Arakshi SS: Adhoori Si Dua # 2 Last - Pg. 11 (22/12)

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Devangana

@Devangana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Wonderful. Please update soon.

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Ritu Dang

@coolRD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Supr-dhasu supr-awsme upd8..maza aa gya pdh k.. so intnce nd at d sme tym so sweet nd romntic
cntinue soon.. waitng 2 knw wat hapns nxt
thnx 4 d pm

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angelicdeepti

@angelicdeepti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

very emotional storyline...

awesome portraying...

continue soon

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Anjali.Mital

@Anjali.Mital

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

I dont know what to say about this...it was just awesome...

The first parts were highly emotional...
At first , I couldn't imagine Sakshi in such a vulnerable state...
This much insecurities and fears...really a worst mental state to bear with...

And Arjun...sometimes I felt like..he himself not sure about what he wants and how he have to react...
Of course , it wont be easy for him to come out from his facade...
But its indeed difficult in being in a relationship with a man like him...

Anyways ...I really enjoyed and happy for that soothing kiss at the last...
Hope everything will be alright soon...

Cont. soon...Thanks for the pm...

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

hi avani di🤗...

awesome 😃...

now you made me smile 😉...just like your way😆...i didn't mean that sad 😛...but although o felt sad for Arjun And sakshi...that;s why i felt it was lil bit sad😆

but i know the way u bring them together and they will fall in love all over again just like before😉... i totally trust you😃...

felt sad that sakshi assumed that arjun didn't want this child and put herself in this condition...her state was too heart wrenching so arjun's was...

but when she told him that she is carrying his child his reaction was worth watching...😃...now want to see what and how will ACP made her smile😉...

update soon di...love u🤗

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

You, my dear, have the ability to make my tummy rumble, hands sweaty (gross) and feet wobbly at the same time.😕 (In a good way, of course! 😉)

How do you do that? 😲

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

awesome update thanks for the pm

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

No no no no nooo.

Why why whyyy did you have to stop there? I was so happy coz i read the first part today and got the update in the evening hehe, but now you stopped at another crucial point! No fairrr

Anyway, coming to the update.

In one word - beautiful! 👏👏👏

I wonder how you can write so well? hehe

I felt like i was reading an actual book - it was that well written! and i am not just saying - honestly!

Every emotion and feeling that Sakshi was going through was so beautifully penned down...i almost felt like it was happening to me! and every feeling was so real!

Ah, he loves her so much and yet...

It broke my heart to feel her insecurities, but the scene at the end

hope he can say it aloud in the next bit that yes, he loves her 😳 although his actions and his eyes speak, but she needs to hear it 😊

Waiting impatiently for the next bit!!

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Awwwssmmm part
loved it
Beautiful...
Amazing...
Wonderful... Supperbbb...
cont sooon
thanks for PM

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rizwanaa

@rizwanaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

brilliant update
her fears to loose Arjun and to make choices between
him n their baby in case Arjun's refuses was beautifully described
but the last part was very soothing
his one romantic gesture was enough to console her
excited for next part
thanks for pm
cont soon