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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

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ll-Shilpa-ll

@SIP1997

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

*Edited*

Damn it, You did it again!😡

What is wrong with you people, always giving heart wrenching cliffhangers and the a small precap.

*I will get you back for this.*😈

Anyway to the update, you almost gave me a heart attack, I really thought she was going to leave him without revealing the pregnancy bit, and yes I guessed it in the last update, but didn't want to give it away.😳

But...thank god she came to her senses in time.

So now he knows, the question is will they finally have the long overdue conversation? There is so much more to resolve before they move on with the baby.

Is he ready? She has laid her heart out to him, will he stand by her in the moment of need? Yes I know he loves her, but is he ready to let go of the past and embrace the future?

I think the news of baby the catalyst they needed to move their stagnant relationship forward finally.

I have already told you but I will say it again, beautifully penned muskil kahani behana. I love it.

And please continue soon or you won't get your X-mas present, yes I have a devil too.😛

Edited by ll-Shilpa-ll - 11 years ago

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Res/unres
i have no words to explain about update
sakshi fear of losing Arjun!!!!u perfectly pendown yaar so nice
definitely they are magical couple
i can visualize the scene
i must say loved the last part were Arjun smiled
waiting for precap

Edited by anu91 - 11 years ago

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Maham

@Mahaali2905

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Res/unres
wonderful update u r a amazing writer again no words n thnx 4 pm

Edited by ...Maha-Srk... - 11 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

wahaan ke res ko chod hi dehti hoom...

ab dono ke yahaan comment karthi hoom

It was awesome B2...

but u stopped at wrong places in both updates...two shot tha na...so continue karna chahiye tha...ab 3rd part ka wait karna padega...

Anyways, loved it...rulaa bhi diya...but poignant and intense is always beautiful...padhne mein maza aatha hai!

Her insecurities, her uncertainty regarding him was well written...yeh akdu ke mooh mein humesha taala kyun hai...but ok ek kiss karke saare dard mitaa diya...so sweet and romantic...

ab aage ka wait hai...

cont soon

Edited by vidya.anand - 11 years ago

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

No word of praise
except that
"lady... Take a bow please.." 👏

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sweetpari4u97

@sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

sorry for late comment.

busy with some work.

superb update.

loved it.

thankx for pm.

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Avni avni why did you stop like this..you really like leaving us a cliffhanger nah...naughty avni*pouts*

Sakshi was having soo many thoughts and perhaps yeah the situation she was currently in and arjun behavior made her think like that!!

Even i would be scared to death seeing this Arjun😲

The way sakshi was saying that she loves arjun and she didnt do it purposely was soo touching..i literally cried...and the whole part where arjun also ask if she is really pregnant and kiss her was sooo sooo emotional..rona aagaya sach mein 😭 😭

And for that kudos to you for being able to transmit the feelings to us 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

If i have to cry to read such astounding story..then i will...its always an immense pleasure to read what you write avni 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

It was a very impressive update and thank you heaps for updating soon and also for the pm and yes yes jaldi update karo 🤗 🤗

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Aap aur aapke cliffhangers😭

I could totally relate to Sakshi, but also to Arjun.. It is hard for him to change.

He loves her, yet still isn't able to say anything

She loves him, and knows he loves her.. Yet her ears are yearning to hear him say it.. And I can't fault her either

Blame the circumstances or the fact that they let their distances grow to such mountains

It will be good to see what Arjun will say in answer to her questions.. I think his answer/lack thereof will be the determining factor

Edited by Sakuu - 11 years ago

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

it ws poignant and intensely emotional..
Sakshi's worry nd her insecurities r valid...the way their relationship is crumbling right before her eyes...it will make any girl insecure...nd force to assume things..
dat too at sucha point whr she is not sure if her husband will accept their child...
she even doubts as it to b the symbol of their LOvE?

u again left us on a cliffhanger...

continue soonish
love
Aisha