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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Live-life
YAAAYY!!!
aN EARLY UPDATE!!!!! 😃
Awesome!!!!

Well the update was as usual amazinly fantabulous!!!
I have no words to describe it!! It was high on emotion and feelings!
Specially Arjun's feelings description was just 👏👏
It's really amazing how five minutes ago he was this other man who actaully felt and
now he is the ACP Arjun Suryakant rawte! And smiling? at Riya?
GAME ON.
Although it was only two words but it gave me a lot of hint of what's happening in the future

And what to Say about Rathore, Shree, and chotu. I can only say that they feel
betrayed and they think they won't be able to trust anyone so easily again! 😕

If only the whole truth was revealed. I am sure Riya didn't do this on purpose.
And I have a feeling that she didn't have a choice.
It's all in one word. You can call it anything
Fate.
Destiny.
Kismat.

Loved the update😃

Update the next part soon!!!! Will be waiting!!!
Until later sis!!! 😆

Wow. As always, your comment was so insightful my dear. Kudos to my sis😃

I think you rightly summed it up when you said:

"It's all in one word. You can call it anything Fate. Destiny. Kismat."

Whether it was in Riya's hands to behave that way, remains for you readers to be seen. Next chapter will clarify some, if not all of your doubts.

And I am glad that you liked the Arjun part. I thought that it'd be fitting for him to behave in a cold, calculative way...so😃

And with regard to how I am going to proceed with this story- as our hero Arjun said- "GAME ON".😉

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: beenish248
I Was shocked when i recive pm 😲
I was eagerly waiting for this face off man though i am still Waiting for other parts , u know what u left me speechless GREAT wORK 👏
ETF Team felt BETRYED by riya , well its not going to easy for Riya to gain their trust this easily , and arjun i can't even guess What is waiting for riya i am pitty riya , well Some One SAid Time Heel ALl Wounds so may b in time their wounds will b Heald by riya it self ..
waiting update soon plzz ..

Thanks a lot for the prompt comment, dear.

Aww...as always blushing at your compliments😳

Trust, as you pointed out is now a major issue for our couple. Whether they'll be able to resolve it themselves, or whether time will weave its magic remains to be seen!!!

Next chapter today😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Anushass
awesome update dear... feelings are portraied so well... everyone have the same que (including redaers) that y riya did all that...etf boys are supporting each other... well written n waiting for next update

Thanks a lot for the comment, Anusha!

Yes...questions, questions, questions. This is what I've been doing throughout this story- leaving you guys in suspense!

Both for the readers and characters😆

This author will answer some of these questions in the next chapter😉

Stay tuned!!!

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playagame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

wow what a update??
superb dear...
i must say u r an amazing writer..
beautifully written..
eagerly waiting for next part..
continue soon..

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abjeya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

okay. this was a surprise. liked the way you described arjun's change from a lover to an officer and riya's fear and choree and rathore's feelings. but I am still going to side with riya and hope that they will find out the truth soon. hey I heard this song khwaishein from the movie heroine and I thought that it would be perfect to describe riya's feelings. so if it is a good idea then you can use it in this ff. do update soon.

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: shah10
Superb update
Love it
Loved everyone's pov

Thanks a lot, jii! I am glad that you liked everyone's perspective!😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: madmadona
amazing update
arjun sam choree's reaction was worth watching
all of them feel betrayed
& arjun as predator omg
what are they going to do with riya???
really feel bad for her poor girl
cont soon

Thanks, Madona!

Glad you liked everyone's reactions😊

Yes, betrayal is the dominant feeling of the male ETF officers right now. How they chose to deal with it will be seen soon:)

But trust me- Riya is in a bad spot

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Kaval05
aaw! you can't leave the part at this point I am so excited to know what will happen next. but I am sad for Riya the sad part is that while the ETF team will be together there is a chance that Riya will be alone. Hope to read more awesome updates very soon

Thanks a lot, Kaval!

Sorry for the cliffhanger, but I thought that it'd be nicer to post a chapter a day earlier!

The next two parts today😊

Will Riya be accepted or will she be alone? Find out the answer in today's update😉

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Wowww Awwsssmmm...
Brillantly written
can't wait to read more
cont sooon plzzz

Thanks a ton for commenting, Nikita.

You don't have to wait more- just seven hours more for the updates😃

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Suryatapa sengupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Congratulation for new thread. Another fantastic update Love it Arjun has faced many things in his life some are good and some are bad. But the feeling he feeling nothing compare to that. Love shree's pov. Beautifully writen. Thanks for the pm continue soon Sorry for late comment . Actually busy with my exams.