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Anjali

@AnjuRish

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

i am really sacred how arjun is gonna react

is he gonna hurt her

will they let their ego win in their relationship

OMG cant wait for the next part

thanks for the lovely surprise ...u made my day ...finally something interesting i read before sleeping

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

YAAAYY!!!

aN EARLY UPDATE!!!!! 😃

Awesome!!!!

Well the update was as usual amazinly fantabulous!!!

I have no words to describe it!! It was high on emotion and feelings!

Specially Arjun's feelings description was just 👏👏

It's really amazing how five minutes ago he was this other man who actaully felt and

now he is the ACP Arjun Suryakant rawte! And smiling? at Riya?

GAME ON.

Although it was only two words but it gave me a lot of hint of what's happening in the future

And what to Say about Rathore, Shree, and chotu. I can only say that they feel

betrayed and they think they won't be able to trust anyone so easily again! 😕

If only the whole truth was revealed. I am sure Riya didn't do this on purpose.

And I have a feeling that she didn't have a choice.

It's all in one word. You can call it anything

Fate.

Destiny.

Kismat.

Loved the update😃

Update the next part soon!!!! Will be waiting!!!

Until later sis!!! 😆

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beenish

@beenish248

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

I Was shocked when i recive pm 😲

I was eagerly waiting for this face off man though i am still Waiting for other parts , u know what u left me speechless GREAT wORK 👏

ETF Team felt BETRYED by riya , well its not going to easy for Riya to gain their trust this easily , and arjun i can't even guess What is waiting for riya i am pitty riya , well Some One SAid Time Heel ALl Wounds so may b in time their wounds will b Heald by riya it self ..

waiting update soon plzz ..

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Anushass

@Anushass

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

awesome update dear... feelings are portraied so well... everyone have the same que (including redaers) that y riya did all that...etf boys are supporting each other... well written n waiting for next update

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Superb update
Love it
Loved everyone's pov

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

amazing update
arjun sam choree's reaction was worth watching
all of them feel betrayed
& arjun as predator omg
what are they going to do with riya???
really feel bad for her poor girl
cont soon

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Endless_sky

@Endless_sky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

aaw! you can't leave the part at this point I am so excited to know what will happen next. but I am sad for Riya the sad part is that while the ETF team will be together there is a chance that Riya will be alone. Hope to read more awesome updates very soon

Edited by Kaval05 - 11 years ago

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wowww Awwsssmmm...
Brillantly written
can't wait to read more
cont sooon plzzz

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
i am really sacred how arjun is gonna react
is he gonna hurt her
will they let their ego win in their relationship
OMG cant wait for the next part
thanks for the lovely surprise ...u made my day ...finally something interesting i read before sleeping

Thanks a lot for commenting, Anju.

You have asked some very important questions, and I promise that they'll be dealt with in the upcoming chapters.

And thanks for the lovely compliment, dear.

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IntrovertedDame

@IntrovertedDame

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Aabish_02
Api Congrats for the new thread
and thanks for the surprise update
That was the most awaited part
and you have portryed every emotion very beautifully
It was amazing mindblowing part
arjun feeings were awesome
he smiled and predator near to its prey this part was my favourite
poor riya...she was so scared
rathore shree and chottu feeling after seeing riya infront of them were very well written and mindblowing
rathore controlled his feelings just for the sake of his boys
No doubt...he is very supportive and a great cheif of etf
shree and chottu part was also awesome
They all felt betryed
love this update
thanks for the pm
update soon
I m waiting for next part api