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devildiva21

@devildiva21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

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firstly sorry for editing it so late...!!!

superb updates yar...!!! i loved the surprise...1!!😉

mindblowing yar..!!!phir se dhamkedar updates..!!!👏⭐️am loving these dhamakas..!!!

finally the much anticipated updates are here...!!! thank god i read them together.. warna mera kya hota...!!!😲 already am in shock reading these..!!!😆

arjun's feelings pov emotion so beautifully written and described,,...!!!👏⭐️

and that predator and prey wali line gosh... that was way too awesome...!!!!

so gone is the lover arjun.. who was happy seeing her alive..

now its the betrayed arjun.. who felt cheated and heartbroken...!!! ab kya haal karega wo riya ka..!!!😲 soach soach ke am having goosebumps...!!!

shree ka reaction..!!!😲 😲 am too shocked.. he actually hit her😲 gosh he is way too angry...

and seeing the boys reactions i don't think... it will be easy for riya in anyway...!!!

glad sameer and chottu stopped shree from showing further anger...!!!

chottu.. i think he will be the first to forgive her...!!!ofcourse after venting out his anger first...!!!

the way he looked at riya after shree hit her.. am sure he has started to melt a bit...!! but is equally hurt...!!!

sameer .. i have no words for him... poor guy can't even show his pain infront of everyone...1! he is the chief and the first and foremost duty of his is to console and support his team...!!!

he is being strong for his team from outside but from inside he is broken.. hope he is able to vent out his pain instead of burying it deep inside him somewhere...!!!

so now the real stories begin...!!!! will she be back in ETF????

moreover she has to manaofy her friends...!!!! which by the reactions of everyone will not be so easy...!!! she has got loads of work on her sleeves now...!!!! looks like they are gonna make her work way too difficult..!!

feeling bad for everyone...!!!! everyone are in pain and are hurt...!!!

P.S. eagerly waiting for the next part...!!!😳

P.P.S. continue real soon...!!😳

Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago

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abhya/akanksha

@Aks13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

For the new thread dr...

Mind-boggling updates dr...!!!

All their POV's r mind blowing n as always beautifully written...!!!

Wow Arjun got a shock of his life whn he saw Riya in the ETF office but as always tried to hide it in his own style... I guess...!!!

I think if Arjun had a slightest clue that he will meet Riya again n that too in ETF thn he will not go back into his shell... Hm... now it's already too late... Praying for Riya's well-being...!!!

I m happy that he didn't tore her apart at the vry moment...!!!

Loved the way he analysed all their facial expressions.

Poor Riya... Sadu made her hell nervous through his tough looks n unusual smile.

Game on... Wht do he mean by that????? Wht is he going to do with her????

Wht the!!!!! Rathod taunted her whereas Shree gone a step ahead of his chief n slapped her. I know thy all r hell angry with her n felt betrayed but they r also responsible ETF officers n need to understand that if commissioner himself supported her thn there had been some big reason behind it...

The song is beautiful n apt for the situation...!!!

What happened to Riya in the past that made her different frm other girls????? Is her past also related to Sik????

Now who is going to solve this mistery????? Our ACP or somebody else????

Eagerly waiting for the update...!!!!

Thanks for the pm dr.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 11 years ago

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Aabish_02

@Aabish_02

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Api Congrats for the new thread
and thanks for the surprise update
That was the most awaited part
and you have portryed every emotion very beautifully
It was amazing mindblowing part
arjun feeings were awesome
he smiled and predator near to its prey this part was my favourite
poor riya...she was so scared
rathore shree and chottu feeling after seeing riya infront of them were very well written and mindblowing
rathore controlled his feelings just for the sake of his boys
No doubt...he is very supportive and a great cheif of etf
shree and chottu part was also awesome
They all felt betryed
love this update
thanks for the pm
update soon
I m waiting for next part api

Edited by Aabish_02 - 12 years ago

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Congo sis

for the new thread!!!😃

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Res

My like button not working but PM me

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OK stop glaring at me... i know i'm late by more than one month😲 well you are responsible for that one after other you gave updates which left me speechless and numb... so finally today i decided to write down comments for this shapter and then type... I dnt know how much justice i can do but i will try my best...

