|| SS :His Last WINTER || Part 13, Page 80 - Page 19

Sorry for late...

Originally posted by: srividhya68

Awesome update
love it
continue soon

Originally posted by: unishaz

nice update vampu.. Loved it.. Thanks for pm..

Originally posted by: Shanafr

Fab awesome amez update
Loveit
Cont soon
N thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Aabish_02

Awesome update
love it
continue soon
thanks for pm

thanks for comment!🤗

Originally posted by: nakshatra92

nice part...

sam and arjun badly framed... how will they clear this mess??

boss😡

more than that riya ... why is she being targetted...

update soon

they will together clear all mess 😳
thanks for liking it!

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

all mystery mystery all around

aur ulj gaye dake case ke super duper interesting

Lol..thanks anju

Originally posted by: khemanisarita

wow
amazing update
love it

thanks sarita

Originally posted by: rizwanaa

awesome update
the fb was nice
superb part👍🏼
thanks for pm
cont soon

thanks riz!

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

Lovd it Vampy...loving d dose of Suspense nd thrill...Sam In Detention??? Lyk button not working!! Sorry! Thanxx 4 pm...Continue Soonzz!

I am glad u liked the suspence!
Thank you shanaya!

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

Nice Vamppu

Continue soon😊

thanks gold

Originally posted by: Mishti_k5

It is wonderful,amazing ,jhikass ,dassu update

Confusion per confusion hai boss

Boss said who is Sam what the

Vampu Thanx. 4 pm me

Update soon

Precap is fascinating

i am glad you liked it mish!
Thanks for comment

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Fantastic update Story is getting interesting What is aisha upto? Thanks for pm Conti soon

thanks dear for liking!

Originally posted by: kunchu

another awesome part
mystery still full on
very very good VQ
I was always looking out for this update
great job
jaldi jaldi update karo pls...

thank you di!
I am glad you are liking the mystery..
Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">vampu di..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">this story is just getting more n more interesting with each update!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">oh poor sam...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">he was framed badly!!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">and i guess its the boss..!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">how could he not recognise him!!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">definitely something is fishy...and m happy that even charlie thinks so!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">messed up relations...messed up conditions!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">this story is just...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">awsome...!!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">whoa!! bold girl... sam in exchange of information!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">good going girl!!</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">tahliya..she is just too much worried about ria..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">aww..arjun asked about her after gaining concious</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">update soon!!..</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#ff0000">loved it!!</font>

thanks ishita
i am glad you liked all the suspence and all the conditions..

Originally posted by: Shivi1997

Sam ke boss ko main kacha chaba jaungi
ka**** saala
aisha ab kya karne wali hai
thnx god ariya r recovering
i think arjun love riya
bt he is nt aware of it
omg sam is badly framed bt y?
Lets c wat vl happen nxt
update soon

uff itna gussa! Keep calm ..keep calm balike!
Har ek chiz ki koi na koi wajah hoti hai! So wait for that please. I am glad you liked this..

Originally posted by: sonycs001

Im really really angry on you

Why did u stop the stry

Man jithna patha chal raha hain vuthna hi vulaj raha hain

Unable to say if the stry is mvng forward or not

Plz update soon n thanks for pm next time dont stop in middle not warning but pleading

oh! Angry??sorry dear but i love making ppl confuse! Sorry
i will clear all the mess! Tab tak just hook up with this!

Originally posted by: invisible2018

sam's confusion and later realization of the truth of being framed by his most trusted boss was expressed briliantly...👏👏

arjun is gradually realizing his love for riya...
and lastly comes ayesha... very appropriate role for a character like her... strong headed and logical yet sensitive and emotional...loved her in this update...

continue soon...
thanks for the pm...

your comment on every aspect of the update was really appreciative.
I am glad , you liked the character of Aisha as shown in this story.
Thanks for encouraging me dear

Originally posted by: Megha32

Fantastic update
sam remembering his and ayesha's encounters
sam is really very cleverly framed
ahaan ayesha is really beauty with brains
pehle info ke badle condition arjun se milne ki phir sam ko chudvane ki
riya finally out of danger taaliya talking to her
arjun conscious n the very first thing he did was to know about riya lagta hai use bhi riya se ishq wala love ho gaya
that boss is very cunning
first he used sam for his work n now is saying that he doesn't know him
precap is interesting riya not willing to talk to arjun
was an amazing update
continue soon

thanks for the chewweet comment.
Well arjun ko kya ho raha hai ye pata chal jayega..lol

Originally posted by: -Carrie-

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Poor Sam and Aisha😭😭😭</font>

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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Sam's loneliness in detention, his worry for Aisha and Shaan, his beautiful flashback of SHaan's birth and finally the betrayal by the one man who could have saved him was very beautifully depicted.</font>

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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Aisha's frantic worry for Arjun's safety and Sam's detention was very well written.One could feel the pain and confusion of these two so well.</font>

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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">But then both of them pull up their sleeves and give tit for tat.Brilliant!🥳Loved the spunk!👍🏼</font>

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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">For me Stars of this episode!⭐️👏</font>

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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">My hope is with this Charlie guy.He seems really sensible and I hope will see through Sam and Arjun's supposed crime.</font>

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<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Very intriguing and very well written👏</font>

i am too feeling sad for the duo! But you are right! They are fighters and they will fight for everything that would come in their way!
Well charli will only believe on proof and evidences.
And how will he get the evidences, you will know soon.

Thank you zuby for the appreciation 🤗

unres my comment pg-28