|| SS :His Last WINTER || Part 13, Page 80

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Hello peeps😉

I am again back to irritate you with!😉 what???

You know🤔
Mystery🤢😆
and thrill.
Hope so!

But one thing do not expect anything in the story. You know I am ' unpredictable '.🤢. If i hurt anyone then please forgive me. But i could not promise any happy ending😒. So read in your own risk😃.

I don't konw if it will finish in this page or what! But still writing!


Thank you! 😳



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Part 1~page 1 (scroll down)
Part 2 ~ page 9

Part 3~page 16

Part 4~page 25

Part 5~page 31

Part 6~Page 37

Part 7~Page 44

Part 8~Page 52

Part 9~Page 56

Chapter 10 ~ Page 66

Chapter 11 A ~ Page 73

Chapter 11 B ~ Page 74

Chapter 12 ~ Page 77

Chapter 13 ~ Page 80



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FBI head quarters



Riya already have cracked the code and she could not believe herself about the code.

She rushed towards the cabin of her boss where he was talking with someone about certain man who is suspected to be a spy.


After seeing the worried face of riya the , he boss hold the phone and asked, " Yes"??


' Its really important sir '!


What??

Sir its BH??

What the f**k!! How it could be him.

No sir , the codes are completely right.

No this could be possible.

Yes sir, this could be. And before he could do any damage we have to stop him.

'' You take your leave, we will manage this ''.

Her boss assured her, and as she herself was in a problem she did not dig the matter and left for room, before peeping inside Taliya's cabin. And murmered a sorry.


In her home !
after 2 hours



She pressed the door bell but none opened it. So she herself unlocked it. And entered inside. He was no where to found.


She called him and he asked to meet him in the same park near '' Big Trend'' Mall.


She was serious this time. She have to talk with him. She could not let him go like this. She needs him. She loves him. It was just that she never made him realized about her feeling for him. But now he will do, the every possible way to hold him. But she too know that how unpredictable he could be.

She locked the door and comes out! The soft snow crystals attracted her attention and she thought she have to rush.




She parked the car in front of the park and entered inside.

He was there standing , and rubbing his hands,. She reached for him is a slow steady steps, and cleared her mind wht actually he wanted to say.

Arjun too was confused. How would he confess.

She is now very close to him. She holds his hand, and started spaeking, " Arjun, before you could say any thing i wanted to say something to you!!"

riya..


No arjun please let me speak.
I know how our relation have build up. You could say there was nothing in between us. It was all my fault, i never gave you the time which you need. But today i want to tell you that, " I love you". And the whole life i want you with me. Every morning i want to cuddle in your and there will be n pillows in between us in night.


Arjun , will you marry me??

She bent down on her knees and showed him a ring which she have selected for him.

" Will you give me another chance ".

He never spoke a word. He was jsut amazed by her. This is also a shock for him. Today again his life took around 360 turn.

She was expecting him to collecting her in his arms and tigtened her with his embrace.

He don't know what will he do. He just bent a little down, and holds her hand. Dragged her up, and embraced her in a tight hug.

Her happiness knows no boundary and she too tightened her grip around him.

But he patted her back and said,


Riya..


I


am


sorry.



And loosened the grip around her.


" What do you mean Arjun!! Why?? There is no fault of yours!!


Riya : I love you Arjun.


Arjun : Riya, there was never love for you in my heart, he said in a calm voice.


Riya was so excited that, when she heard this her body went numb. Her hands fell from his shoulders and she stood there like a statue.

Arjun made her more close to him, and cupped her face. He could not match her tear brimming eyes , with his guilty ones.

Arjun : riya, Like you I too don't know where our relation is going. We are not for each other riya.. Never ever..


There was no movement in her body by hearing this . She stood there as if turned into an ice cube.

He don't want be in realtion with her, that was pain ful, but the thing that hurt her more was, he have never loved her.

Arjun : Please riya.. Forgive me. I am very sorry.

He pecked her forehead for one last time before leaving!!


She could not let him go!! NO!! Her inner voice broke and she holds his hand while he turned his head.

Riya hugged him from back, and tightened her grip around his chest. While his hands were free, he have no strength left emotionally to hold her again.

Arjun : Riya please..

Riya : please don't leave me Arjun!!

Arjun : riya let me go!

She was so stubborn, he knew that, so he forcefully parted from her and rushed out of the park.