Gosh Girl what have you done... the way you portrayed Arjun's thoughts emotions WOW!!!! The way he was scrutinising her even made me hell nervous and that smile at the end God i'm dead... well No, more shocks on the way right and i know you won't let us die that easily...* i can see evil smile of ur's*😡

So he is gonna make her pay for all those she put them through... put HIM through...So it is no more Arjun but ACP Arjun Rawte vs Riya Mukerjee... i feel for her

Shree's POV about what three of them Rathore, Shree and Chotu went through was well written... Shree even in his grief could understand what his mentor/boss and his friend is going through... all coz of one lady!!!! his PoV show's how much influence Riya had on these people's life just in a matter of 3 months... Well i always thought in show they will show something similar atleast 1% of what u wrote but they disappointed me high time😡 Thanks for writing about it...

So finally Riya is back to ETF...hell girl you are not gonna get out from there easily... You have so much to answer for hurting them beyond repair... Shree Chotu and Rathore's reactio on seeing her...hmmm nothing more to say!!!!

Riya's POV on Arjun and her feelings for him or what she felt on his mere presence well i dnt have words to describe how i felt after reading that... Take a bow Girl!!! but but only one question i want to ask her " THEN WHY THE HELL YOU DID THIS TO HIM?????"

He was slowly coming out of his shell or estrangement but u ruined it RIYA!!!!!

One thing i would disagree Arjun wouldnt kill her just like that... he will make sure she pay for the emotional turmoil they went through!!!

Chotu he is the one who havent shown what he felt hearing the news or truth about his best buddy, atleast Rathore showed his anger pain... Chotu was silent through out the whole revelation... he reacted way more mature than others when they saw Riya,,,,

Shree he slapped her well she deserves it... his outburst is fully justified... Thank God Rathore and Chotu stopped him otherwise it would have been him who killed Riya not Arjun...

Even Chotu felt cheated and disgusted seeing Riya... the way Rathore mocked while introducing Riya clearly shows how hurt he is...they are...

Anitha Shukla wow that lady is one powerful female... even Cohelo cnt manage his team but she did it smoothly...

So finally ETF team get to know about some of the facts about their own department... NIB cool...Shocking revelations for team!!!!

the way Sam- Shree- Chotu was worried for Arjun and Arjun realising whatever happens his team is with him was such a nice moment...😊 he could count them on any situation...

Riya she couldnot deny or avoid effect Arjun have on her whatever the situation maybe... Arjun he also had undivided attention towards his lady love...

Arjun's reaction on knowing she is not his and Rathore's student rather someone else is her boss...lol

Riya she acted really well, played with their feelings and emotions... wow lady well done👏🤢😡

Arjun's outburst on knowing Riya's real identity... the way he burst out was fully justifiable... well how more decite they will take... that too from a person they trusted with their life soul...

Riya's relpy to Arjun's outburst... she know how much she hurt them... hurt HIM...

One for shock to Arjun... it was all related to him his life... Arjun and Sikki!!!! every damn thing had to do with his life and he didnt know he was kept in dark!!! haww

WHY HIM... WHY HIM ALWAYS????!!!!

Continue Soon...

i'm sorry if i disappointed you with my comments...

I Did It!!!!! Finally i posted my comments...Yipee🥳

Edited by Leki - 11 years ago

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: shah10
Congrats

Originally posted by: unishaz
congrats for new thread..

Originally posted by: Live-life
Congo sis
for the new thread!!!😃

Originally posted by: madmadona
congrats for 2nd thread

Thanks a lot, guys😊

@ Megha, Sarita, Ri, Devildiva, Vampu, Aks, Warda, madmadona, Live-life, Leki:

Abb sab UNRES kar lijiye:)

Edited by -Amri- - 12 years ago

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aaditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

great ff...👏
loved it...😃
continue soon and plz add me to ur pm list...😊

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nakshatra92

@nakshatra92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

congrats for the new thread 😊

mind blowing chapter...

poor riya , going to get crushed by ETF boys...

arjun like a predator waiting for his prey...

shree, chotu and sam's reaction on meeting her was portrayed beautifully...

update soon

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: aadi720
great ff...👏
loved it...😃
continue soon and plz add me to ur pm list...😊

Thanks a lot, dear! New reader, YAYY!

Sending you a bud request, please accept for PMs😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: nakshatra92
congrats for the new thread 😊
mind blowing chapter...

poor riya , going to get crushed by ETF boys...

arjun like a predator waiting for his prey...

shree, chotu and sam's reaction on meeting her was portrayed beautifully...

update soon

Nakshu, i think you are the first one to comment on this chapter😊

Yes, Riya is going to get it from her friends Thanks a lot for liking this chapter!!!

Update tom:)