 😡

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638783

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Posted: 11 years ago

#168

ch 3:

awesome update👏

so roshni was sam's lucky charm...

lovely

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638783

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

ch 4:

awesome update👏

waiting for the arni meet😃

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rimi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#170

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@ laila : finally you notices...earlier quotes bhi parke batana next update mein..😛
yep its true..just like the show,here too its all circumstantial..Arjun never had relations to know about them...😛
thank you so much laila for the lovely feedback...the tom boy..imagine who ever you want except me..i always drool on him, even corrupt him..😳
well glad you liked..keep reading..update coming up..ab jao ek aur res karo aur bhool jao..i so hate you for this laila..😡😡

@Sneha : cliffhanger kaha hai??kidnap karo na per ghar mein Ac hai na?🤢🤢
so true sneha...arjun's secret weapon 'his cutting chai' 😃😃
piche se courier wala hi dhikta hoga..😆😆
thanks sneha...hope next update mein aise wordless na ho jao..stay tuned..😳

@Goldie : thanks goldie..glad you liked it gldie..yeah the tom boy..
keep reading update coming up...😳😳

@unishaz,@rinku,@aradhya,@devangana,@iqra,@Areesha.@shakti : thanks😳😳

@Atisha : thank you so much...i am not too far for that atisha...i always have my cheeks forwarded...out of the world?? that is you sweet heart..tom boy is still on earth...😛

Keep reading...

@ishi : thanks..glad you liked..keep reading..😳😳

@Aditi : thanks dear...stay tuned..😳😳

@Anjali : true anjali...its always the relations that falls apart when people lust for money and power..they have to meet now...stay tuned..thanks for the lovely comments..i dont mnd reading twice..😆

@Anant : finally a long comemnt from you..glad to read it..thank you..keep reading..😉

@#skrafty: thank you..keep reading..😃

@Swara : thanks swara...glad you liked...keep reading..update coming soon...😊

@kuchu : thanks kuchu...yep you are right...thinking to the extreme is tough almost impossible..but Arjun can wish for that..that isnt wrong..ab age kya hoga..lets see,...
thanks again...keep reading..hope i wont disappoint you till the end...😕

@ponnuz : well glad to see your comment...thank you so much...keep reading and commenting...😳😳

@pari : good to see you back maam...glad you liked..thanks keep reading..😃😃

@nikita : thanks dear...😊

@jia : Glad you caught up with all the parts...thanks...keep reading..😊

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