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Jannat

@Jannat94

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#41

avantika loved the os

awesome

than 4 the pm

do write more..loved ur writing😃😃😃

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sunshine_94

@sunshine_94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

amazing o.s,.,.,.,.

weneva u write u do it so beautifully .,.,.,

luvd evry phase of arjun n sakshis journey,,.,.

whether its egoistic arjun n sakshi

or innerturmoil of arakshi

ya phir the confession,.,.,.,.,.

the stay part was the most beautiful part,.,.,.

thanks for writing

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MsCeylon

@MsCeylon

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#43

This was simply awesome 👏

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

beginning se end tak... my mind could shift from reading this one to another... (HUGS...KISSES...APPLAUSE...MUAHHH)👏Whistles*

sab kuch daal diya...emotions😭, love😉 and romance☺️

excellent blend...arjun getting shot had saakshi coming to his treatment ( of course his soul is hungry for her everything and in every way)... sweet

loved it in every sense...

after so much intense bitterness and mess up this treat was much need for both...fallen in love with this couple all over again

arjun ka love shav wala SYS is so damn mind blasting ...any one would love to get this session of samjhyofing...😳😆

GREAT JOB...

and BIG WALA THANKS FOR PM

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Shanzy

@-Shanzy-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

I have edited my comment on page two 😳

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Mishti Patel

@MistiofMistz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Where were you? Gosh! I never had pain free morning when I wake up. Just love reading your story after going bed with terrible stomach ache. Just love every bit of it.

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844858

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

Wow!
That was so beautiful!
Every line in it...made me believe in love again..
Gave me goosebumps!
Beautifully written

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..sweetchilly..

@..sweetchilly..

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Yeh OS ne toh maar hi dala :p
After a long time got a new OS from you sissy..
It was awesome..
Wonderful..!!
The last line..
Liked Ayesha's words way too much..
Finally both are together after long time..
After long separation..
After many obstacles and sufferings..
Back Home!!
Loved the entire update..
Loved it to the core..<3