Riya slumped down on the snow covered, grassy land lifelessly. To whom she will question? She found the only fault was her. She was late this time. And the pain of being dumped by the person who claimed to be in love with her, broke her into pieces. She don't know if she could collect herself or not.


She leaned on the metal bench inside the park, while the sky was getting more purple indicating the end of the day..


Her phone buzzed , and she absent mindedly clicked the answer key. Taliya again disturbed her. She started an official talk while riya showed no interest in it. Taliya asked in concern.

Riya only answered : he have never loved me!!!

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He have never loved me Taliya..she screamed her heart out.
There was no one to hold her or hear her screams. Till now she felt herself the reason of all this.

" I spoiled everything Taliya, every bloody thing".

"Rii, you hold on..please.. Rii don't worry.." : taliya assured her but she was not the condition to be consoled by anyone, she threw her phone never knows where. She have no idea how much time she have spent there..


Somewhere Miles Away



He was busy with her phone while his a little annoyed wife yelling from behind.

"Ashuuu...baba coming" : you take care of Shaan. Only two minutes please.

" Whatever Sam, i want you here right now" : she shouted again.


Sam hunged up the phone and followed the dianing area for by keeping fingers on his ears, while he could clearly read what she saying..oops yelling!!

" Sam again you're doing this" : she shook her head in disbelief.

Sam : come on Aisha, you know how much..

''Work pressure..blah bla blah..: do you really have time for us". Saying this she rushed to the kitched and returned with stacks of paratha.

" Ah, your mom is meherbaan on us today, what say Shaan"!

She glared at both the dad-son and they resumed eating after getting the galre from lady hitler.
They finished their dinner and aisha cleaned the table. She first made Shaan sleep, and comes to the dianing hall.


Sam was waiting for her. When she came, Sam dragged her on the sofa and instantly comes on top of her.

Ashu , i missed you so much these days : he expressed his feelings in front of her, how badly he missed them in these days.

Aisha : aww.. We too missed you Sam.. And Shaan..please don't leave us like this for weeks and weeks..

Sam : yo know Ashu, I am doing this all only for you guys !!

Aisha : hmm!!

Sam : thanks for everything Aisha, for coming into my life, for making it beautiful and more pleasureable. For giving me shaan.

Aisha : its you Sam who gave me life, and who let me enter in your life.. Otherwise.. That day I wouldn't even able to...

Sam : no aisha..remember one thing you are now only Aisha Rathod, forget that all thing what happened before.. Forget about thea Nadiya, who everytime killing you from inside.. It is our new life Aisha..

Aisha : yes sam, i think you are right.. I think I should let go the Nadiya inside me!

Sam knows what kind of trauma she have been through when she was shot that day. She even lost her whole family taht day.. And she also lost him.. He could not remember the name of that person she spoke before getting unconcious in his arms as it was not clear. But he could really understand her state of mind when he found the emotion she held for a person whose name she never took after coming to her sense.

Here the name Nadiya again and again echoed in her mind and she wanted to scream to shut it.

The face that she saw in the *Big Trent * mall again send her to the horrible memory lane.

It was the same voice which she loved to hear everytime from his mouth. She could not pretend to be normal anymore. She was feeling suffocation. She asked Sam that she was going to her usual night walk.


She walked out of the house and sighed . She walked near the small underrowth of the lane .


But she have no idea one eagle eye is searching for her. But She could feel it, and thought that may , it is because he saw him today.

How desperately she wanted to break the door of the elevator when her eyes met with his.

She could never forget those eyes in her life. But her fater thought was she was daydreaming, and she cursed herself for this. And in the ground floor she too thought that it was her illusion. Because picked her son up into her arms was the most important that time for as a mother.

Aisha thought about her past life. And about him. Whatever that was.. '' THAT WAS !! NOT NOW!! THOSE THINGS WHICH HAPPENED BEFORE WAS HER PAST! AND HE WAS TOO!!'' Now there is no place of him in her world.


She concludede it to herself when she suddenly felt someone's grip on her hand, and being dragged towards a tree.


She opened her eyes and found the same haunting eyes which haunted her always.. It left her speechless..

His touch have always this effect on her. But she never acknowledeg this feeling of her. And this time she herself wants to ignore this feeling.

" Finally Nadiya.. Finally.. ": see i am in front of you. By saying this he engulfed her in a very passionate hug. And she trying to resist this but how long she could resist she don't know. Slowly her hands reached upto his back and she could hear his sobs.

