Arakshi SS: Adhoori Si Dua # 2 Last - Pg. 11 (22/12)

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Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Awesome..
Arjun and Sakshi's emotions were portrayed beautifully..👏
love ur writing
cont soon and thanks for pm..

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awwwsssmmm part
loved it
Beautiful...
cont sooon
thanks for PM

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Jannat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Fantastic and fab update Avantika

Loved the update so much

Thanx 4 The PM

Update Soon

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Rruucchhiibbhh

@Rruucchhiibbhh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

thanks for de pm
Very intresting story
Nd beautifully writern specially sakshi nd arjuns thaughts
Sakshi is trying but failed nd his ignorance made her give up
I womder y she is giveing up pls do ipdate soon
Pls do pm me 😊

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Shreya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

new story 😃 😃 😃

beautiful writing

superb 👏

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yams.s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wonderful Update.

Arjun and Saakshi's emotions portrayed wonderfully

Waiting for next update

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kirthiii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

that was beautifully written... both of them should just stop being so stubborn

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NeethuEli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Fantastic update as always!!
Loved it and continue soon.
Their emotions were correctly portrayed!

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Oh My.

You should NOT have stopped there.

Now i am going to be thinking about this and this only and wont be able to work lol😆..not that i have much to do at the moment since i was reading your SS anyway hehehe

But - WOW. You write so beautifully!

I was hooked from the very first word until i reached the end!! It was beyond amaaazing.

I love how much he loves her and yet...he doesn't want to break down the walls he has built around him.

Each and every line was written beautifully Avantika! 👏 I could feel their love - so strong!😳

Ah i have a feeling the next one will be a sad one - sighhh! But even then, I will be waiting until you do update!

P.S - Ehm, is Sakshi pregnant?

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Avantika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Hey everyone.. Okay.. I'm sort of breaking my own record here..
But that's only coz I'm going to be away on the weekend.. So let's not keep u hanging until then..

A quick set of thank-you's that needed to be done.. Really appreciate all your feedback, praises and crying.. Thank you soo much guys.. This one is indeed special to me, and I can't thank you guys enough.. 🤗

@ B1.. 😆 You know me really well, don't u? 😛😆 Yup, mushkil prem kahani it is! And yeah, Arjun needs to realise that he'll only end up being complete if he bares it all before her while she needs to understand that it's the unsaid words and emotions that matter in their unusual relationship.
So yes, like u guessed rightly, tears and smiles coming your way.. 😳 Thank you soo much for putting up with my crazy rant! 😆

@Sakuu: Thanks dear.. Glad u could relate to it.. 😃

@ PC: Just that res makes me wanna say, I love u too, damnit! 😆

@ Radhika Shah: Thank you!

@ shailyshukla9 : thanks.. 😳

@ sisodia_shefali: Yup, u understood it well.. More coming up.. Thanks.. 😃

@ PoohLover: eesh.. 🤗 Thanks so much.. 😆

@ Aisha.Vashishth : Thank you.. 😃 As always, u did get it right.. 😉 Yeah.. it was meant to be a dark and tragic story when I started penning it down.. But ah well.. It does appear different to me, from how I perceive it.. 😳

@ coolRD : thank you!

@ laila1994 : The link is in my index..

@ Gurmeet4Drashti : Thank you.. 😳

@ life93 : Neee.. 🤗 I know right.. 😉 The title is indeed special.. 😛 Haww.. sad aur main? 😲 Don't u know me, by now? 😛😆

@ Anjali.Mital : Thanks.. Glad u could relate to it.. 😃

@ Rehana25 : I get it.. But I can't write mush and cute romance always.. This is more how I like it.. Anyway, do read more to know.. 😃

@ drunkiiebabe : thanks!

@ Devangana : Thank you.. Err.. maybe.. 😉

@ jeevkutty : thank you.. 😃

@ kunchu : Thanks dear.. Lol, gussa kahan hai? 😆😉

@ ...Maha-Srk... : Aww.. Thank you.. 😳

@ anu91 : Thanks so much.. It isn't simple for him to let go of the walls around him.. But maybe now he will.. 😳

@ rizwanaa : Thanks.. Yeah.. let's see.. 😳

@ skrafty, Swara85, _Nikita_: Thank you.. 😃

@ Jannat94 : Thanks dear.. 😳

@ Rruucchhiibbhh: Thank you.. More on it in the next one.. 😃

@ shreya09, pihu_angad : Thanks.. 😳

@ yams.s : Thanks you! 😃

@ kirthiii : Thanks.. Yeah.. Well, it's not about being stubborn, I guess.. They need to deal with a lot of issues first.. 😳

@ -Beth- : Thank you.. Glad u like it.. 😃

@ ritu_24 : Aww.. Thanks.. Eesh.. 😕 That's just me..
Maybe he will realise that the walls around him have only hurt her rather than shielding him and her from pain.. Thanks so much.. And nah.. It won't be entirely sad, u know.. 😉
Err.. I leave that for u to find out.. Thanks so much.. 😃

Edited by _Mohabbatgirl_ - 11 years ago