Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4 - Page 58

Avniii🤗

Yes yes I am ready with my notepad file to write my essay *fingers aimed over keyboard*🤪

Hayeee maar hi daala! With that description of the waterfall and the scene at the end.. you have officially sent me off to a dreamland where I am not listening to Banjaara in the background but but but *drumroll* .. no wait u guessed it so I needn't.. no why not! HUMDARD! Sigh if only he knew how I love his voice *dreamy* and how much I had wanted him to sing Humdard live.. unfulfilled wishes *sigh*

Focus Ritu!!🤓

Ok back to the update. Wait, I have skipped ahead!

So back to the beginning *rewinds tape*

I love love love how you portray her emotions... when her mind tells her something and her heart tells her something and she is confused as to whether to confront the man she loves and ask him for the reasons or whether to keep it to herself.

Darnn I forgot to say what I should have said first.. that quote you started off with, is beautiful!!

So then she heads off to find him at the academy! And then yikes.. he must have really beat that man. But then that man deserved it😡

Ah... so I am guessing that Arjun has a painful.. like really painful past.. his father did the same to his mother? It's just a guess after reading the whole thing.

If so, then I can totally imagine his rage and the way he vented out all his anger on that man.

It scared me when Sakshi goes to his house again and finds his house in the destroyed state *ouch* I could almost hear the glass breaking. And he leaves... I was going to write that was a beautifully written part but am not going to, because then I don't know what to write about the second one!

"Winding her way through the tall trees, she let the sounds guide her and soon stood in front of a resort tucked between the hills, overlooking a lake. She was mesmerised by the sheer natural beauty of the place, the small cozy-looking resort was nestled between the hilly slopes, surrounded by gushing water streams and natural waterfalls."

"Splitting into five cascades, the gushing streams of water seemed to be doing somersaults before leaping on the rocks below. The splashes at the bottom, together with the faint moonlight streaming through the Chilgoza Pine trees, created an arc that resembled a lunar rainbow."

Why why why do you do this? Such beautiful descriptions of nature... Kempty falls! Ahh...😭

You know nature is my weakness *dreamy* I wanna go there now *sobs* I am so far away...

No wait, I loved it

I went there such a longgg time ago with my grandparents and parents. I think it was in the same trip to Dhanaulti.. or maybe on a different one. These places were at driving distance from Delhi, so we often used to take off during the vacations. Like I said, daddy dearest and his travelling obsession. This is completely random but there was another place which mesmerised me... it's probably not that well-known but it's nearby. It's called Chakrata (google it)... the second time I went there I was 16 or something and the place is so quiet.. pine trees everywhere and lonely roads...the green mountains... it just feels sooo magical! I still can't explain why I loved that place so much. Maybe some time you can (only if you wish) use that place in this story ;)

Back to the update!

Those lines above were beautiful - I know main pagal hoon.. yeh pehle bolna chahiye tha na! Hold on.. flashback moment *thinking* someone said she couldn't write waterfall descriptions.. I wonder who it was? *thinking hardd* Because that someone should totally read those lines. And then... *rolls sleeves* I'll just take care of the rest.😈

Joking! Woman, you transported me there.. like your words were like a portkey! Yes, a portkey! I read them and I was there

That part was sooo beautifull... I am in a dreamland right now *Banjaara moment*

Hayyeee.. the waterfall, the bheega hua Arjun (his pain.. *ouch*) and then her comforting arms... her soothing words. Sigh!

And she didn't leave him :')

There was something very beautiful about these lines:

"The man before her was one of the strongest men she had known; he was a protector who shielded people and fought for them when they themselves couldn't. But tonight, he looked broken beyond repair."

"She was the most beautiful thing that had happened to him in a long time."

And then they hugged... hayee

So much pain and hurt... sigh! Ok, I should slip into my dreamland now. I wrote a whole page😲

Yeah I was typing in word lol. Acha, I've bored you enough hehehe😆

I absolutely loveddd the second bit and even thoughhh u stopped at kinda a crucial point, I'm still in the trance of that waterfall in the moonlight and hotwa.. eeesh.

Sirf humdard missing tha .. joking!🤣

It was perrrfect! And yeshhh I love youuu🤗❤️

P.S - I don't know how you do it.. a whole day of work and then you type such a beautiful update and post it soo late and go in to work tomorrow ..rather today morning.

I respect you!

So I will just say update when you get some time and doo take care of yourself❤️

Needless to say, I'm waiting for moree (yeah even.. ahem ahem.. that lil thing)
Naah.. take your time😳

P.P.S - I probably filled this comment with random stuff🤣