" That day, I thought i lost you forever Nadiya.. ". I thought that was end of my life. But now!!!

He could not complete and kept on tightening the girp around her. For a moment she thought she would hold him for ever till the eternity ends.. But a sudden thought in her mind yelled on her and forcefully she pushed him away from her.



Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago
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She was shocked with herself. And he was too. She actually pushed him away from her, and he could not even utter any word after this.

Many thoughts came into in her mind. It was him she always wanted for. It was she always looked for. It was him, to she always waited for in the white four corners of the hospital room.
That one day he will come for her...one day he will embrace her like this ...but now!!! She could not even think about it.. The beautiful family picture which was hanging on their wall falshed infront of her. And she took back steps.

" Nadiya.. Nadiya !! Stop please..".

She never listened to him and turned her head while he said,

" Nadiya, I LOVE YOU !!" and she froze in her track.

I love you nadiya..


She took small steps towards him, and he wanted to hug her.

But the slap was enough for him to stood still.

" Nadiya is dead, suna tumne.. Nadiya mar chuki hai.. Ab mai sirf Aisha hun.. AISHA SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHOD"!!

Arjun knows that she is married to Sam, but her being Aisha was a mere shock for him.


There is many thing hidden for him ahead. He thought!!

Aisha could not hold anymore and she runned towards her home, while arjun was still standing there..


He was here for any other work and very shockingly he discovered her here. He could not hold anymore, and dragged her with him and also showed the most vulnerable side of himself.


And he never did this in the purpose of getting her back in his life. But he just wanted to express what his herat screamed everytime she was around him!! He knows he could not spoil her life by behaving like this. Oh hell, she is the mother of a son and now she is not his.

But still his wanted to tell this to her, because those words , he always wanted to express but left unspoken and he lost her five years back..

Then Aisha the name again made him confuse. Why she told that she is Aisha. And how the hell he forget the most important part, sam.

The lady he still loves is now his best friends wife. He again cursed himself for doing this. He too don't want spoil his best friends life..

His phone again disturbed him.

What the caller spoke was the earth shattering news for him. A man could not handle so much mental shocks in a day.

This day he broke the heart of the person with whom he was comitted..

This day he got his lady love back , to whom he assumed to be dead...

This day he discovered that his love of life is now his best friend's wife..

And now ..

He could not hold this anymore..

But life was never fair for him..

For a certain instant he wished if he could break this damn thing which irritates him, but uninterestingly he picked up the phone..


" If Anything will happen to riya, i won't leave you Arjun.. I bet.. I would strangle you.."

oh ShIT. Riya.. He completely forgot about her.. He felt as if his neurons are not working...

Taliya barked from the eithe side of the phone..

And he rushed towards his car..


PRECAP


Riya...riyaaa...riya..
Open your eyes riya..
Please..


ooo


What are you saying Damn it!!!
How Sam could be involved in this..


Ooo


arjun please do something..
Please save him..
Arjun please same Sam..
Samm.. Aisha sreamed.

Ooo

riya slumped on the snow covered field and the area around her was looking red water melon, as the snow soaking the blood..


Ooo


Edited by Vampire-queen - 11 years ago
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That was really
i thought i wold finish this in one go!!
Sorry aapko next time bhi pakana padega..😔

but sorry if i disappointed anyone 😭



And it was all for those who likes my different style of writing 😛

vampy itni aasni se thodi chodti hai 😉

if you only want to write *nice* *awesome* then please only hit the like button. That is enough for me! 😒

As you could see the update was..a little long. So i need comments also a little long 😉


main aise hi nahi chodungi!!
Agar no much response to no next update 😈 ..
So share your view regarding this!!

And stay tuned to know why it is *his last winter!!! *


Thank you

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Yippiee me first 🥳
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Strangely the story left me very breathless😕 You have described the tension & nervousness of the three characters so well👏

Yeh kya locha hai? Ash is Nadiya is Ash! How come Arjun does not know his sweetheart is married to his best friend for five years? Sam knows about Nadiya then he must know about Arjun also na?

What happened to Riya? Oh!Kitna tension wala story hai.Cant wait to know what happened to Ri.Hope Arjun realises Nadiya/Aisha is lost to him forever & he should accept Riya.

Please update soon!

Superbly written👍🏼

P.S: Will u believe I was looking at A winter night pictures on the NET.Snow, warm cottage, fire and all.And here u r with a Winter Story😳

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