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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: live

awesome update

looking forward 4 next update👏
n i think that the writing in blue is not arjun's FB it's payal's fb. sry if em wrong

yap... it was a error by my part. i have edited that...
thank u 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Awwsssmmm part
Payal knows everything
Loved Arjun-Payal bonding
plzzz cont sooon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Awesome story line payal and pari
Bhai behen ka changing equations was written superbly!
So his brother in law is Sik...interesting!
nice banner!

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: princess_pari

here goes part 1...

happy reading... 😊
Banner by Didu...😊
Bhavna di thanks for the link😊
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Page 3: Hind Times

'India's most sought Entrepreneur Mr. Pranav Rai is said to be no more bachelor. You read it right gossip lovers. Handsome, dashing, cool Pranav has officially confirmed his marriage with the M.D of Raute Group, miss. Payal Raute, daughter of Mr. Suryakant Raute. It is said that he couple are in relationship from past 3 years and today they are entering the wedlock. This marriage will definitely bring fortune to both the companies. When we spoke to miss Payal, she confirmed the news. Wedding will be taking place at Raute mansion...'

"what the hell?! Arjun threw the paper on the table, making every ETF member turn their head towards him.

"she... she cant do this..."

"Arjun whats wrong?! Kya hai usme aur who cant do what?" ACP sameer rathod asked in confusion.

"Payal. She is getting married. Read this.."

Arjun passed the paper to sameer and ran hand through his hair.

"Arjun..."

"I need to go. I need to stop her. He is not the right guy for her..."

Without listening to anyone, Arjun rushed out of ETF.

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Arjun ran towards his sister's room ignoring words from his father.

He saw his sister sitting all decked up in bridal finery, looking at her henna adored hands.

"Payal..." he called her, signaling others to leave them alone.

"bhaiyya..."

Payal went to him and hugged him tight.

"I thought you would never come..." a tear escaped her eye.

"aapko hi mera kanyadaan karna hai bhaiyya... I don't want him to..."

Her words were cut when her pulled him away from her.

"kyon kar rahi ho ye Payal?"

"kya bhaiyya?"

"ye shaadi. Tumne kaha tha ki you will let me choose a suitable boy for you. Oopar se you did not even tell me. I had to find out this through some paper." His voice raised a notch higher.

Bhaiyya wo... main aapko batane waali thi..."

"kab tumhare aur uske 2 bacche hone ke baad?!"

She flinched at his tone.

"bhai I love him... I want to spend my life..."

"spend your life with a bloody murderer right!!!!"

"bhai you are mistaken. He is not..."

"I know that I am right Payal. He is the one who is suspected to the the alleged sikander who killed YOUR BHABHI... i don't have enough proofs to put him behind bars warna..."

Payal wiped her tears and shouted at Arjun.

"ENOUGH BHAI... BOHUT HOGAYA. Pranav se main pyaar karti hun aur uske khilaaf kuch nahin sunungi. Bhabhi ke maut aapki wajah se hui hai naaki ki Pranav ne unhe maara. Aap bhabhi ke kaatil ho naaki Pranav. Wo bhi mujhse utna hi pyaar karta hai jitna main usse karti hun. Aur hume koi juda nahin kar sakta. Aap bhi nahin. Samjhe aap?"

Her face was completely red after her outburst at Arjun. He stood completely still, letting each word to absorb in his mind. He could not believe that his little sister said those words.

"tumhi wo thi Payal jisne kaha tha ki chahe koi bhi ho jisne roshni ko maara, hum milke saza denge. Aur aaj tumhi..."

"Pranav is my life"

"he is a murderer"

"he is not. Please get out..."

"Payal... listen to me baccha... its about your lif...""

"I said GET OUT mr. Arjun Raute."

Arjun stood numb. Her eyes held fury in them, desperation. Roshni's body drenched in her own blood flashed in his mind. Anger gripped his whole being and his voice turned to steel.

"aaj se mera aur tumhara, koi rishta nahin hai Payal. You are dead to me. Meri pyaari behan Payal aaj mere liye mar chuki hai..."

Arjun spun on his heels and marched out of the room completely ignoring grim expression on his dad's face.

~~~

Payal sat next to Pranav in mandap... he held her hand asked.

"are you ok? I heard your brother came..."

"yeah..."

"he hates me. Don't he?"

"he has just misunderstood you Pranav... and nothing matters more than you to me...

Not even him..." she closed her eyes as tears threatened to fall.

Soon the wedding rituals were done and she was officially Mrs. Payal Pranav Rai and no more her brother's darling.. she went to the Rai mansion, seeing happiness in her father's eyes and missing the person she loved most.

~~~

The wedding had made buzz in the entire media.

Arjun was beyond furious. He felt helpless. He knew his sister had made a great error in judging a person. He had to protect her. But what could he do? She herself chose a wrong person. She had known the entire lengths that he went to trace his wife's murderer what he came to know was just a name Sikander and possible person behind that name, now his sister's husband, mr. Pranav rai. He did not want her suffer. But if this is their fate, he has no choice but to hurt his sister.

He recalled how he had found roshni's body, and the image was replaced by the image of his sister in wedding finery.

"AAARRRGGHHH!!!!!!!" he threw the paper weight to the window and sweeped the table tumbling the contents down. He was feeling helpless, same feeling of losing someone, that he had felt not many months back.


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next part soonish... if we get good response...😃😳



OMG... WONDERFUL!!!
So much emotions and drama in just first chapter.. i was left jsut staring at the ending.
I loved it

I would like to suggest to fix a grammer error though if u dnt mind...
Int he beggining were its written... It is said that --he-- couple .. shouldnt there be a "t" with "he"... so becomes "the"

going to go read second part!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: supreet_dmg


OMG... WONDERFUL!!!
So much emotions and drama in just first chapter.. i was left jsut staring at the ending.
I loved it

I would like to suggest to fix a grammer error though if u dnt mind...
Int he beggining were its written... It is said that --he-- couple .. shouldnt there be a "t" with "he"... so becomes "the"

going to go read second part!

thanks... i was not well so din proof read... ll try to see and edit those 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
oohh... payal got caught?
if she knew what he did then why didnt she tell anyone? they could have helped bring his face out in the world too...
im so srry for late replys... i really dnt get time to come on laptop much with my college going on and recently i havnt been feeling so good...
having hard times recently...
but updates are really good

i would just like to suggest... some grammer errors...
--In-- need to know his real face..".. shouldnt that be "I" need to know his real face?

and

--She-- thoughts broke when she felt a hand on her shoulder. She jerked and saw Pranav. "you --oki--?"

shouldnt that be "her" thoughts broke when she felt a hand on her shoulder. She jerked and saw Pranav."you ok?"

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Posted: 12 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: princess_pari

thanks... i was not well so din proof read... ll try to see and edit those 😊

its ok. Health comes first
Im only suggestion to fix errors because you will post in on twitter and I want everyone who reads it to not notice any errors and itll look perfect
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
I L❤️vd it Pari!
Reswa @Payalia di
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
SORRY
SORRY
SORRY
SORRY
SORRY

MY TWO CUTIE PIES...

apni sis ko maaf kardo...

pls forgivee me for cmmnting late...ok very late...ook very vey late...

pr teeno parts k liye abhi cmmnt karti hu

awsm storyline nd concept payal nd pari

its smthng diff...unique nd worth reading..

i m in love vid this story..

only i feel bad cz i dnt hv a brother...

i wish i had one...

plz continue soon

nd plz dnt stop my pms...

love
Aisha
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: princess_pari

posted... check it [;) ]
happy to see a stalker 😉

unresed the stalker comment 😉😉

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