ArAkshi OS: We're not broken just bent - Page 4

Originally posted by: shaleenrocks

Res/Unres

This was so beautiful and emotional too.. I loved how Sakshi made Arjun realize her importance. Every girl has right to try to fix their relation and if it does not work then she has right to walk out too..

But I am so glad Arjun realized her importance and did not let her go..

the paragraph " Main tumhare saath apni ki zindagi...lekin i need you to survive" ...wow..wow..I m short of words..I loved these lines..I wish Arjun says something like that to Sakshi in show too..

Every single of Arjun dialogues were so beautiful...kiss kiss ki tareef karo..I loved it loved it loved it ...

Sakshi this will be my most favorite OS from you...Keep writing..You are amazing writer and I dont want to miss reading from you...

About Raesha OS. I will try to write today and will pm u...

Thanks so much dear for wonderful OS👏

You liked it? Kya hogaya hai forum waasiyon ko? Bharati also liked it, I hated it lol😆

Originally posted by: Payal_156

beautiful os
lovely
very well written
awesome title

thanks for liking it. The title is from a song called just give me a reason😃

Originally posted by: peppygirl

Ooohhh lalaaa ghaa raha hai dil.
Lovely awsome os
y is it ur last os plz.dont.do this to us
yeh dil mange more more from you

thanks! And m not sure if I'll stop, just no ideas lately =)

Originally posted by: eshasrk

Brilliant piece of writing 👍🏼...just loved it

thanks hun!😊

Originally posted by: Amritamalhotra

Awesome OS dear...
The mark of ur passion...
Loved to see Arjun surrendering..
Loved to see them in love..
Loved seeing Arjun to open up...
Awesome. .
Why have u said its ur last OS??
Hope tum mazaak kar rahi hi...right??

thanks soo much for liking it!

Awesome...very emotional and romantic OS...

Haha toh mein english teacher band gayi...kya promotion hain 🤣

Now not fair AT ALL...!!!
Just minutes back you made me laugh and now you made me cry and in seconds giving it a happy and perfect ending you made me smile ???!!!
What will my parents think ?? That their daughter has gone crazy ??!!
Well this was really really good by far my favourite OS...!!
(Well m waiting for the next one ...to chage that as my favourite !!! hahah )
Each and every word written by you had emotons...!! really...!!!
Just loved the way Arjun expressed and gestured his love and for her...
the way he confessed and showed his desperate desire for her to stay bck n live the rest of his life with her was really awesome...!!!!
Loved it very much...
PLEASE write another one soon,..will be waiting haan...!!!!!
😊

Originally posted by: likithakmh

res/unres

finally maine unres kar diya!😳

yaar take it frm me..u have a way with words! how many times do i have to tell u ki u r JUST AWESOME👏👏👏

seriously ! man i wish i could write like u!😳😳😳

and W*F ! u said last os?😡😡 hello madm maine kasam kaya tha ki main kisi ka murder nahin karoongi..marne ka iraada hain kya?😳😡(🤣🤣)

i just loved this arakshi❤️

and arjun wanted her to be the mother of his children..aww that line took my heart away!❤️

its soo beautiful! the title itself it soo meaning ful yaar! full marks fr this updt! plus again the title was SUPERB!

u r FANTASTIC,FANTABULOUS saku! hats off!👏

Originally posted by: SAKSHI..

Now not fair AT ALL...!!!
Just minutes back you made me laugh and now you made me cry and in seconds giving it a happy and perfect ending you made me smile ???!!!
What will my parents think ?? That their daughter has gone crazy ??!!
Well this was really really good by far my favourite OS...!!
(Well m waiting for the next one ...to chage that as my favourite !!! hahah )
Each and every word written by you had emotons...!! really...!!!
Just loved the way Arjun expressed and gestured his love and for her...
the way he confessed and showed his desperate desire for her to stay bck n live the rest of his life with her was really awesome...!!!!
Loved it very much...
PLEASE write another one soon,..will be waiting haan...!!!!!
😊