story: Mujhko ye zindagi_last part pg 25

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IlaTanwar

@IlaTanwar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

it was nice update so... pranav is a criminal hope arjun get the solid proof...

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princess2507

@princess2507

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Awsome start dr!!!
That pranav is such a 🤬
Poor payal woh us pranav ki vajah se arjun se lad rahi hai!!!
Stupid her
Its true that love makes people blind!!!
Cont soon
Thanx for the pm!!

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neeraja

@life93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

hi pari n payal🤗... awesome part once again👏👏👏... oh god!😲😲 pranav rai is sikander😲😲😲...not agagin payal's life is in grave danger😲😲😲... hope iss baar arjun will save payal from pranav...update soon🤗

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Awwssmm part
loved it
plzzz cont sooon
thnx 4 pm

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Haleemah

@hal96

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Part 3 mujhe abhi chayiye

Awesome update

Continue soon

😊

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ishita

@IshitaRocks015

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

pari...i read 2 parts 2gthr!!

sorry 4 nt commenting earlier...

mera net phir gya tha re!!!😭

its a beautiful concept!!!

loved it...

oh..ye payal to arjun ki sun hi nai rahi...

hopefully she will come 2 now the truth someday!!😭

loved it!1

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pravallika

@prava55663

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

superb you both...

creating so much of suspense...loving it..

Pranav is sikky...din't expect this...

Loved the last thing he said to payal...that he would not think twice when he sikky in front of him...

waiting for next!!

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Nazneen

@naz_2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

awesum strt payal n pari..!! dat pranav is sik 😡 omg !! nd hope payal understands soon abt her mistake marrying pranav..!! poor arjun 😭 cont soon.. 😊

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

helo all peeps (silent) as wel
i m here to tel u sumthing very serious sry if i m rude
bt its very much necesary nw..
we dng pm u al n wat koi pm khol ni dekhta bahut km dekhte h dats fine
if u dnt folow our story so clear us frm Your budy list dat is payal_156 n princess_pari
its a request we knw hw much tym we spend to write it take lot of ours we r students too like u
pari told u on my behalf dat dis story gng to be posted on twiter
i knw may be sm bro doesnt read it bt stil we do tweet
we hv writen d whole story
wat is dis 1st update me 48likes n 2nd me 30 ???
we ask fr sugestion
dere is no response
nw my point if we dnt get response after dis update we discontinue it here itself
Pls make us itself clear here i stop giving my ideas n pari stop writing
there is no use at al no reviews n likes
r we ??
pls buck up
tel us if u dnt want pm it makes both hapy
we dnt curse u bt try to understand
thanku n sry if it hurts u bt it hurts us after geting so low response
we stop our wrk here if we dnt get cments n likes
pari n payal

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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princess_pari

@princess_pari

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

hello readers (silent as well)

first things first. thanks those who liked and commented on our efforts, supporting us...🤗

that means a lot to us...😳

another important thing. already didu made it clear, but even i need to say.

i know many might not have liked this story because there is no lead against bhai here.. (is it so???i never knew a story cant be without one😕) anyways, i personally feel there can be a story which reaches readers heart, because of the emotions, and not lead pair... sorry if offended anyone, but thats what i feel.

i am never biased to any pair, i like all, even shree and his lappy. but dont you think that a writer explores his or her horizon, taking various aspects?! i know i am supported well when i write... but it really hurts when i send pm to about 85 and get 30 response. its not even half of what i send...

if you dont like, dont want a pm, do say that, i will definitely not feel bad. why should i? you are the readers and its your choice. who am i to foorce you to read? but it takes aweful time for me to send so many, 20 each time. all those who have long list in buddy list understand this well.

so buck up, share what you think. it will really help us.

i am not well from past few days but this concept made me forget that and write it. it takes long hours to tune mind, bring out right words and emotions...

i was really disappointed to see the decreasing number of likes and comments...

anyways, didu and i have decided that if the following part do not receive enough response, we are going to stop posting and all know i ll not hesitate. we are posting it on twitter no matter what.

so its up to you all if you want us continue.

if you dont want, i ll have no grudges against you, neither ll didu.

if you dont wanna tell us about the updates, delete us from your buddy list. we ll understand.

sorry if am rude or hurt anyone. i know many wont have time to read...but... we cant help it...

pari and payal

(dangerous color eh!!!! cant help... :P)

Edited by princess_pari - 12 years ago