Ariya SS: kiwu hogaya nah pyar update part 5 A & B pg 32 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Superb starting. Thanks for pm. Conti soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Continue... Soon... Hope sab theekh ho
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting dear..
plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farana786


hahahah confused aatma reine 😆
yap raj n ri were in reltnshp 5 yrs n b4 the maarige raj realise his love for sakahi so he broke of with ri bur riya chalenged him kevshe wont tell anyone and he had to tell oll.
yea etf n arjun ka entry later rahe ga n it wil b blast 😃

okay haye ab confusion chala gya..hash..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Update soon please
Please update all your stories also
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
part 2 :
riya wiped her tears and said to herself '' nahi riya tuh kamzoor nahi hai aur naa he tuh itni aasaani se haar maanegi ''
she changed and went to jogging to the nearest park . it was 10pm so three were not many people around , she saw an empty bench so she went and sat three and looked at the stars
'' kiwu kiya aisa mere saath tuu ne haa''
she was so lost in herself that she didn't noticed a guy sitting beside her and listening to her talks
riya murmured to herself '' ab mei kiya kaungi ,kaise mummy aur papa ko bataungi ke raj ne kiya , kia''
listening to the name the guy turned around and saw the girl .she was very beautiful ,innocent looking eyes and dimples but that was hidden under the sad face
guy: ahmmm ahmmm
riya startled lloked beside her with wide eyes , quickly she wiped her tears and smiled little bit '' wohh wohh i am sorry i didn't see you . sorry to disturb you sir ''
guy: its ok no problem . waise ek baath poochu
riya nodded
guy: wohh ap itni sad kiwu lag rahi thi
riya looked at the guy angrily
guy: woh bura math maniye .kisi neh kaha hai ke dard baatne se he kaam hota hai aur dil ko sukoon milta hai aur ek ajnabi ko batane mei kiya harj hai
riya soften towards the guy and smiled abit
guy: by the way , hi i am shreekant but you can call me shree
riya: mei riya hu
shree: toh riya batao kiya problem hai appko
riya nodded : wohh do din mei meri shadi hai
shree: kiya ? i mean this is good nah .. toh app phir ro kiwu rahi thi
riya: ha mera hone wala paati aur mei ek dusre ko 5 saal se jaante hai aur ajj usne kujhse kaha ke woh mujhse nahi balke kisi aur se pyar karta hai and he doesn't want to marry me
shree: what? magar ussne ab kiwu kaha aisa
riya: pata nahi '' , and she started crying
shree: dekho riya pahele rona band karo.you have to be strong aur thank us god ka ke usne abhi tumse sacch kaha warna agar shadi ke baad kaheta toh
riya looked at him and thought about his words but said '' ha woh but ab mei mummy aur papa ko kaise batao
shree: dekh riya tuh strong bun aur us kamine ko shadi ke he din sabak sikha
riya smiledbut i cant make my parents head low . i cant , mujhse yeh nahi hoga aur naa hi mei unko dukh desakti hu ab jo bhi hoga upar waale ke marzi se he hoga
shree: ok jaise tujhe thik laage . waise friends
riya smiled and nodded '' friends ''
riya: waise mei ek baath poochu .
shree noded ''ha pocchoo''
riya; app itni raath ko yaha kiya karte the
shreesadly: woh i was missing my family toh yaha aagaya .waise acha he huwa i came here , see mujhe tum milgayi
riya laughed
'' kaam kiya karte ho shree''
shree; ETF mei hu aur tu
riya: really mei FBI mei hu
shree: kiyaaa sach and yet we never met nah aur woh kamina
riya: woh bhi fbi mei he hai
shree: khair kab hai shadi
riya sadly: doo din baad .ana agar waqt milee , patani kiya ho uss roj
shree: thik hai try karunga but i too have to attend one weeding same day
riya; acha shree mujhe chalna chaheye warna mum ghabraa rahi hoogi
shree: ok by and oll the best
wedding day came all were busy and happy except riya and raj and saskhi ofcoz
riyas parents took her to the mandap when baaraatis came .
riya saw raj in dulhas attire with sakshi beside him and she felt a pang of pain and she didn't no what raj was upto.
she looked around searching throughout the hall for her new friend but couldn't see him .''shayad nahi aya ''
pundit called raj in the mandap
raj: everybody i want to tell you all something
all quieten up And were looking at him confusingly and what was dulha upto now but riya knew very well
raj: i cant marry riya
riya sat down with a thump with tears flowing down her cheeks while the rest wereshocked
raj parents: raj beta yeh kaisa Mazak hai
raj: ma pa yeh Mazak nahi hai
raj p: but u loved riya isi liye toh humne yeh shadi fix ki thi
raj: but i don t love her anymore , i love sakshi now
riya parents: raj beta how could you do this to us to your riya. ab uska kiya hoga .woh toh tujhse he ppyar karti hai nah
raj was about to say something when riya remembered ehr friends words and stood up strongly interrupting '' ma papa , bas ki jiye . app ko meri kasam hai .app inke saamne bhek nahi maangege,areh woh raj kiya yeh rista torega ,mei yeh rista torti hu.
all gasped
riya father: beta please kuch math bolo apne future ka socho
riiya: ma wahi toh socch ke bol rahi hu mei .areh jo insaan 5 saal ki rista ka ahmiyath nahi jaantha uske saath puri zindagi guzarne se acha hai mei hamesha akeli he rahu
raj: riya enough bahut boliya ab ek sabt bhi nahi ,yeh math bhulo ke tum...
riya: mei kiya raj haa , mei kiya , mei larki hu isi liye tum log kuch bhi kaho ge
in the crowd all were wishpering '' ab kiya hoga yeh larki se kaun shadi karega ''
riya shouted '' bas kijiye aap sab bas
rp: pliz beta ...
riya: nahi maa
raj parents: riya beta we are sorry and ashamed of rajs act but we cant do anything , all we want is our sons happiness
riya with tears: aunty aapne baari aasaani se keh diya ke apko apne bete ki khushi chaheye nah aur mera kiya aunty boliye nah mera kiya .mere ma baap ka kiya ,unkke izzath ka kiya ,bolo ab kaun karega mujhse shaadi '' saying this she broke down
tabhi from the back they heard a strong voice '' yeh sab kiya horaha hai yaha ''
all turned towards the entrance and saw 4 boys and 2 girls standing there.
raj: bhaii ...
riya: shree
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
thats all for today . now take your swet time to read n give views .
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Sor Raj is Sree's brother. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Awesome update...
Loved it a lot.
Loved Riya-Shree's meet...
So,Raj is Shree's bro..
Feeling really bad for Riya.
Continue sooonish...
Thanks for the pm... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic
Who did raj called bhai?
Wow shree and riya became friends
Finally riya stood up for herself
Continue soon
Thanks for pm

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