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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

10minutes... me waiting vl surely unres tonite

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: -Amri-

It's okay, Megha😊 And love story toh pehle se hi hai😉 But after this meeting, everything will be in full swing😊

okzz vaise me also trying just like you, riya and vampu to write a mystry story on ariya but i like this ff and i wish this story makes atleast 10 threads

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: playagame
wow what a update??
superb dear...
i must say u r an amazing writer..
beautifully written..
eagerly waiting for next part..
continue soon..

Thanks a lot, dear.

The next part is coming in ten minutes, so stay tuned!!!

BTW are you a new reader?😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: abjeya
okay. this was a surprise. liked the way you described arjun's change from a lover to an officer and riya's fear and choree and rathore's feelings. but I am still going to side with riya and hope that they will find out the truth soon. hey I heard this song khwaishein from the movie heroine and I thought that it would be perfect to describe riya's feelings. so if it is a good idea then you can use it in this ff. do update soon.

Abjeya, I can't tell you what a beautiful suggestion you gave me. It was very inspiring. Check out the next chapter, it has something special for you.😛😉

Thanks so much for commenting!

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: jia03
Awesome update👏👏👏
congrats for the new thread...
thanks for the pm😊

Thanks a Jia:) Nice to see you here.

And welcome for the PM😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg
Congratulation for new thread. Another fantastic update Love it Arjun has faced many things in his life some are good and some are bad. But the feeling he feeling nothing compare to that. Love shree's pov. Beautifully writen. Thanks for the pm continue soon Sorry for late comment . Actually busy with my exams.

Yeeks! Nice to see your comment! Waise, main aapka naam jaan sakti hoon if you don't mind?😊

Thanks a lot for your response- my ego is getting bigger and bigger with each word😆 And it's okay...exams are more important! All the best, dear. Hope you do well😊

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IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Leki
10minutes... me waiting vl surely unres tonite

Awesome😊

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

okzz vaise me also trying just like you, riya and vampu to write a mystry story on ariya but i like this ff and i wish this story makes atleast 10 threads

Wow, Megha, that's amazing! Please write down the story nah?

And 10 threads? I can't even dream of it, but thanks dear😊

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Amri r u updating part3 tdy????

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beenish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

What the i was not expected slap from shree i was shocked when i read i thought how on the earth shree chould slap her BEST Friend 😲 then i also thought from shree's point of veiw Then i am able understand shree's point of view when we TRUST Someone blindly and they betryd us how its feels 😭

MINDBELOWING update dear loved it

waiting for next part can't wait now ..

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srividhya68

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

CONGRATULATIONS FOR 3RD THREAD👍🏼👍🏼

I LOVED EACH AND EVERY ONE'S REACTION
THEIR REACTIONS WERE PROTRAYED BEAUTIFULLY
HANDS OFF TO U FOR THAT👏👏👏👏👏👏

ALL FOUR HAVE THE RIGHTS TO FEEL BETRAYED...EVEN THOUGH HER DECISION TO HIDE WAS PURE... BUT EVERYONE WILL FEEL THE SAME AS THEM WHEN THEY GET TO KNOW THAT THE PERSON WHO THEY LOVED SO MUCH HAS LIED TO THEM...

WE MIGHT FEEL BETRATED FOR SMALL THINGS ITSELF...BUT THIS IS NOT THE SMALL THING...IT WAS MATTER OF LIFE TO SOMEONE(U-KNOW-WHO)

THEY FOUR MUST FORGIVE HER EASILY...SHE MUST AGAIN START FROM THE START TO GAIN THEIR TRUST AND ESPECIALLY THEIR LOVE...ITS JUST MY POINT OF VIEW

I'M EAGRELY WAITING TO SEE HOW THE STORY PROGRESS FURTHER...

P.S: I THINK I'M GOING TO BECOME TIRED ALWAYS SAYING THAT U R A AWESOME WRITER...
BUT U R REALLY A FANTABULOUS WRITER