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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

Awesome update...😊😊

Sab ke sab missing ho rahe hai...😆😆😆

Precap toh Heart attack wala hai...

Plz continue soon...😊😊

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Farheen Shaikh

@ll-Farheen-ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

So my Boss Thought it was the best time to load me with extra work

😭😭😭

Me becahri nanhi se jaan ...and so many Kaam ...Iska update ab next month tak hi aayegi...

Sowwie guys ...but Damn the boss

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#254

Nice ... but very confusing update...

with scenes spanning over different time periods... it has raised many questions 😳😳 So below is my analysis + questions 😉

Scene 1 : Aisha looking for Arjun... and she is going to search him - Am I correct?

Scene 2: It must be hurting Arjun... what a sad way of getting promotion

Arjun is totally broken and only Aisha can help him gather himself 🤗

The way you have written Arjun's flashback... 👏👏👏👏... Super se bahut bahut bahut uparrr... I could visualize little kids playing musical chair race... Sam falling down... Arjun following him to be friends with him... their friendship was so adorable... which continued even after Mau came... even she couldn't come between them...😉... But this devastating news took his everything away... his love and his friend

" He left the house keys with me but that house haunts me Ayesha, every corner reminds me of them, the laughter, the fights and the pain. I feel suffocated there. I didnt now where else to go for it was only them for me always but still i have a request ..

Bee can I stay with you please, and he finally turned to face her , not stopping the tears in his eyes , not trying to mask his helplessness, not trying to show his weakness to maybe the only one who wouldn't judge him.

and she moved forward to embrace him "

I felt numb while reading this

Poor Arjun... he thinks he is a failure...

His dad 😲... so he has a tragic back story ... 😳... waiting for it.

But i'm really surprised and admire Arjun for his spirit... amidst of all this... he didn't forget about Aisha's feeling about Sam... he knows even she is worried about him...😊

And this is where he gets his spirit from ""I am alive, she has to be then "

But still he believes she belongs to Sam...😳

That entire Aisha-Arjun conversation was beautifully written... dil se dil tak ...

Scene 3: Scene 2 this was flashback of 1 year back when Aisha is out to find Arjun in Scene 1... am I right? Arjun was missing for 1 year...

Scene 4: So Arjun went on a pretence of Seminar to find Shama... And now Arjun missing...

What happened to Sam in this 1 year?

Did Arjun leave after Sam came back? Or Sam didn't come back at all and he too is still missing?

And timelines again confusing

Waiting for the next part to get the answers 😳😳

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 12 years ago

#255

wow
superb story
excellent
beautifully written
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

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Posted: 12 years ago

#256

just finished reading all the parts of this story and noticed that its quite some time that u have updated this story... its an amazing concept and absolutely marvelously written... have u discontinued the story??

if not, could you plz pm me whenever u update the next part... would love to read what happens next and how everything turns out to be what it was right at the beginning of ur story...😊

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: life93
hi sia di🤗... oh god!! was arjun crying ????😭😭😭 u kbow i can see him like that... well he loves shama...so much !!...but the confusion ... and aisha o care about sam😉😃...god ayeh arjun ko mood swings hote hai kya??😆😆... well so he is arjun😉... sam n mau left for naxalbari😲😲😲...now arjun also planned a undercover for naxalbari😲😲😲...yeh kya kamm tha jo heartattack bhi de diya??? plzzz update soon !!...sorry couldn't cmnt on last part😳...🤗

Heylo!!!

Abhi toh aur bhi crying hai yaar 😆😆

Update hazir hai 😉

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: Payal_156
welll ini jaldi update oye hoye.
omg bhaiya missing
di ptani wat u store for us scared
awesome update.
haila bhaiya crying
me too hv tears
aww d person he cared for always left him alone
well u promised dat sam bro back wid bang waiting
ayesha n arjun bro steal d update
beautiful
perfecto sng

maar dala
to read n watch undercover mission my fav genre di
thanks fr d pm dj
lov it..

Hi Payal ~~

Howz college ..keeping u busy

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#259

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Sia, yeh tune kya kiya?
itna emotional kardiya ke rona aa raha hai!

Bee-OP friendship...can it get any better, pure and serene? awesome! love them!

Arjun ro raha hai...and Sam has gone too...

Aisha bechaari...ab Arjun is missing too...what all she would take?

Life is such an irony na?

Brilliantly written dear!

loved it

cont soon!

Vidzi !!!!!!!!!!!!

Haye di mat roo ...!!! abhi toh aur rona hai 😆😆😆

Aisha wonder women hai sab sambhal legi

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Sia

@satanslove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#260

Originally posted by: IshitaRocks015
ohh goshh..
it was such an emotional update!😭

arjun..crying..😭😭

me also cryin..!!

ohh!! he wants 2 find mau...!!😊

misssinng???!!

kaha???

didz??????

aise point pe cliffhanger??

mereko tension ho rha hai,,😕

update soon...!!

sia di..u r fab!!