Arakshi FF: Ajeeb si daastan.. Chapter 18C - Pg.101 27/4

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#591

Awesome update...

Starting quote was Awesome...👏👏👏

Sakshi's heart feelings & mind statements were superb...& really written very well...👏👏👏

Aisha knew Sakshi very well...& she might have guessed something about Arakshi...😃😃😃

I am confused with Arjun's past now...😕😕😕

Well its nothing new that I got confused in ur stories...😆😆😆...so chill...😛😛😛

I am happy that atleast Sakshi is there with Arjun despite of her questions ...😃😃😃

Waterfall...amazing scene...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#592

"Your worst battle is between what you know and what you feel."This itself gave me a glimpse of what is in the update for us.

Their almost hit & misses **Sigh** I wonder how will the confrontation will take place but then at the end of this update,I hope it wont lead to misunderstanding that was about to happen if not for the incident that took place where she got a glimpse of Arjun's past but still there are many questions that needs be answered as to the staged blast ,her father's death ,Arjun's past,his absense when Samar Anand died.

Auron ko toh hardam saaya deta hai..

Woh dhoop mein hai khada khud magar..

I loved these verses in the song which reflected Arjun's persona in mere two lines.**Sigh Again**

"I'm just like the man I hate the most..

She wasn't leaving..❤️

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Barnali

@Paradise_1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#593

awesome update... Waiting for the next one eagerly...

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yams.s

@yams.s

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#594

Wonderful Update filled with varying emotions.

Saakshi wanted to question Arjun about him disappearing and leaving her father when he needed him most

But the unexpected turn of events caused her to see his angry and vulnerable side

It was nice of her to comfort him and get conforted in return.

Waiting for Arjun's past

Continue soon

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#595

There is a conflict between herself whether to confront him or not.

Though she is disappointed with him for the past, but she trust him as a person.

At end its only them.

Nice part

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#596

Hi,

I just wanna inform you that my new schedule of university is very tough & hectic, I wouldn't be able to follow this beautiful story of yours.

I hope you won't mind if I drop out of this one.😳

Regards & best wishes,

Laila😊

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fly.high

@fly.high

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#597

Ajeeb Daastaan Hai Yeh
Kahan Shuru Kahan Khatam
Yeh Manzile Hai Kaunsi
Na Voh Samajh Sake Na Hum

Ajeeb Daastaan Hai Yeh
Kahan Shuru Kahan Khatam
Yeh Manzile Hai Kaunsi
Na Voh Samajh Sake Na Hum

Yeh Roshni Ke Saath Kyoon
Dhuaan Utha Chiraag Se
Yeh Roshni Ke Saath Kyoon
Dhuaan Utha Chiraag Se
Yeh Khwaab Dekhti Hoon Main
Ke Jag Padi Hoon Khwaab Se
Ajeeb Daastaan Hai Yeh...

yes this was the song I was listening to while reading this whole update...

the pain and anguish of sakshi mixed quite up with the misunderstandings and her own relevant assumptions were rightfully described well...

did I tell you that u r one of those gifted writers who make me feel the pain of the characters right to the core
hats off to u for this

that filthy creature of disgust deserved this from arjun for doing those horrific things to his wife...

you described the serene and beautiful waterfalls so spell bounded that I could feel myself walking in between those pine trees...

pain reflecting through each word of arjun sent shivers down my spine

I m glad that the confrontation waits as of now...
I really wanted both of them to know the real of each other

well that was an expected Cliffhanger

continue soon avni

PS: dying to read Lady in red...

Edited by fly.high - 11 years ago

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Shezi19

@Shezi19

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#598

Hey dear
Sorry read late and comments late
Very nice indeed
Especially the scene you create
Mesmerising me
The way you express the pain Arjun feel
It's really touch my heart
Sakshi anger and after that her consoling way
It's so beautiful
Thanks for pm me
Very good going story
I can't wait to reveal Arjun past

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misakiscarlet

@misakiscarlet

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#599

amazing update ..
very well written.. i could actually imagine it all before my eyes and thats what i really like with your stories.. ur way of writing is fabulous...
arjun's pain and sakshi's conflict was very nycily potrayed..
the scene was beautifully created...
i am waiting u to reveal arjun's past soon
so plz plz dont b late.. and contd. soon
thnx for pm

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Shreya

@shreya09

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#600

Speechless !!!!!!

a very very very well written chapter Avantika 👍🏼

the emotions... the pain... the helplessness felt by both of them... the warmth they hold for each other... excellently written 👏

the way you described Arjun... & his pain... Sakshi's anger and more than that her care for him... really cant describe how i am feeling. but the way you have written it... its simply Outstanding 👍🏼

eagerly waiting for the next part 😳