ArAkshi OS: We're not broken just bent

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Sakshi

@Sakuu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sunshine_94
amazing os,.,.,.,.
it was beautiful

thanks for writing such luvly os on sunday

thanks for liking it!😳

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likitha

@Arakshi_Lover

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

res/unres

finally maine unres kar diya!😳

yaar take it frm me..u have a way with words! how many times do i have to tell u ki u r JUST AWESOME👏👏👏

seriously ! man i wish i could write like u!😳😳😳

and W*F ! u said last os?😡😡 hello madm maine kasam kaya tha ki main kisi ka murder nahin karoongi..marne ka iraada hain kya?😳😡(🤣🤣)

i just loved this arakshi❤️

and arjun wanted her to be the mother of his children..aww that line took my heart away!❤️

its soo beautiful! the title itself it soo meaning ful yaar! full marks fr this updt! plus again the title was SUPERB!

u r FANTASTIC,FANTABULOUS saku! hats off!👏

Edited by likithakmh - 12 years ago

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bollywoodfan16

@bollywoodfan16

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Res/Unres

This was so beautiful and emotional too.. I loved how Sakshi made Arjun realize her importance. Every girl has right to try to fix their relation and if it does not work then she has right to walk out too..

But I am so glad Arjun realized her importance and did not let her go..

the paragraph " Main tumhare saath apni ki zindagi...lekin i need you to survive" ...wow..wow..I m short of words..I loved these lines..I wish Arjun says something like that to Sakshi in show too..

Every single of Arjun dialogues were so beautiful...kiss kiss ki tareef karo..I loved it loved it loved it ...

Sakshi this will be my most favorite OS from you...Keep writing..You are amazing writer and I dont want to miss reading from you...

About Raesha OS. I will try to write today and will pm u...

Thanks so much dear for wonderful OS👏

Edited by shaleenrocks - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

beautiful os
lovely
very well written
awesome title

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bollywoodfan16

@bollywoodfan16

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

unres my comment on pg 3

Edited by shaleenrocks - 12 years ago

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peppygirl

@peppygirl

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Ooohhh lalaaa ghaa raha hai dil.
Lovely awsome os
y is it ur last os plz.dont.do this to us
yeh dil mange more more from you

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Esha Singh

@eshasrk

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Brilliant piece of writing 👍🏼...just loved it

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏

Awesome Awesome Awesome Awesome OS...

Why this is going to be your OS???No no no plz don't stop writing...

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Amrita Malhotra

@Amritamalhotra

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Awesome OS dear...
The mark of ur passion...
Loved to see Arjun surrendering..
Loved to see them in love..
Loved seeing Arjun to open up...
Awesome. .
Why have u said its ur last OS??
Hope tum mazaak kar rahi hi...right??