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Aditi

@bright_star89

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Wow! loved the update.. a COMPLETE OS👏👏

I loved how you drafted Sakshi's father's story..The Etf getting involved.

It would be inteesting to see something like this on the show as well..

good one. loved it.

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sara201213

@sara201213

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

I loved it !!! I think u wrote it brilliantly XD great job!! Welldone x

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Livania Govender

@sarunarshi72

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

really awesome. I love how u made arakshi so similar to the show and the last part with raesha was so cute 😊

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Seenavas

@Seenavas

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

thanks alottt

is was a such beautiful and emotional one

loved every bit of it

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Firstly a big big bada wala bear hug to you my dear for giving it in 1go.🤗🤗🤗

How i wish to see this in the show as well but that seems an alien thing as of now.😒But yes as Shilpa said who is stopping us imagining them like this.😉

Anyways back to the update,do i really need to say how it was.😃
This was such a beautiful story.Pehle milna phir bichadna & then again milna.😃
& moreover it it so real.Insecurties,Ego are the two feelings which when comes in between 2 ppl creates a distance which leads to end the happy marriage life.But these two got another chance which itself is such a beautiful thing.😃It was gud to see that Arjun finally put her insecurities to rest.👍🏼
The last bit was suppper cute.Aisha pregnant & then her telling Sameer that Mrs. Rawte is home again..😃😳

Thanks Avantika for the beautiful story.🤗🤗It was just flawless😃

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846182

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Unresed...

Check page 1😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: ...Mithuz...
Very Sorry My Sweet Poison...

I m late..

But Today I wont talk about the beautiful story you have written.. After reading this I have something else in mind..

Well, Avni di...

Your Works were the first and foremost reason that made me a part of this Forum (I wish "Ppl" read this😉)

And it were your this type of OS or SS that had hooked me here.

We had & have plenty of work works where Arjun is fightng something, or getting away from his past. etc etc...

But in-midst all these a few works where Arjun and Riya were a couple and in a married life or something else, was very refreshing.

I m so so so glad that U have drafted this OS in the similar fashion.
😃

I had missed this type of work and you brought it back..

Please continue giving more work in the similar fashion.
(Married, kids etc etc😉)

Oh yeah..

Thank you so much🤗

I love you My Sweet Poison❤️

Awww.. Thank you soo much.. 🤗

Yupp.. I get what you mean.. But then I started writing tragedy and drifted away from those type of stories.. And trust me it took me 3 days to come up with this one!!

Will bear that in mind.. Waise, married, kids toh nahi.. Test SR chalenge?! 😉😆

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50ShadesOfMe

@50ShadesOfMe

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Firstly very sorry for commenting late.. You know na college and stuff 😛

'Sweet Poison' Ahaan.. 😉

Btw, lovely OS. 😳 Though emotional, but still, superb! 😳
You guys are making me fall for arakshi more and more! 😉

Keep writing more stuff like this.. 😉

Love,
(Damn, I don't have nick name 😆 ) Chalo.. Apne wale se hi kaam chalati hoon.. Sneha 😛

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Deleted_Account

@Deleted_Account

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

hmmph??
well Avantu Madam?
what would u prefer?
Toasty cheescake with strawberry toppings and low fat yoghurt;
OR a huge blackforest sundae with some iced cappuchino...???😃

choose at ease,
and then i will let u know how good this was!!!
Ok!! No buttering!!(Honestly!!)
But this was seriously something!!!
just awsome!!!
Beautiphool!!!
me labhd it!!
cross me hearts!!!
wish they cud show THIS in the show!!!
mai to phir record karke 1000000 tyms dekhungi.
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ummah!!

*flying kissee*
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Akku

@.FieryPhoenix.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

It was so bloody amazing! How could you write something so well?! Thought of writing a novel? I will defo read it!

As for the fic, it was pure magic. The way events unfolded was just mind blowing.

In short, I loveddd it!!!!

PS I have the patience of a child who cannot wait so I can't read your FFs. But I would love to read your OS. Would you mind to send me a link of ur OSes. Please??